仁爱英语八年级上册Unit-2-Topic-3-Section-C-写作课件.ppt

1、 英语英语课题课题:Writing English How to keep healthyIf youre happy and you know it,clap your hands(clap,clap).If youre happy and you know it clap your hands.(clap,clap).If youre happy and you know it,and you really want to show it.If youre happy and you know it,clap your hands.(clap,clap).If youre happy an

2、d you know it,stomp your feet(stomp,stomp).If youre happy and you know it stomp your feet(stomp,stomp).If youre happy and you know it,and you really want to show it.If youre happy and you know it,stomp your feet(stomp,stomp).Year(年份年份)The new number of cancer(癌症新增人数癌症新增人数)Cancer deaths(癌症死亡人数癌症死亡人数)

3、20082,820,00010,030,000201030,930,00019,560,000201542,920,0002,800,000123We can keep healthy in 3 ways.Choose one and discuss in groupsSportsEating habitsMoodTalk about the topicbasketballsportsmakestrongbe good for my popular all over the worldonce a dayEating habitsWe should/had better because its

4、 good forWe shouldnt because its bad forMoodWe should smile to life.When we are unhappy,we can.Talk about how to keep healthy with your group members.How to write better?Here are some standards（标准）（标准）you can refer to(参考参考)。Make up a main structure(构建骨架构建骨架)How to Keep Healthy I think we should eat

5、healthy food like vegetables and fruits.They are good for our health.And we shouldnt eat junk food.Its necessary for us to take exercise.Exercise will keep us active and strong.I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy.If we are unhappy and worri

6、ed about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.Cover all the focal points.覆盖所有要点覆盖所有要点Scores(分数分数)_8-10 For exampleUse proper conjunctions.适当运用了语句间连接成分适当运用了语句间连接成分 (加加1-2分）分）Scores _9-12 A.Finally B.First C.ThenABCUse proper conjunctions.适当运用了语句间连接成分适当运用了语句间连接成分 (加加1-2分）分）How to Keep Hea

7、lthy I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits.They are good for our health.And we shouldnt eat junk food.Its necessary for us to take exercise.Exercise will keep us active and strong.I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy.

8、If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.Add a good beginning and ending.有好的开头和结尾（加有好的开头和结尾（加1-2分）分）As we all know,its very important to keep healthy.But do you know how to keep healthy?Here are 3 rules.I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables a

9、nd fruits.They are good for our health.And we shouldnt eat junk food.Its necessary for us to take exercise.Exercise will keep us active and strong.I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy.If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk

10、 to our parents and teachers.In order to keep fit,lets follow the rules.How to Keep HealthyScores_10-14 As we all know,its very important to keep healthy.But do you know how to keep healthy?Here are 3 rules.I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits.They are good for our health.An

11、d we shouldnt eat junk food.Its necessary for us to take exercise.Exercise will keep us active and strong.I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy.If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.In order to

12、keep fit,lets follow the rules.Be happy to be healthy.How to Keep Healthy要点、连词开头结尾美句Scores _11-16 Add some details or English mottoes.句式多样或有细节描写和美句。句式多样或有细节描写和美句。(加加1-2分）分）当我们在写作和评价他人作文时，要注意以下几点：要点提示：要点提示：1.保持健康应该注意哪些方面？2.关于这几方面具体应该怎样做？要求：要求：1.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。Hello,my dea

13、r friends.As we all know,it is very important for us to keep fit.How to Keep Healthy思路点拨：思路点拨：审题：时态为：审题：时态为：人称为：人称为：体裁为体裁为：应用文应用文 要点：要点：1.保持健康应该注意哪些方面？保持健康应该注意哪些方面？2.关于这几方面具体应该怎样做？关于这几方面具体应该怎样做？条理：连词，逻辑。条理：连词，逻辑。结构：好的开头和结尾。结构：好的开头和结尾。重点突出：通过细节描写或添加美句等。重点突出：通过细节描写或添加美句等。一般现在时一般现在时第一人称第一人称/第二人称第二人称 assessment in groupsBe happy to be healthy.想健康就得快乐想健康就得快乐 Thank you for listening!