初中英语（2021中考作文热门话题）话题5--健康与安全课件.pptx

1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵写作技巧写作技巧5 巧用短语巧用短语话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全河南近河南近1010年中招真题书面表达未对年中招真题书面表达未对“健康与安全健康与安全”类进行类进行考查。结合全国真题可知，考查。结合全国真题可知，“健康与安全健康与安全”属于高频话题，该属于高频话题，该话题通常有以下命题角度：从校园、交通、家庭、网络等方话题通常有以下命题角度：从校园、交通、家庭、网络等方面谈日常生活中如何保证自身安全；从饮食、运动等方面谈面谈日常生活中如何保证自身安全；从饮食、运动等方面谈健康的重要性及如何保持健康；如何保护视力。健康的重要

2、性及如何保持健康；如何保护视力。命题探索话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全教材链接话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 (2019南充改编南充改编)近年来，学生意外伤害事故频近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有我们该如何有效地自我保护效地自我保护，免受伤害呢？根据以下要点和要求用英语写一，免受伤害呢？根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。篇短文。典例剖析典例剖析审主题：审主题：保护保护自我自我的措施的措施审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称审文体：说明文审文体：说明文一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句2020 新变

3、化新变化话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全1.要点：要点：1)安全的重要性；安全的重要性；2)你认为应该你认为应该如何做如何做去保证安全；去保证安全；2.要求：要求：1)文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；2)词数词数100左右。左右。时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 1.Accidents often happen around us.So we must pay much attention to safety.2.Life is so valuable that we should take

4、 it seriously and never waste time.1角度角度安全安全/健康的重要性健康的重要性一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 3.It is true that health comes first on the way to success and you should pay more attention to it.4.We all know that it is very important to keep healthy.Without it,everything is meaningless.一阶

5、审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 1.如今人们开始比以往更注重他们的健康。如今人们开始比以往更注重他们的健康。_2.健康如此珍贵以至于我们每个人都应该珍惜它。健康如此珍贵以至于我们每个人都应该珍惜它。_Nowadays people are beginning to pay more attention to their health than ever before.Health is so valuable that everyone is supposed to value it.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 仿仿 写写 话题话题5

6、 健康与安全健康与安全 3.我们应该记住游泳的时候安全第一。我们应该记住游泳的时候安全第一。_4.对我们青少年来说保证安全很重要。对我们青少年来说保证安全很重要。_We must remember that safety always comes first while swimming.Its very important for us teenagers to keep safe.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全1.We can shout to our parents and let them know about the danger.(用动词不

7、定式表目的升格用动词不定式表目的升格)We can shout to our parents to let them know about the danger.七七(下下)Unit 12 P712.Sixteenyearolds shouldnt be allowed to drive.(用宾语从句升格用宾语从句升格)I dont think sixteenyearolds should be allowed to drive.九九(全全)Unit 7 P492角度角度如何自我保护如何自我保护一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全3.W

8、e must remember swimming alone is dangerous.(用用it作形式作形式主语升格主语升格)We must remember its dangerous to swim alone.4.We should be careful when we make friends online.(用用be supposed to升格升格)We are supposed to be careful when we make friends online.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全5.We need to learn how t

9、o protect ourselves and stay away from danger.(用用in short升格升格)In short,we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全1.You should keep the bathroom floor dry,or you may fall down.(用动词不定式表目的升格用动词不定式表目的升格)_2.We can call the police for help when

10、 we are in danger at home alone.(用宾语从句升格用宾语从句升格)_You should keep the bathroom floor dry to avoid falling down.I think we can call the police for help when we are in danger at home alone.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 升升 格格 话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全3.Crowding or pushing each other when we go upstairs or downstairs

11、 at school is dangerous.(用用it作形式主语升格作形式主语升格)_4.When we surf on the Internet,we shouldnt tell others about our personal information.(用用be supposed to升格升格)_Its dangerous to crowd or push each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.When we surf on the Internet,we arent supposed to tell other

12、s about our personal information.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全5.As middle school students,we should learn to protect ourselves.(用用in short升格升格)_6.We should wait until the traffic light turns green whenever we cross the street.(用用be supposed to升格升格)_In short,as middle school students,we should

13、 learn to protect ourselves.We are supposed to wait until the traffic light turns green whenever we cross the street.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 1.We think the best way to relax is through exercise.We think the best way to relax is through exercise.It is healthy for the mind and the body.八八

