高考英语记叙文写作教学课件.ppt

1、假定你是假定你是TOM,请根据下面的图画内请根据下面的图画内容写一篇日记容写一篇日记.1.Style:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.Go over the requirementA diary past tenseI Tuesday December 6,2005 Fine I had a very bad day yesterday.Everything go wrong.In the morning,my alarm clock didnt ring so I woke up an hour late.I am in such a hurry that I b

2、urned my hand when I was cooking breakfast.Correct any mistakeswent wasThen I run out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus,but of course I miss it.I was very unhappy because I know my teacher got angry if anyone was late for class.So I ran three miles to the school.But when I arrived there in the end,

3、I find that it was SundayCorrect any mistakesranknewfoundmissed 根据下根据下列图画中列图画中 Tom Tom 骑自骑自行车的经行车的经历，用英历，用英语写一篇语写一篇故事。故事。短文要写短文要写得连贯、得连贯、完整。完整。Sample 1 1.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.Go over the requirementA story（a traffic accident)past tenseTom,he Tom/ride a bike Along the street/road A few

4、 days ago/the other day/one day2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)A car/run fast to/run into him Tom/fall off his bike Suddenly 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)The driver/frightened/run away 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)A woman/remember the nu

5、mber of the car The police The driver/catch2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Key wordsKey wordssentencessentencesA woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car.She called the police.The driver was caught.ride a bike/run fast tosee the accident/remember the number/call

6、 the police /be caught be frightened /run awayhit him/fall off his bikeWhen Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.The car hit him.And he fell off his bike.The driver was so frightened that he ran away.Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.The car hit him and he fell o

7、ff his bike.The driver was frightened.He ran away.A woman saw the accident.She remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman.The driver was caught.Passage 13.Writing a passage The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but

8、it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and tol

9、d him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.passage 2 The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frigh

10、tened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.Pass

11、age 2 Using connectives1.并列并列 2.转折转折 3.因果因果 4.其他其他and,bothand but,however,though,while so,therefore,because when,suddenly,immediately,as soon as,unfortunately,sothat,finally,as a result,What was worseGo over the requirement（person,tense,style）Summary:How to write a picture story?Go over the pictures

12、（who,what,where,when,why,how)Write a passage（using connectives and adding details and specific information.)点题（时间、地点、点题（时间、地点、人物、事件人物、事件）事件的起因事件的起因 事件的发展事件的发展/过程过程 事件的结果事件的结果 扣题扣题 2004年辽宁年辽宁 下面下面4幅图片描述的是幅图片描述的是星期天上午星期天上午在在中山公中山公园园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的息用英语为你校的“英语园地英语园地”写一篇短文写一篇

13、短文。注意：短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。注意：短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整；短文的内容要连贯、完整；短文单词数：短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中的单左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）；词不计入总词数）；参考词汇：货摊参考词汇：货摊stand(n.);抢夺抢夺 snatch(v.);逮捕逮捕 arrest(v.)1点题（时间、地点）点题（时间、地点）星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁2事件的起因事件的起因年轻妇女的包被抢年轻妇女的包被抢3事件的发展事件的发展/过程过程人们追赶抢包者人们追赶抢包者；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢；长排椅上坐

14、着一位老人；抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒4事件的结果事件的结果两名警察逮捕抢劫者：两名警察逮捕抢劫者：5扣题扣题妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智审题审题描述过去个人经历描述过去个人经历第三人称第三人称4.主题：主题：3.人称：人称：1.体裁：体裁：2.时态：时态：记叙文体记叙文体 一般过去时一般过去时星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊 One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand 年轻妇女的包被抢年轻妇女的包被抢

15、 snatch her handbag away 人们追赶抢包者人们追赶抢包者 run after the snatcher 在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人 There be sb.sitting on the bench nearby提纲提纲 从老人身旁跑过从老人身旁跑过 Run past the old man 拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间；拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间；pick up his umbrella;put it between the two legs of the snatcher;摔一大跟斗摔一大跟斗 fall down on the ground he

16、avily 两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者 Came in a police car;arrest sb.感谢老人的帮助感谢老人的帮助 Thank sb.for his help 称赞老人的机智称赞老人的机智 Praise the old man for his cleverness 1、几天前、几天前 the other day;several days ago 2、使人感到意外、使人感到意外 to ones surprise 3、就在这时、就在这时 at that moment;at that time常用关联词常用关联词 副词：副词：suddenly,unfortuna

17、tely,suddenly,unfortunately,luckily,immediately luckily,immediately as a result as a result so/suchthat so/suchthat two hours later,two hours later,and and 1.It was(天气天气)2.While sb.was doing/sb.was about to do when 3.sb.did and 4.see/hear sb.Doing5.with the help of sb.一些可能用到的句型和词组一些可能用到的句型和词组One Sun

18、day morning,many people went to Zhongshan Park.As it was very hot,some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream.Suddenly a woman at the stand shouted because a young man behind her snatched her handbag away.Seeing this,immediately a few people began to run after him.However,the snatc

19、her ran so fast that it was not easy to catch him.Luckily,there was an old man sitting on a bench nearby.As the snatcher was running past him,the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs.The young man cried and fell down on the ground hard.A few minutes later two

20、policemen came in a police car and arrested him.The woman thanked the old man,and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.Homework finish your writing and hand it in tomorrow Clear idea Correct grammar Complete passage Beautiful language Beautiful handwriting What is good writing?Writing a story Think about the story you want to tell.Think about the purpose and focus of your story.Why are you telling the story?Make a list of all the things that happen.Add details and specific information.Tell the reader what things look like and what people say.TIPS