(名师整理)最新英语中考写作《叙事忆旧》专题精讲精练(含答案).doc

1、主题训练3-叙事忆旧【名师点拨】 这个主题训练是以记叙文为主的练习，也是初中学生必须掌握的写作文体之一。要写好此类主题，学生要学会做一个有心人，注意平时身边发生的小事（如：爱心捐款活动、志愿者活动等），从一个小的切入口来清楚描述事情，从而悟出道理。【主题词汇】 an unforgettable experience( 一次难忘的经历 ) , have a lot of memories(有很多回忆), be in a good mood , learn. . . from. . . . look forward to doing, be proud of, in order to, come

2、true, do sb. a favour, give sb. a hand, help sb. with sth., with the help of sb., take good care of sb. , make ones life happy and full of laughter( 使某人的生活快乐并充满笑声）【常用句型】 1. The more. . . , the more. . . 2. . . is the best way to. . . 3. . . in order to. . 4. It is common knowledge that. . 5. I once

3、had an experience. . . 6. It is the most unforgettable experience that has ever happened in my life. 7. I am sure that. . . 8. Memory is a kind of treasure. 9, . plays an important role in our daily life.10. Everyone knows.11. We should do. . so as to do.【模拟试题】 The most unforgettable experience in m

4、y memorya. What happened to you?b. When and where did it happen?c. Why is it unforgettable?【要点分价】1可以写写你的经历（时间、人物、事件、结果）和你的感受。2仔细审题。确定时态（一般过去时为主），确定需要用韵词组和句型。3为什么难忘？从你的经历中学到了什么（详写）?4切记不要偏题（如：不是“难忘的”而写成其他的感受）。【思路写作】 1)你的经历（when,where,who,what,how.）1. I once had an experience.,. 2. It is the most unfor

5、gettable experience that has ever happened in my life. 3. Three years ago, my pa rents and I flew to Japan. 4. My classmates and I had a birthday party in March this year. 5. The most unforgettable experience in my memory was one day my classmates and I went to the park, 6. Last summer I went to vis

6、it my uncle by air. 7. I will never forget the military training. 8. One day , I noticed a man was stealing a womans purse on a bus. 9. We went to Disneyland. It is an amazing amusement park.10. We got up early in the morning and we were all very excited because my family and I went to the countrysi

7、de to have a picnic.11. There are a lot of memories in my heart that I cant forget. When I was ten years old, I travelled by plane with my parents.12. As we all know, everyone has something speciaI in his life. I think I will never forget my 14th birthday because on that day my parents gave me my fi

8、rst birthday party in a hotel.13. I think my childhood was wonderful, and it made me know: To be patient. 14. It was a happy childhood that was filled with knowledge and relaxation.15. When I open the book which is full of photos, I always look back on when I was small. It s really the most valuable

9、 time that I have. I will never forget it.2)你的感受1. I think this is the most unforgettable experience in my memory.2. .There were many interesting things and many famous cartoon characters. I had a wonderful time in it.3. On that day, I began to feel that I have the duty for my life. And I must be st

10、ronger.4. I felt that I was growing up, and I should be responsible for myself.5. How frightening and unforgettable the experience was!6. I never took a plane before, so I was too excited to fall asleep the whole night.7. lts really an important day to me and lII be kind to my parents all the time.8

11、. Everyone has a different childhood. It may be wonderful, exciting or hard. I have an unforgettable childhood.9. Childhood is a memory without pressure, competition and hypocrisy(虚伪).10. Friends share common interests. It is shown that two people become friends easily when they have some common int

12、erests. For example, two friends may be in love with the same sports, studying in the same school or living in the same neighborhood. Friends make sacrifices. Friends make sacrifices for each other. Friends never run away from difficulties. It is always shown that true friends always stand up tor th

13、eir friends in times of difficulties, Understanding. Friends understand each other without even saying a word. A single smile can brighten up the faces of all the friends.【范文评讲】原文稿 When I was a Grade Two pupil, I liked playing the firecracker very much during theSpring Festival. But as a young boy,

14、I didnt know how to ploy it safely. An accident happened. Once the firecracker was lit, and my face and fingers were injured by the fire. It was not very serious, but I still absent from school and stayed at hospital for about two months. I was taken good care of by my parents and nurses. Therefore,

