续写《林中莺歌课件.pptx

1、读原文 Characters Plots Ally;her father(dead);her mom1)What happened to Allys father?2)How did Ally feel?3)What did Ally and her father used to do weekends?4)What did Ally decide to do?Her father died suddenly.2）How did Ally feel?She felt angry and very sad.She missed her father very much.It wasnt fair

2、,Ally thought,frowning.Ally curled herself up in her fathers favorite chair and looked at his picture on the bookcase.It was one of her favorite shots.Ally smiled.“I miss you,Dad,”she said softly.Ally leaned her head back and closed her eyes,letting her mind wander.She loved thinking about the times

3、 that she and Dad had spent searching the woods for the little bird.If only I could get that good feeling back,she thought,sighing.心理活动心理活动+面部表情面部表情动作动作+语言语言动作动作+心理活动心理活动心理活动心理活动+动作动作3What did Ally and her father used to do at weekends?4）What did Ally decide to do?They used to search the woods for t

4、he special warbler,but without success.She decided to go to the woods alone and search for the wood special warbler.Theme ThemeLove between Father and Daughter.Try to cheer up when our beloved ones died.We can miss them but never drown ourselves in sorrow.读划线关键词语人物人物Dad 事物事物birds,pictures,warbler,th

5、e woods,camera动作行为动作行为search,believe,spot描述性词语描述性词语favoriteTips:Tips:不改变所给词的词性和在句中的语意不改变所给词的词性和在句中的语意 动词可以变换时态或非谓语动词动词可以变换时态或非谓语动词-ing/done-ing/done 名词可以改变单复数，但不能用所有格名词可以改变单复数，但不能用所有格 s读段首句Paragraph 1:Familiar smells of fresh earth rose up to greet her the moment Ally stepped into the woods.Paragrap

6、h2:All too soon the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds and Ally was about to go back home when suddenly What did she see or hear in the woods?How did she feel in the woods?(How to show her feelings)What did she do in the woods?Did she find the warbler?Feeling?beautiful scenery;birds flying or

7、singing relaxed/upset/miss her father 借景抒情借景抒情心理活动（回忆）心理活动（回忆）动作、表情、语言等动作、表情、语言等searched for the warblerNo.Disappointed.读段首句Paragraph2:All too soon the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds and Ally was about to go back home when suddenly What happened when she was about to go home?Did she spot t

8、he warbler?How did she feel?What would she do if she saw the warbler?Show the theme:delighted/excited/cheer up Description of the warbler(appearance,flying,singing.)原文参考：a tiny bird,the color of a bright orange,with blue-gray wings and sharp black eyes原文参考：If only I could get that good feeling backt

9、ake pictures of the warblerAttention：不要神话动物Para 1:Familiar smells of fresh earth rose up to greet her the moment Ally stepped into the woods.Some things never change,Ally thought.Quickening her pace,she hurried to the rock by the stream where she and her father used to sit and eat lunch.She sat on i

10、t,with her face toward the sun.Overhead the sky was filled with birds,whose sweet songs echoed throughout the woods.Ally felt content for the first time in a long while.She could almost hear her fathers laughter in the gentle breeze.“I know Dad will send the warbler to me.And I wont stop searching u

11、ntil I spot it,”she promised herself,settling comfortably on the rock and waiting patiently.But without luck,the pretty bird didnt appear.Possible VersionPara 2:All too soon the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds and Ally was about to go back home when suddenly she heard a ringing birdsong and

12、 saw a flash of fiery orange swooped(俯冲)down and perched(栖息)on a nearby branch.An excited feeling bubbled up inside of Ally.For a moment she couldnt believe her eyes,but it was true.The tiny wood warbler just sat there,looking around,as if it were waiting for something.“I knew it!”she exclaimed,leap

13、ing to her feet.Ally blinked back tears.“Thanks,Dad.Ill always miss our times together,but I feel better now,”she whispered,slowly lifting her camera and taking pictures.Comprehending(怡情悦读)Read the passage and answer the following questions in complete sentences.1.When did Allys father die?Did she m

14、iss her father?Find evidence to prove that.Her father died last summer.She missed her father very much.She missed her father very much.1.She sank slowly into her fathers favorite chair and stared at on his desk.2.Ally looked at her fathers picture on the bookcase.3.Ally smiled.“I miss you,Dad,”she s

15、aid softly.4.After her mother left,Ally reached for the first photo album she and Dad had put together.5.Ally smiled,remembering the excited look on his face 6.Ally leaned her head back and closed her eyes,letting her mind wander.She loved thinking about the times she and Dad evidence2.What did Ally

16、s mother advise her to do?Why?She advised Ally to go outside and take some pictures of the birds in the woods.Because she knew Ally was sad and was worried about her.Always staying at home was not good for Ally to recover from her sadness.3.How did Allys father feel when he read the news about the w

17、ood warbler in a local newspaper?Find evidence to show that.He was excited.Ally smiled,remembering the excited look on his face when he first showed her the pretty bird.“I cant believe someone spotted this little guy way up here in New Jersey,”hed said,his eyes sparkling.4.What did Ally and her fath

18、er usually do each weekend?What was the result?5.What did Ally decide to do then?They searched the woods behind the house each weekend for aglimpse of the special wood warbler.They had never spotted the warbler.She decided to search the woods for the warbler alone.Yes.sweet-sweet-sweet(a ringing bir

19、dsong)/a flash of fiery orange swooped down and perched on a nearby branchShe slowly lifted the camera and snapped three perfect shots.6.Did Ally spot the wood warbler in the woods?What was the bird like?What did she do after that?6.Did Ally spot the wood warbler in the woods?What was the bird like?

