中考英语作文指导-旅游交通课件.ppt

1、【话题解读话题解读】旅游交通包含两个方面的话题：旅游交通包含两个方面的话题：旅游旅游和交通。旅游话题通常涉及景点介绍、和交通。旅游话题通常涉及景点介绍、旅游计划、行程安排、游记等；交通话旅游计划、行程安排、游记等；交通话题通常涉及个人出行方式、各种交通方题通常涉及个人出行方式、各种交通方式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关系等。系等。有的中考作文会同时涉及这两个有的中考作文会同时涉及这两个话题。话题。【真题回放真题回放】在英语课上，老师组织了在英语课上，老师组织了“A trip to the countryside or to the city”的话题讨的话题讨

2、论。请根据小组讨论结果，写一篇英语论。请根据小组讨论结果，写一篇英语短文，介绍两者的不同特点，并写出你短文，介绍两者的不同特点，并写出你的选择与理由。的选择与理由。CountrysideCityrelaxing,fresh air.not easy to take public transportation.exciting.crowded,expensive.注意：注意：1)短文必须包含记录表中的信息，并短文必须包含记录表中的信息，并适当发挥；适当发挥；2)文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息；信息；3)词数词数80100，所给的文章开头供选，所给的文章开头供选择

3、，不计入词数。择，不计入词数。In the English class,we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city._(2016 浙江丽水浙江丽水)【真题分析真题分析】通过审题可知该写作任务要求对比通过审题可知该写作任务要求对比“a trip to the countryside”和和“a trip to thecity”，介绍两者的不同特点。介绍时要分，介绍两者的不同特点。介绍时要分别从优、缺点两个方面来写。表格中已经别从优、缺点两个方面来写。表格中已经列出了比较的方面

4、，包括心情感受、空气列出了比较的方面，包括心情感受、空气质量、交通状况、购物消费等，写作时应质量、交通状况、购物消费等，写作时应围绕这几个方面重点阐述并有一定程度的围绕这几个方面重点阐述并有一定程度的发挥。最后记得要给出自己的选择并陈述发挥。最后记得要给出自己的选择并陈述理由。理由。【标准范文标准范文】In the English class,we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city.Having a trip to the countryside can be rel

5、axing.You can go fishing or hiking there.And the air is fresh.But its not easy to take public transportation in the countryside.Having a trip to the city can be anexciting experience.You can go to different places and try different kinds of food.But it can be crowded in the city and things there are

6、 usually expensive.Id like to have a trip to the city.Why?Because I like shopping and I want tobuy a lot of things.【高分突破高分突破】In the English class,we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city.Having a trip to the countryside can be a relaxing experience.And the

7、freshair is good for your health.However,you might not have many choices intransportation.A trip to the city also has its advantages and disadvantages.If you like shopping,its very exciting to wander in large malls.However,you might have to spend a lot because things are expensive in the city.And th

8、e traffic jam might let you down.As for me,a trip to the countryside is surely my top choice.I like places where I can get close to nature and breathe fresh air.【高分揭秘高分揭秘】1.该习作要点齐全，段落层次清晰，语该习作要点齐全，段落层次清晰，语言地道优美言地道优美；2.作者在第三段用了一句作者在第三段用了一句A trip to the city also has its advantages anddisadvantages,起到

9、了承上启下的作用；起到了承上启下的作用；同时同时also,however,and 等词的使用也等词的使用也使习作读起来连贯、流畅使习作读起来连贯、流畅；3.作者在结尾部分表达自己的选择和作者在结尾部分表达自己的选择和理由时，话语简明扼要，理由时，话语简明扼要，my top choice 更是用得准确而贴切更是用得准确而贴切。【素材积累素材积累】1.词汇词汇 旅游：旅游：go on a trip,take a trip,place of interest,relaxing,be impressed with,exciting 交通：交通：crowded,red light,traffic rul

10、es,traffic jam,public transportation 2.句子句子Traveling makes us get close to nature.Traffic in cities is getting heavier and heavier.Our schedule for today is to visit the GreatWall.I cant wait to share the fantastic experience with my friends.Traveling is a great way to learn about yourself and the w

11、orld.【写作任务写作任务】目前，家长开车接送孩子上学已经成目前，家长开车接送孩子上学已经成为一个普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不为一个普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不一，家长们也有自己的看法。一，家长们也有自己的看法。观点观点1：省时省时;安全安全;提供更多与孩子交流的机提供更多与孩子交流的机会。会。观点观点2：学校周围更拥挤；最近发生了：学校周围更拥挤；最近发生了几起交通事故；污染的空气对身体有不几起交通事故；污染的空气对身体有不良影响。良影响。你的观点：你的观点：(必须用必须用2至至3 句话作适当发句话作适当发 挥挥)注意：注意：1.文章必须包括所有内容要点，要求语文章必须包括所有内容要点，要

12、求语句通顺，意思连贯；句通顺，意思连贯；2.词数：词数：80 词左右词左右(文章的开头已给出文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数不计入总词数)；3.文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。Nowadays its common for parents to drive their children to school and backhome,which has caused a heated discussion.Some parents think _(2016 湖北随州湖北随州)【参考范文参考范文】Nowadays its common for parents to

13、 drive their children to school and back home,which has caused a heated discussion.Some parents think it saves time and is a safe choice for their children.They also believe that it offers them more chances to communicate with their children,so theycan get along well with their children.However,othe

14、r parents think it makes traffic near schools worse.As is known,there have been several traffic accidents recently.Whats worse,carspollute the air and that is bad for health.I think we are old enough to go to school by ourselves.We should take public transportation as mush aspossible,which will not only help reduce air pollution,but also improve the traffic situation.