14、(上上)Unit 2 P132.You need to take breaks away from the computer.You need to take breaks away from the computer because you played computer games all weekend.八八(下下)Unit 1 P23角度角度如何保持健康如何保持健康一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全3.Jane has a lot of good habits.Jane has a lot of good habits.She

15、 drinks juice and never stays up late.八八(上上)Unit 2 P154.A balanced diet and regular exercise can help us.A balanced diet and regular exercise can help us keep healthy both physically and mentally.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全5.Staying up to study is harmful to your health.Staying up to study

16、is harmful to your health.It will affect your study the following day for lack of energy.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 1.You need to keep a balanced diet.(扩写具体方法扩写具体方法)_2.We shouldnt eat food that has gone bad.(扩写原因扩写原因)_3.We can play sports.(扩写想法扩写想法)_You need to keep a balanced diet.Remembe

17、r to have meals regularly and eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food.We shouldnt eat food that has gone bad because it will do harm to our health.We can play sports.I think sports can make us stronger and healthier.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 扩扩 写写 话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全4.We should keep ourselve

18、s happy.(扩写原因扩写原因)_5.You should have breakfast every morning.(扩写原因扩写原因)_We should keep ourselves happy.A happy man lives longer than a sad man.You should have breakfast every morning.It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 6.We shouldnt eat j

19、unk food.(扩写原因扩写原因)_7.We can drink a cup of milk every day.(扩写想法扩写想法)_We shouldnt eat junk food because it is bad for our health.We can drink a cup of milk every day.It helps us to be energetic.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全1.Its not right to keep your eyes working for such a long time.2.It is

20、 believed that proper reading plays an important role in eye health.3.Dont read in bed and use as few electronic products as possible.4角度角度如何保护视力如何保护视力一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全4.Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot.亮点词汇替换：亮点词汇替换：had better,keep away

21、from,the most important part一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 1.长时间用手机或电脑是不合适的。长时间用手机或电脑是不合适的。_2.此外，做眼保健操在放松我们疲劳的双眼方面起了重要的作用。此外，做眼保健操在放松我们疲劳的双眼方面起了重要的作用。_ Its not right to use the mobile phones or computers for a long time.Besides,doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing our tired

22、eyes.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 仿仿 写写 话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全3.你可以每学期做一个眼部检查来确保你的眼睛处于健康状态。你可以每学期做一个眼部检查来确保你的眼睛处于健康状态。_4.记得走出教室和你同学玩或在课间做一些体育锻炼。记得走出教室和你同学玩或在课间做一些体育锻炼。_You can have your eyes examined every term to make sure your eyes stay as healthy as possible.Remember to go out of the classroom to play wit

23、h your classmates or do some physical exercise during the breaks.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全1.Old habits die hard.旧习难改。旧习难改。八八(上上)Unit 2 P132.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。一天一苹果，医生远离我。3.He who has health has hope.留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。4.Health is the first wealth.健康是第一财

24、富。健康是第一财富。5.Early to bed,early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。俗语谚语俗语谚语速记速记一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全6.Life lies in movement.生命在于运动。生命在于运动。7.Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body.读书健脑，读书健脑，运动强身。运动强身。8.Safety comes first.安全第一。安全第一。9.Wal

25、king is mans best medicine.行走是人的最佳良药。行走是人的最佳良药。一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全As teenagers,we know it is important to keep safe on our way to school and home.As for this problem,Id like to share my advice about keeping safe.Above all,_(建议建议1).Second,on our way to school,_(建议建议2).its necessary t

26、o be careful when we make new friends/we should ask police for help immediately when in danger/.如何保证自身安全如何保证自身安全 it is wise to walk together with classmates/dont walk alone/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段 语段练习语段练习1话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 And whats more,_(建议建议3).Then,_(建议建议4).wed better not stay outside for a l

27、ong time/we should pay attention to the traffic lights/.we are supposed to know some basic ways to keep ourselves safe/never tell our personal information to strangers/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全In order to keep healthy,I _(方法方法1).Every meal I keep a balanced diet,and I _(方法方法2),which _(原因

28、原因).In my spare time,I _(方法方法3),get up early and run for an hour every day/exercise every morning/.eat more vegetables and fruit/never eat junk food/.is good for my health/does good to my health/.如何保持健康如何保持健康一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句many activities/usually play sports/.take part in 语段练习语段练习2话题话题5 健康与安全健康