20、What did she do after that?Yes.sweet-sweet-sweet(a ringing birdsong)/a flash of fiery orange swooped down and perched on a nearby branchShe slowly lifted the camera and snapped three perfect shots.When Allys feelingsEvidence to show her feelingsher father diedshe thought about her fathers deathin gr

21、eat sorrow,grievedangryHow did Allys feelings change?her own tears were still frozen inside her heartIt wasnt fair,Ally thought,frowning.Dad was young and had never been sick.Why had his heart suddenly stopped?Task II：When Allys feelingsEvidence to show her feelingsshe recalled her fathershe was in

22、the woodsmixed feelings:happy but at the same time upsetAlly curled herself up in the worn leather Ally smiled.“I miss you,Dad,”she said softly.She loved thinking about the times she and Dad If only I could get that good feeling back,she thought,sighing.How did Allys feelings change?relaxed,content,

23、joyfulTheir sweet songs echoed Ally felt as though she was back where she belonged.Ally clasped her hands feeling content for the first settling comfortably on Time passed pleasantly When Allys feelingsEvidence to show her feelingsshe spotted the wood warblerexcited,grateful,relievedAn excited feeli

24、ng bubbled up inside of Ally as she searched the sky.“I knew it!”she exclaimed,leaping to her feet.Ally blinked back tears.“Thanks,Dad,”she whisperedThings will be different without Dad,she thought,snapping three perfect shots.Ill always miss our times together,but I feel better now.How did Allys fe

25、elings change?Try to cheer up when our beloved ones died.We can miss them but never drown ourselves in sorrow.Whats the theme of the story?Task III:Further thinking Ill always miss our times together,but I feel better now.Words and Expressions（魅力词汇）Task I:Complete the following sentences with the pr

26、oper form of the listed words.Words and Expressions（魅力词汇）grin peer sparkle lean grab murmur steep filter dart echostretch trace chill exclaim1.Rons eyes _ with excitement when he talked about his favorite football player.2.I _ my name in the sand but the waves soon washed it away.3.He turned around,

27、_ something to the student sitting behind him in class.4.Jill _ forward and pulled his son away from the fire.5.Carl sat up in bed,yawned,and _.6.Sarah tried several times to catch Philips eye,but he just _ at her.7.Light _ into my kitchen through the soft,green shade of the tree.8.The spectacular s

28、unrise made us _in surprise.9.Kay _ hold of my arm to stop herself falling.10.Suddenly aware of the morning _,she closed the window.11.He was _ through the wet windscreen at the cars ahead.12.After an hours drive,the road became rocky and _.13.The hall _ with cheers after the wonderful performance.1

29、4.Mom _ towards the boy and kissed him on the cheek.sparkledtracedmurmuringdartedstretchedgrinnedfilteredexclaimgrabbedchillpeeringsteepechoedleaned1.蜷缩身子蜷缩身子2.浑身湿透浑身湿透 3.许多许多 4.瞥见瞥见 5.伸手去拿伸手去拿 6.借用、接管借用、接管 7.紧跟、尾随紧跟、尾随 8.深呼吸深呼吸 9.探（伸）出头探（伸）出头 10.加快步伐加快步伐Task III:Translate the following expressions

30、into English and complete the following sentences with them.curl upsoaking wetdozens ofa glimpse ofreach fortake overtag along(with)take a deep breathpoke ones headquicken ones paceTask III:Translate the following expressions into English and complete the following sentences with them.clasp ones han

31、dshave a tug of war(over sth.)bubble upswoop down(on sth.)perch on leap to ones feetblink back(ones)tearssnap shots(of)11.紧握双手12.展开一场拉锯战 13.(感情)充溢 14.(鸟类)俯冲下来15.栖息在16.跳起来、起身17.强忍泪水 18.拍快照 1.She leaned forward,_ around her knees.2.The little boy likes to _ with his mother in order to feel safe.3.Susa

32、n,hot with anger and ready to _,felt Bobs hand on her arm stopping her.4.It was great to see the eagle _ on its prey.It was so quick and graceful,but deadly at the same time.5.Ive read _ books on creative thinking,from handbooks,to games,to psychology literature.6.Judy tried to _,but Tom could see t

33、hat she had been crying.clasping her handstag alongleap to her feetswoop downdozens ofblink back(her)tears7.What a heavy shower it is!I am _.8.Nowadays,many people use their camera phones to _ of whatever they are interested in and post them on line.9.Pain,guilt,anger,and fear all of these feelings