15、 you can hardly know that by looking at my face and fingers. It was a sad and unforgettable experience in my life. Since then, I havent doneanything if I couldnt know that it is safe. I learn safety first.【点评与评分】 这是一篇叙事性的文章。在这篇文章中，作者选择了一件二小事：从过年玩爆竹受伤，明白了“安全第一”的道理。事情很小，但选材很新，意义很深刻。以小见大，正是这篇文章的成功之处。按中

16、考作文20分一计算，属于第二档第一档的文章，可得1617分。需改进之处： 1. It was not very serious,but l still absent from school and stayed at hospital for about two months.因为absent是形容词，所以应与be动词搭配 在一起使用，was absent。 2. Since then,I havent done anything if l couldnt know that it is safe.这句话中，安全是要“确保”的，所以把know改为make sure更合理。修改稿 When I

17、was a Grade Two pupil, I liked playing the firecracker very much during the Spring Festival. But as a young boy, I didnt know how to play it safely. An accident happened. Once the firecracker was lit, and my face and fingers were injured by the fire. It was not very serious, but I was still from sch

18、ool and stayed at hospital for about two months, I was taken good care of by my parents and nurses. Therefore, you can hardly know that by looking at my face and fingers. It was a sad and unforgettable experience in my life. Since then, I havent done anything if I couldnt make sure that it is safe.

19、I learn safety first.【范文选登】 1. When I was twelve, my classmates and I had a football match in the park. All of us were interested in it. We started the match at nine oclock. Although we lost this match, we were still very happy. After the match, we were very tired, so we went to the KFC to have a re

20、st, I think this is the most unforgettable experience in my memory. 2. Three years ago, my parents and I flew to Japan. I saw it from the plane. Oh,it is a beautiful island._There we went to Disneyland. It is an amazing amusement park. There were many interesting things and many famous cartoon chara

21、cters. I had a wonderful time in it, Then we went to a Japanese restaurant. All the food was delicious. We had a good meal! That is my unforgettable experience. 3. My classmates and I had a birthday party in March this year. lts our fourteenth birthday, At the countryside, we celebrated our birthday

22、 together. We ate a big cake and played with each other. I car,not forget it because its very meaningful. On that day. I began to feel that I have the duty for my life. And I must be stronger. 4. The most unforgettable experience in my life was one day my classmate-s and I went to the park. We were

23、all very happy and had a good time there. But on my way back home, we walked a:long a small river. Jack saw some small fish in it, so he tried to catch them. But he was so careless that he fell into the river. I quickly gave him a hand and saved him. How frightening and unforgettable the experience

24、was! 5. Last Sunday was my birthday. My birthday is always a sweet experience for me every year. So was this one. We got up early in the morning and we were all very excited because my family and I went to the countryside to have a picnic. After that my father drove us to the beach. There were good

25、views and the wind blew gently. It was very comfortable. At night we went back home. And Mum cooked noodles called Long Life Noodles for me. It was very delicious, I felt that I was growing up, and I should be responsible for myself. What an unforgettable experience! 6.Last summer l went to visit my

26、 uncle by air. I never took a plane before, so I was too excited to fall asleep the whole night. On the day of the flight, the crew took me from my parents to the seat, Luckily , my seat was near the window. When I saw the sky, I was very happy. Then I slept on the plane until it landed. How excitin

27、g and unforgettable the experience was! 7. There are a lot of memories in my heart that I cant forget. When I was ten years old, I travelled by plane with my parents. I saw the plane was huge and beautiful, I was excited to see the huge plane. After a few minutes, I sat on the plane, I felt it was f

28、lying. I saw the beautiful blue sky and white clouds. The houses and the roads were smaller and smaller. They were so beautiful, What an unforgettable and nice experience it was! I really loved it. 8. One day, I noticed o man was stealing a womans purse on a bus. I was young and not strong so I didn

29、t know what l should do. At that time, a man who was in the front of the bus caught him. Then I phoned the police. The pol ice got there in time. Of course, the thief was taken away by the police. I think the man was brave. I will be a brave man like him when I grow up. How unforgettable the experie

30、nce was! 9. I will never forget the military training we had in the secondary school. In order to learn to work in a team, we had a five-day training. We were very tired from standing, running and working. Among the students, I was the most tired one because I was very naughty and told to run over 5