29、与安全such as _(举例举例).Whats more,I also _(方法方法4)because it _(原因原因)like reading in my free time/enjoy listening to some music in my spare time/.swimming,dancing and travelling with friends/playing basketball and football/.can make me peaceful and relaxed/can sweep my stress away/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话

30、题5 健康与安全健康与安全How to protect our eyes?Its wrong _(方法方法1)without having a rest.We are supposed to pay attention to eye health and _(方法方法2)every day.Whats more,wed better not read _(方法方法3).Last but not least,wed better _(方法方法4)very often.to keep your eyes working for a long time/to use our eyes too lon

31、g/.如何保护视力如何保护视力do eyeprotecting exercises/do eye exercisesin strong or low light/in bed/.do outdoor activities/see green plants/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 语段练习语段练习3话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全Many dangers happen because of carelessness.As a student,keeping safe is of great importance.Here Id like to share my ideas o

32、n keeping safe.First of all,were supposed to obey the traffic rules.When the lights are red,we shouldnt cross the road.Second,remember not to tell strangers about your personal information while surfing the Internet.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全Whats more,dont go out with friends withou

33、t parents permission.Whenever we are in danger,please ask parents,teachers or police for help.After all,life is important to everyone.We should take safety seriously and learn something about selfprotection.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位位一切也都失去了意义。请以一切

34、也都失去了意义。请以“How to keep healthy？”为为题写一篇英语短文。题写一篇英语短文。要求：要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2.词数词数100左右。左右。写作练兵写作练兵2020 新变化新变化话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全写作练兵写作练兵How to keep healthy?_话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全How to keep healthy?_写作练兵写作练兵As far as we know,health is the first step to success.Here are some ways to keep hea

35、lthy.Firstly,we must have enough healthy food.Breakfast is necessary.It gives energy to our body.Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.Secondly,its necessary to do exercise.It helps us keep active and strong.话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全_写作练兵写作练兵Thirdly,never stay up late.If we cant get

36、enough sleep,the whole body will work slowly.As the saying goes,“Early to bed,early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.”Lastly,learning to reduce pressure is also important for our health.Follow these ways,and we will be healthy!话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全 利用不定式短语、介词利用不定式短语、介词(短语短语)或形容词短语等来增加句子或形容词短语

37、等来增加句子的句式，从而使句子表达更加多样化。的句式，从而使句子表达更加多样化。巧用短语话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全教材链接1.利用不定式短语：利用不定式短语：My parents encouraged me.They told me to believe in myself.My parents encouraged me to believe in myself.2.利用介词利用介词(短语短语)：You can write well by reading more.You should read more in order to write well.3.利用形容词短语：利用形容词短语

38、：We got to school after a threehour trip.We were tired but happy.We got to school after a threehour trip,tired but happy巧用短语句式连接范例句式连接范例 话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全教材链接1.他在暑期做了一份兼职工作来支付自己的学费。他在暑期做了一份兼职工作来支付自己的学费。_2.我擅长与同学友好相处。我擅长与同学友好相处。_He did a parttime job to pay for his education fees during the summer hol

39、iday.I am good at getting on well with my classmates.小试牛刀小试牛刀 巧用短语话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全教材链接3.现在很多衣服在促销，漂亮但不贵。现在很多衣服在促销，漂亮但不贵。_4.众所周知，志愿者在帮助做这些活动中扮演了重要的角色。众所周知，志愿者在帮助做这些活动中扮演了重要的角色。_A lot of clothes are on sale now,beautiful but not expensive.As is known to all,volunteers play an important role in helping

40、 do these activities.巧用短语话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全教材链接5.此外，我们不被允许独自游泳，尤其在深水中。此外，我们不被允许独自游泳，尤其在深水中。_6.为了让我们保持安全，我们学校不允许我们游泳。为了让我们保持安全，我们学校不允许我们游泳。_Besides,we are not allowed to swim alone,especially in the deep water.In order to make us keep safe,our school doesnt allow us to swim.巧用短语话题话题5 健康与安全健康与安全教材链接7.不论生活多么艰难，她从来不放弃。不论生活多么艰难，她从来不放弃。_8.他喜欢交朋友，并且一直和他们相处得很好。他喜欢交朋友，并且一直和他们相处得很好。_No matter how hard the life is,she never gives up.He likes making friends,and always gets on well with them.巧用短语