34、_ inside of us when we think back on our mistakes.10.The birds like to fly and _ rooftops,but none have flown away.11.Dont let your boy _ out of the window.Its dangerous!12.He _ to calm himself down and then walked onto the stage.soaking wetsnap shotsbubble upperch onpoke his headtook a deep breath1

35、3.The kid tried to _ the apple on the table,but it was too high.14.Look!Two dogs are _ over a meat bone.15.A neighbor said he heard the terrible screams in the night and also got _what was causing them.16.Thinking of her son staying at home alone,Julie _and hurried home.17.Why not pick up a book,_ o

36、n the sofa and enjoy reading?18.I dont believe that“technology”can _ our lives unless we choose to let it.reach forhaving a tug of wara glimpse ofquickened her pacecurl uptake overSkill I:“Show,dont tell.”Writing Skills(文采飞扬)The Show,Dont Tell method of writing is when the writer is able to create a

37、 picture in the readers mind.The writer gets away from the repetition of empty words like went,big,or sad and instead uses rich descriptions which makes the reader feel as if s/he were part of the story.What is it?Show,dont tell is a technique used in various kinds of texts to allow the reader to ex

38、perience the story through action,words,thoughts,senses,and feelings rather than through the authors exposition(说明)and summarization(概括).Why should we learn it?When you display a certain kind of emotion,think about how this emotion affects your body language?What would your face be doing?What would

39、your eyes be doing?What would your feet be doing?What would your hands be doing?What would your heart be doing?What would your mouth be doing?Skill I:“Show,dont tell.”Writing Skills(文采飞扬)How to show sadness:1)“Nothing will ever be the same again,”Ally whispered.2)her own tears were still frozen insi

40、de her heart.3)She sank slowly into her fathers favorite chair 4)Ally curled herself up in the worn leather chair and5)But her mother must know bird-watching wouldnt be the same this year.How could it be?Ally wondered.6)If only I could get that good feeling back,she thought,sighing.words 语言feelings心

41、里感受：what would your heart doaction 动作thoughts 心理活动+action 动作Skill I:“Show,dont tell.”Writing Skills(文采飞扬)How to show excitement:1)Ally smiled,remembering the excited look on his face when he first showed her the pretty bird.2)“I cant believe someone spotted this little guy way up here in New Jersey,

42、”hed said,his eyes sparkling.3)An excited feeling bubbled up inside of Ally as she searched the sky.4)“I knew it!”she exclaimed,leaping to her feet.feelings：what would your heart dowords 语言+what would your eyes do眼神words 语言+action 动作facial expression 脸部表情Skill II:Figures of Speech(修辞格)Writing Skills

43、(文采飞扬)Simile（明喻）She found her mother in the backyard weeding the flower bed,where dozens of pretty yellow daffodils(水仙花)stood straight like guardians lining the woods.Skill II:Figures of Speech(修辞格)Writing Skills(文采飞扬)Personification（拟人）1)Some things never change,Ally thought as the familiar smells

44、of fresh earth and mushrooms rose up to greet her.2)Beyond the stream,she noticed the jack-in-the-pulpits(深红天南星)were already poking their heads toward the sunlight filtering down through the branches.3)She took photos of two robins(知更鸟)having a tug of war over a worm.Skill II:Figures of Speech(修辞格)W

45、riting Skills(文采飞扬)Onomatopoeia（拟声）:1)She could almost hear her fathers laughter in the gentle breeze as she listened for the sweet-sweet-sweet song of the special bird.2)She counted the tap-tap-taps of a woodpecker(啄木鸟)drilling a hole in a nearby tree.She took photos of two robins(知更鸟).3)Sweet-swee

46、t-sweet,she heard once more as a flash of fiery(炽烈的)orange swooped down and perched on a nearby branch.Skill III:The Use of AdverbsWriting Skills(文采飞扬)1)She sank slowly into her fathers favorite chair 2)When she reached the stream,she stopped and took a deep breath,letting it out slowly.3)And I wont

47、 stop searching until I spot it,she promised herself,settling comfortably on the rock.4)Ally blinked back tears.“Thanks,Dad,”she whispered,slowly lifting her camera and taking careful aim.to emphasize her sadnessto show that she gradually relaxedto show that she didnt want to scare the bird awaySkil

48、l III:The Use of AdverbsWriting Skills(文采飞扬)5)Dad was sitting in the middle of a stream,soaking wet but grinning proudly as 6)She was smiling brightly,but her eyes had that worried look.7)Time passed pleasantly as Ally waited.to show happiness Tony had a little dog when he was a kid.They grew up tog

49、ether,went everywhere together and were best friends.However,as the dog grew older,he got seriously ill.Tony had no choice but to practice euthanasia（安乐死）to him.Write a short paragraph of about 80 words to describe how Tony felt and what he did after the dog died.Looking at Buddys body,Tony sobbed s

50、oftly,face looking as pale as a piece of paper.Then,he slowly walked to Buddy,hugging it tightly in his arms and rooted to the spot like a stake,those sweet memories coming crowding in.Buddy would lick its feet and wag its tail when he came back from school;Buddy would run loose around him cheerfull