高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件(同名193).ppt

1、2023-5-5全国卷高考英语作文基本评分标准全国卷高考英语作文基本评分标准 1.1.篇幅：篇幅：词数词数80 80 120,120,否则减去否则减去2 2分。分。2.2.内容：内容：内容要点齐全内容要点齐全 注意词汇的数量注意词汇的数量 语法结构准确性语法结构准确性 上下文的连贯性。上下文的连贯性。3.3.拼写与标点符号准确，不影响交际。拼写与标点符号准确，不影响交际。4.4.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。降低一个档次。1 书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整较工整2 审题较认真，写作内容基本覆盖文

2、章信息点审题较认真，写作内容基本覆盖文章信息点Shortcomings:Good points语言需要加强，基本表达错误较多。语言需要加强，基本表达错误较多。第二节：第二节：书面表达（满分书面表达（满分25分）分）假设你是李华，假设你是李华，你为你校校报英文栏目主编外籍教师你为你校校报英文栏目主编外籍教师Mr.Mr.SmithSmith担任了半年的助理编辑，担任了半年的助理编辑，你现在决定辞去这个职位。你现在决定辞去这个职位。请你根据以下内容给他发一封邮件。请你根据以下内容给他发一封邮件。1 1）告诉他你的决定；）告诉他你的决定；2 2）陈述你的理由；）陈述你的理由；3 3）表达你的谢意和歉意

3、。）表达你的谢意和歉意。注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于100100。_ 书写有较大进步，书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整字迹较工整Good pointsDear Mr.Smith，_ Yours sincerely，Li Hua称呼（称呼（Salutation）文章一般会给出文章一般会给出 正文正文(Body of Letter）起首语起首语-亮明身份，开门见亮明身份，开门见山说意图山说意图(注意：注意：英文书信不要写一些英文书信不要写一些hello,hihello,hi之类的问候语之类的问候语)正文部分，严格按照文章的提正文部分，严格按照文章的提纲写纲写(注意

4、：如果内容较多，可以考虑注意：如果内容较多，可以考虑分段分段)结尾礼词（结尾礼词（Complimentary Close）感谢客气不可少，期待回信成老套感谢客气不可少，期待回信成老套签名（签名（Signature）(文章一般都会给出）文章一般都会给出）书信写作的格式及其要求：书信写作的格式及其要求：Organization MoodIn a moderate mood!Content:Cover all the informationBetter to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.1 1）告诉他

5、你的决定；）告诉他你的决定；2 2）陈述你的理由；）陈述你的理由；3 3）表达你的谢意和歉意。）表达你的谢意和歉意。开篇要直入主题开篇要直入主题Content 内容要完整内容要完整 注意内容的适当性注意内容的适当性Focus on“your”feeling,when you want to resign.Content内容要适当 Its a chance for you to choose a fresh manLanguage:No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes In accordance with the requirements

6、 of the compositionWith exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patternsLanguage 单词拼写需要加强：单词拼写需要加强：teach _(p.t)limit _(p.t)write _(-ing)study _(n.)taughtlimitedwritingstudy1.I have to quit this job before it and some reasons as follows.2.Id like to try my best in this year and gain a sati

7、sfied result.3.So Im afraid that I havent enough time to be your assistant editor.4.but I have to quit the position for those reasons.Firstly.5.I want to learn a various of knowledge.6.And its obviously that I can still learn more if I continue to work.Correct the possible mistakes in the following

8、sentences.aresatisfyingdont havethe followingvarietyobvious1 I will never forget the wonderful moments we have worked together.2 Ill appreciate it if you could agree my request.3 But I supposed to concentrate on my study now.Correct the possible mistakes in the following sentences.whenonam好的信件：好的信件：

9、Comfortable 读起来舒服读起来舒服 Persuasive 有说服力有说服力 Polish the following sentences.1.I dont think I can succeed in this job any more.2.I am writing to tell you a decision that I have been struggling to make.I have made up my mind to quit my job as your assistant.3.Since I am a senior 3 student now,I have onl

10、y one year left before I graduate and enter the university.I dont think I can be qualified as your assistant any more.As graduating and entering A.第五档第五档(很好很好)：(21-25分分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所

11、致力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较具备较强的语言运用能力。强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。高考作文评分标准高考作文评分标准B.第四档第四档(好好)：(16-20分分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确

12、，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。达到了预期的写作目的。Comment on the given composition according to what you have learned in the class.Peer assessment:Sample Dear Mr Smith,Im writing to tell you my decision to quit my job as the assistant e

13、ditor of the school newspaper.As you know,I hope to pass the college entrance examination to be held next June,so I will have to spend more time studying.Im afraid I cannot concentrate on the work any more.Sample Having worked as the assistant editor for half a year,Ive learned a lot from you-not only English but also the attitude towards work.I find it hard to convey my gratitude in words.Thank you very much.I am very sorry for making the decision and apologize to you for the inconvenience I might cause to your work.Yours.Li HuaOutstanding works:Outstanding works: