高考真题短文改错15篇解析(DOC 14页).doc

1、竞争力1对1 英语学科个性化教学辅导教案 学生年级上课地点第 次授课授课时间年 月 日 星期 学科老师学顾老师教学课题教学目标教学重、难点高考短文改错真题15篇一、Correction 1(2014课标全国)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Near

2、ly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy a

3、nd taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!二、Correction 2(2014课标全国)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文

4、,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We did

5、nt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings

6、. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.三、Correction 3(2014浙江)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1

7、.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone

8、in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered th

9、e strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.四、Correction 4(2014辽宁)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限

10、一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute

11、 shes outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate ou

12、r apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose五、Correction 5(2014四川)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。H

13、ello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly

14、. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.六、Correction(2013新课标II)短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改

15、你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. Have tea in the late a

16、fternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got po

17、pular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.七、Correction【2013陕西卷】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的

18、词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about hal

19、f an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barb

20、ecued the fish. It was delicious.八、Correction【2013四川卷】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；2. 每处错误及其修改均公限一词；3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficu

21、lty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were wa

22、rned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didnt cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?九、Correction （2013辽宁卷)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修

23、改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him. That is which other teachers

24、say.Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we misse

25、d him.十、Correction （2011浙江卷)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on parti

26、cular Id always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know Id done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy

27、 slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.十一、Correction （2009.全国卷I）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。After five years away in

28、my hometown, I find that the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school were gone. There exist now a park that has a small river run through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and Zhong

29、shan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle school is still there. 十二、Correction（2009.全国卷II）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地

30、方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hi, Susan.Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was hold up on my way back.

31、 Just before I turned corner of park street. I happened see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all hope you understand.Thank you!Li Ling十三、Correction（200

32、9.陕西卷）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when he let a bicycle ran right into

33、 him. He never watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. But he is having a nice time here. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him lots of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losin

34、g any time from school because he is busy study what he has missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks. 十四、Correction（2009.辽宁卷）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词

35、。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find

36、the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I am when I rode to school on my own bicycle. 十五、Correction（2009.浙江卷）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:

37、在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet throu

38、gh. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to giveit to everyone else. It was a lesson to

39、 us that it was possible give without expect anything in return. 一、答案第一句:beforeago此处讲述的是过去发生的事情,和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before常和完成时连用。第一句:byofwith the help of.在的帮助下,为固定短语。第二句:yearyears句中year是可数名词,前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。第二句:hadhave时间状语since then 通常和现在完成时连用,而不是过去完成时。第三句:在result前加aas a result 结果,为固定短语。第三句:somewhere

40、everywhere根据句意可知是“到处都有”,所以用everywhere。第四句:tastetasty本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表语,所以要用形容词。第五句:muchmany根据前面的be动词are和后面的them可知应是代替可数名词复数的many。第六句:删掉but/butyet引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用,但是可以和副词yet连用。所以可以删掉but,也可以把but改为yet。第七句:wonderfullywonderful修饰名词时应用形容词。二、答案语篇解读本文为记叙文,题材是学校生活类。作者描述了自己心目中理想的校园。第二句:They

41、There表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应使用there be句型。第三句:didntdont全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didnt改为dont。第三句:manymuchhomework是不可数名词,故应用much修饰。第四句:withfor表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于)时,应使用介词for。第五句:第一个hourhours“一个半小时”要说one and a half hours。第六句:looklooks主语My dream school(我梦想中的学校)是单数,其谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式。第七句:删掉第一个theall kinds of(各种各样的)后直接加可

42、数名词复数或不可数名词,不用再加冠词。第八句:satsitWe can lie.,or (can) sit.第八句:listening后加tolisten是不及物动词,接宾语时要加介词to。第九句:helpfullyhelpfuland连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully改为形容词helpful。三、答案1.第二句:删掉had。此处指过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。2.第二句:noisenoisy。此处作表语,应该是形容词。3.第三句:comescame。此处是过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。4.第四句:butand。此处是顺承关系。5.第五句:在searching后加for。搜

43、寻某个东西应该用search for。6.第五句:hisits/the。此处指票的主人。7.第六句:athe。此处特指丢了的票。8.第七句:previouspreviously。此处应该用副词形式。9.第八句:strangersstranger。此处指的是票的主人,只有一个人,所以用单数。10.第九句:onin。此处是固定词组in need。四、答案1.第一段:去掉bothers后的tobother sb.打扰某人。2.第二段第一句:timetimes考查名词复数。several times好几次。3.第二段第二句:understandingunderstand根据its difficult

44、to do sth.句型可知。4.第二段第三句:havehas考查主谓一致。the early morning barking为单数,所以谓语动词也应为单数形式。5.第二段第四句:BesideBesides此处应为副词besides而不是介词beside。6.第二段第四句:average前的aan考查冠词。average为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。7.第二段第五句:startsstarted考查时态。因为是今天早晨发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。8.第二段第六句:closelyclose考查形容词。形容词close作表语。9.第三段:ouryour考查物主代词。10.第三段:在fi

45、gure后加out根据动词短语figure out(想出)可知答案。五、答案1.第二句:withabouttalk with sb.和某人交谈;talk about sth.谈论某事。2.第二句:gogoes主语是a fire alarm,谓语动词要用单数形式。3.第三句:在wait后面加forwait for sb.to do sth.等待某人做某事。4.第四句:classmateclassmatesclassmate是可数名词,根据语境可知不止有一个同学,所以要用复数形式。5.第五句:tryingtryand连接的是并列的两个祈使句,前面是表示否定的祈使句,后面应是肯定的祈使句,所以要用动词原形。6.第五句:calmlycalm此处作系动词remain的表语,所以应用形容词,和quiet并列。7.第六句:athe此处应该是特指上文提到的火灾。8.第七句:usyou人称代词错误。前文用的是人称代词you,所以此处也应该是you。9.第八句:删掉when引导词使用重复,that已经引导宾语从句,所以when多余,而且不符合语境。10.第八句:andor此处应该是选择关系而不是并列关系。