高中英语作文句子的扩写优秀公开课课件.ppt

1、作文句子的扩写作文句子的扩写 罗湖区 滨河中学 张玉梅 句子的充实句子的充实 一篇好文章必然是内容充实，形式多样的。学生尽可能避免写出内容简单，形式单调的句子。我们可以朝以下几个方面努力。1.加强细节描写的意识。I like him very much.-I like him very much because he is honest.Mr.Li Ping gave us a lecture in the hall on Friday.-Mr.Li Ping gave us a lecture in the hall on Friday in order to help students l

2、earn English better.2.对所表达的句子加以补充说明。It is dangerous to walk home alone.-It is dangerous to walk home alone,especially in the dark.I prefer to go to Shanghai by plane than by train.-I prefer to go to Shanghai by plane than by train,because it is much faster and more comfortable.3.对所表达的内容适当地加以评论，充实句子。

3、Mr.Li will give us a report.-Mr.Li will give us a report,which will influence us a lot.-Mr.Li will give us a report,which will have an influence on our study.练习。将下列句子扩展。1.you should stop smoking now.2.Nowadays,cooperating with people is very important in the society.With the rapid development of our

4、 society,cooperating with people is very important,if we want to complete our work more effectively.在学习、生活和工作中，学会与人合作是非常重要的。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇五句话作文。为何与人合作1.现在社会必备2.节省时间和精力3.更多机会互相学习与谁合作与喜欢的人合作心情愉快，同甘共苦与不喜欢的人合作学会容忍，努力挖掘其优点你的看法倾听别人的意见，有礼貌地指出别人的错误。page 319 Nowadays,cooperating with people is necessary.I

5、t can save us time and energy and give us more chances to learn from each other.If we cooperate with someone whom we like,we will be very happy and share happiness and sadness.If we cooperate with someone whom we dislike,we should learn to bear him and try to discover his advantages.We should listen

6、 to others opinion and point out others mistakes.Nowadays,cooperating with people is a must in the society.It can save us time and energy and give us more chances to learn from each other.1.we must learn to cooperate with others,if we want to complete our work more efficiently.2.Not only can operati

7、on save us a lot of time but also we can learn from each other.With the rapid development of our society,If we cooperate with someone who we like,we will be very happy and share happiness and sadness.If we cooperate with someone who we dislike,we should learn to bear him and try to discover his adva

8、ntages.3.We will be lucky enough to cooperate with someone whom we dislike,because we can share our happiness and sadness.4.it will be very difficult to cooperate with someone whom we dislike,because we should learn to put up with his shortcomings and try our best to discover his advantages.On the c

9、ontrary,We should listen to others opinion,not force our ideas on others and point out others mistakes politely.5.we should listen to others opinion and point out others mistakes politely.5.As far as I am concerned,to be a good partner,we should listen to others opinion and point out others mistakes

10、 politely,because only in this way can we cooperate with others happily and efficiently.As far as I am concerned,to be a good partner,Nowadays,cooperating with people is necessary.It can save us time and energy and give us more chances to learn from each other.If we cooperate with someone whom we li

11、ke,we will be very happy and share happiness and sadness.If we cooperate with someone whom we dislike,we should learn to bear him and try to discover his advantages.We should listen to others opinion,not force our ideas on others and point out others mistakes.1.With the rapid development of our soci

12、ety,we must learn to cooperate with others,if we want to complete our work more efficiently.2.Not only can operation save us a lot of time but also we can learn from each other.3.We will be lucky enough to cooperate with someone whom we dislike,because we can share our happiness and sadness.4.On the

13、 contrary,it will be very difficult to cooperate with someone whom we dislike,because we should learn to put up with his shortcomings and try our best to discover his advantages.5.As far as I am concerned,to be a good partner,we should listen to others opinion and point out others mistakes politely,

14、because only in this way can we cooperate with others happily and efficiently.1.With _,we must learn _,if we want to _.2.Not only can operation _ but also _.3.We will be lucky enough to _,because _.4.On the contrary,it will be very difficult _,because _ shortcomings and try _ advantages.5.As _,to be _,we should listen _and _ politely way,because only in this way can _.