高三短文改错二轮改错公开课课件.pptx

1、In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructors orders,so once I started the car,my mind goes blank,I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept r

2、epeating the word,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.（作者暑假学车的经历作者暑假学车的经历,8句，句，109词）词）17年高

3、考I卷改错eighteenththe/mybutwentwordsTurn latersudden of数词误用冠词/代词的漏用连接词逻辑错误谓语动词时态错误名词数的误用谓语与非谓语的错用副词的多余副词的语义错误词性误用介性误用 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big,but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people ev

4、en had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.(叔叔开

5、的饭店生意兴隆及成功秘诀叔叔开的饭店生意兴隆及成功秘诀,8句，句，93词）词）16年高考I卷改错wherehavehonestyandusedofasteadilyhis连接词逻辑错误连接词错用连接词重复使用动词时态错误词性误用介词漏用冠词错用代词逻辑错误词性误用动词语态的误用短文改错考些什么？怎么考？你有什么解题经验和大家分享？1.长度：长度：2.内容：内容：3.体裁：体裁：4.考点：5.考法：短文有短文有610句话，含句话，含92119个词。个词。取材于学生习作，贴近学生生活。取材于学生习作，贴近学生生活。除除2013年年卷是说明文外，其余都是记叙文。卷是说明文外，其余都是记叙文。动，名，

6、形，副，介，冠，代，连词等。1)8:1:1的规律 即：8个改错题，1个加词题，1个删词题2）每个句子最多不超过两个错误,一词改一词改错要容易，考点须牢记；根据考点找错误，逐一排查高速度。改错要容易，考点须牢记；根据考点找错误，逐一排查高速度。三个步骤三个步骤1.从语篇入手，理解大意，着眼时态和语态。从语篇入手，理解大意，着眼时态和语态。2.从句子入手，依据考点，逐句分析，推敲语法。从句子入手，依据考点，逐句分析，推敲语法。3.从行文逻辑入手，兼顾上下，审查连代。从行文逻辑入手，兼顾上下，审查连代。1.(2017全国全国卷卷)Before getting into the car,I thoug

7、ht I had learned the instructors orders,but once I started the car,my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.2.(2017全国全国卷卷)The instructor kept repeating the words,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”3.(2016全国全国卷卷)It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people eve

8、n had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that4.(2016全国全国卷卷)Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking.haveTurnwentused考点考点1 谓语动词的错误谓语动词的错误5.(2017全国全国卷卷)I had grown not only physically,but also mentally in the past few years.6.(2017全国全国卷卷)About one month a

9、fter this photo was taken,I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.7.(2016全国全国卷卷)We can chose between staying at home and taking a trip.8.(2016全国全国卷卷)Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.havebecamechooseshould9.(2014全国全国II卷卷)M

10、y dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of flowers and We can lie on the grassThe teachers here are kindThey are not only our teachers looks归纳总结：主要考查动词的时态和语态，主谓一致、语气等。主要考查动词的时态和语态，主谓一致、语气等。1.(2017全国全国卷卷)In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden

11、,which is on the rooftop of their house.2.(2017全国全国卷卷)When summer comes,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!3.(2016全国全国卷卷)We can choose between staying at home and take a trip.interestedto考点考点2 非谓语动词的错误非谓语动词的错误taking4.(2016全国全国卷卷)I showed them I was independent by wear strange

12、clothes.5.(2016浙江浙江)He would ask who we were and pretend not to knowing us.wearingknow归纳总结：主要考查动词不定式、动词主要考查动词不定式、动词-ing形式以及过去分词的用法、谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用、并列结构中非谓语动词的误用等。形式以及过去分词的用法、谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用、并列结构中非谓语动词的误用等。作主语或作介词宾语，该用动词作主语或作介词宾语，该用动词-ing形式时却用了原形。尤其注意分清形式时却用了原形。尤其注意分清to是介词还是不定式符号。固定结构中不定式符号的缺失与多余。情感类动词的是

13、介词还是不定式符号。固定结构中不定式符号的缺失与多余。情感类动词的-ed分词与分词与-ing分词的区别。分词的区别。作定语、状语或补语时，非谓语动词形式用错。作定语、状语或补语时，非谓语动词形式用错。1.(2017全国全国)The instructor kept repeating the word，“Speed up！”“Slow down！”.2.(2016全国全国卷卷)My uncle tells me that the key to success is honest.3.Jay began his performance with one of his most famous son

14、g.考点考点3 名词错误名词错误wordshonestysongs4.(2017全国全国卷卷)Besides,they often get some useful informations from the Internet.5.(2016全国全国卷卷)If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden our view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.6.(2016全国全国卷卷)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for

15、me.Tips:可数名词大于一时要用复数，不可数名词一般没有复数形式。如air,milk,water等物质名词与music,advice,fun，knowledge，progress等抽象名词是不可数名词，一般是没有复数形式的。还有luggage/baggage,furniture,equipment,information等都是容易出错的不可数名词。informationknowledgeyears7.(2011全国课标卷全国课标卷)When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.表示“某人的”本应用名词的所有格，