31、 circles around the playground in those days.But in the end I understood that working as a soldier is very hard and difficult but full of honours. We should learn from the soldiers. 10. Therere a lot of memories in my mind which I will never forget. It was Monday, and the weather was a little hot. A

32、fter having so many lessons, I went out of the main gate of school with my friends. I looked around to find my fathers car, but I failed. Whats much worse, I forgot to take my cellphone so I couldnt call my parents. Unfortunately, I didnt know that while I was waiting for my father anxiously, my fat

33、her was waiting with worry. At last, I couldnt bear it and I took a taxi to get home an d my father drove home alone. How unforgettable the experience was! From this experience, I learn that I shall be careful. If I am careless, I will get myself into trouble. 1. An unforgettable thing When I was a

34、young child, I was too shy to talk to anyone. My classmates often laughed at me. I was sad but could do nothing, Later, something happened, and it changed my life. It was an English speech contest. My mother asked me to take part in it. What a terrible idea! It meant I had to speak in front of all t

35、he teachers and students of my school. But my mother told me, Believe in yourself, And I tried my best to practise it. With my mothers love, I did well in the contest. Since then, everything has changed. Whenever I do anything, I always tell myself Nothing is impossible. I can make it. I become more

36、 confident after the contest.2, A most exciting moment In my memory, I always remember that day. It was May 9th, 2012. All the Grade Eight students in our school went to Changqing Island to celebrate the 14th birth day. It was the first time that we celebrated our birthday together. All of us were e

37、xcited. We song and danced and played games at the party.The most exciting moment was to read the letters from our parents, We were moved because suddenly we realized we were the artists who painted our future with the brush of today.3. A difficult choice It happened in our classroom. One morning, w

38、hen I entered our classroom. I happened to see one of my best friends copying another students homework. As an honest student, I should tell my class teacher about it. But he is my best friend. How can I do that? It was really difficult for me to choose. I thought a lot. At last, I decided to tell m

39、y teacher about it. Although my best friend didnt talk to me for a few days. I still think he will understand me. Because we all should be honest persons. 4. My childhood Childhood usually takes up an important part in ones lifetime. When I saw the picture of my hometown, it would remind me of my ch

40、ildhood. I often played ball games and chess in my childhood like other children. But the things I did most was to help my mother do some housework. I helped her mop the floor and clean the furniture. Therefore, my mother would not be very tired. I enjoyed doing it very much. Because of what I did i

41、n my childhood. I become a good warm-hearted child and I am loved by almost everyone who has received help from me. I think lve got very good education in my childhood and I was happy.My childhood is a precious memory. It also lets me know helping others will make our life happy and full of laughter

42、. 5. My first meeting with a foreigner One day when I was walking on Nanjing Road, suddenly a foreigner asked me howto get to No. 1 Department Store. I understood what he meant, but I couldnt express myself correctly. I could only say a few words in broken English. At last the foreigner understood a

43、nd said with a smile, Youd better learn English well and speak more English. From this experience, I know how important English is. I will do my best to learn English well so that I can speak English fluently, 6. On a rainy day It was a winter day. I was waiting for a bus. Suddenly, the weather beco

44、me rainy. The rain was heavy. Luckily, I took an umbrella when I left home. But other people who were waiting for the bus didnt do. I thought being a helpful people was very important. So I held my umbrella to let them get on the bus without getting wet. They all thanked me. I felt warm with joy. Th

45、e bus set off again, but the water from my umbrella dripped to the floor. I felt very sorry about it. At that moment, a student offered me a plastic bag. I looked at his face with thankfulness. After that day, l knew it we help others, we will be helped when we are in trouble.7. My weekend As a Grad

46、e Nine student, my weekend isnt as relaxing and free as before, I have to do my homework and attend the class. But I also can do some sports, watch TV and even play computer games sometimes. I have time to talk with my classmates. L enjoy the life like this. To make a long story short, my weekend is

47、 both busy and happy.8. The first time I cooked food About three months ago, neither my father nor my mother was at home. Sol had to cook food myself. It was on unforgettable experience. I couldnt control lots of things, such as how much salt I should add, how long the food should be cooked and so on. To make a long story short