16、文中却没用。如上题。注意，以下情况中，名词所有格后的名词可省略：a butchers(shop)肉铺，a tailors(shop)裁缝店，a barbers(shop)理发店，a doctors(office)诊所，my sisters(home)我姐姐家，其中shop,office,home等表示处所的词都可以省略，直接用名词所有格表示。friends归纳总结：主要考查名词的数主要考查名词的数(可数还是不可数，单数还是复数可数还是不可数，单数还是复数)，偶尔考名词的格，以及转换成名词词性的用法。，偶尔考名词的格，以及转换成名词词性的用法。1.(2017全国)It was a relief

17、and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.2.(2016全国卷)Instead,he hopes that his business will grow steady.3.(2017全国卷)I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the latest music albums.4.(2016全国)They were also the best and worse years in

18、my life.5.(2014全国I卷)The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.考点考点4 形容词及副词错误形容词及副词错误suddensteadilyworsttastydifferent6.(2015全国II卷)Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.7.(2013全国II卷)Interesting,it had a connect

19、ion to the British porcelain(瓷器)industry.8.(2017全国全国卷卷)I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late,the instructor asked me to stop the car.terriblyInterestingly later9.(2017全国全国I卷卷)I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.10.(2

20、015全国全国II卷卷)He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.11.I found the test difficult,but I tried hardly to do it.hard归纳总结：主要考查形容词和副词的词性辨析（混淆错用）、词义辨析、比较等级和最高级的错用等。主要考查形容词和副词的词性辨析（混淆错用）、词义辨析、比较等级和最高级的错用等。adj.作定语、表语、宾补 adv.修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子作状语修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子作状语1.(2017全国全国)It was a re

21、lief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road.2.(2016全国全国)My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time.3.(2017全国全国)They have also bought for some gardening tools.4.(2016全国全国)Now I am leaving home to college.5.(2015 陕西陕西)My soccer coach retired in last

22、week.6.(2015全国卷)Tony saw a toy on a shop window.考点考点5 介词错误介词错误ofoffor总结归纳：in主要考查介词的意义和用法、固定搭配中介词的误用、介词的主要考查介词的意义和用法、固定搭配中介词的误用、介词的缺失与多余等。缺失与多余等。1.(2017全国全国)I still remember how hard first day was.2.(2016全国全国)My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time.3.(2017全国全国)

23、They live far from the school，and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.4.(2016全国)But in that case，we will learn little about world.考点考点6 冠词错误冠词错误theaanthe5.(2016全国卷)At the first,I thought I knew everything and6.(2015全国II卷)He liked it so much that he quickly walked into the s

24、hop A woman saw him crying and told him to wait outside a shop.the归纳总结：主要考查主要考查固定搭配中的冠词误用固定搭配中的冠词误用，定冠词和不定冠词，定冠词和不定冠词表示泛表示泛指和特指指和特指的的误误用，不定冠词用，不定冠词a 和和an的混用，以及冠词的缺失的混用，以及冠词的缺失与多余等。与多余等。1.(2016全国全国I)Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steadily.2.(2017全国全国)Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in our sch

25、ool3.(2017全国全国)This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.4.(2016全国全国)It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot.5.(2016全国全国)At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.考点考点7 代词错误代词错误hisbothmymuchmyself6(2016全国全国)At last，I

26、will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.7.When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day,it started to rain.I总结归纳：主要考查各类代词的用法（人称代词主要考查各类代词的用法（人称代词/形容词性的物主代词形容词性的物主代词/反身代词反身代词/不定代词）、代词指代的人或事物前后不一致、代不定代词）、代词指代的人或事物前后不一致、代词的缺失或多余以及词的缺失或多余以及it的不当使

27、用等。的不当使用等。1.(2017全国全国)Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructors orders，so once I started the car，my mind went blank.2.(2016全国全国)Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area.3.(2016全国全国)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.4.(2016全国全国)E

28、very day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are used for cooking.考点考点8 连词错误连词错误butwhereand5.(2017全国全国卷卷)In their spare time,they are interested in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house.6.When Jay began to sing the seventh song,it started to ra

29、in.Therefore,the concert was not interrupted7.(2013全国全国I卷卷)He had a deep voice,which set him apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.whichHoweverand总结归纳：When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home i

30、n countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtie

31、r.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.thoughttheandwithseriousairmanyfindourSummary 1.长度：2.体裁：3.10个错误设题规律：_:_:_修改的词：_删除的词：_增加的词：_4.每句话中最多设每句话中最多设_处错处错,1个词只能改个词只能改_词词5.考点：考点：6.解题步骤：解题步骤：冠词、介词、连词、不定式符号冠词、介词、连词、不定式符号t

32、o、人称代词、物主代词等、人称代词、物主代词等冠词、介词、连词、不定式符号冠词、介词、连词、不定式符号to、助动词、副词等、助动词、副词等动词、名词、形容词、副词、介词、冠词、代动词、名词、形容词、副词、介词、冠词、代 词、连词等词、连词等8 1 121短文改错应试策略()1、通读全文，弄清文章的脉络层次、中心思想，把握作者所采用的时态、语态、人称和数的变化。可以先把短文中明显的错误或者自己非常确定的错误做好标记。2 2、通读全文后，以句子为单位进行分析、找出错误，并根据改错原则（每句最多两个错误，且增词，删词，改词的比例是1:1:81:1:8）加以改正。3、复读全文，检查核对注意修改符号的准确性,全文一共十个错误。核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。（因为短文改错往往覆盖面广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。）Homework：1.对本节课所学知识进行复习2.完成学案课后练习Correction1-4感谢您的观赏！