读后续写与概要写作微技能五-情绪与情感描写课件.ppt

1、在读后续写中，描写人物的情绪与情感是常用的描写方法，恰当的情绪与情感描写能够表现文中人物的性格，推动事件的发展。在描述人物情绪与情感时要突出文章的中心，与人物的性格吻合，符合事件发展的逻辑。要选用恰当的词句通过情绪与情感描写精确地刻画人物的内心世界。微技能五情绪与情感描写微技能五情绪与情感描写语言输入素材积累，为续写奠基.词汇积累1happy adj.愉快的，高兴的；美满的2cheerful adj.快乐的3excited adj.兴奋的4joyful adj.欢乐的5pleased adj.欣喜的，高兴的，满意的6enjoy vt.喜爱7brighten vt.使快活8delight n.欢

2、喜，愉快，高兴vt.使快乐，使喜欢9pleasure n.愉快10passion n.热情，激情11be fond of music 爱好音乐12a satisfied look 满意的表情 13brighten ones heart 使某人心情愉快14yell with delight 乐得大叫15set ones heart at rest 使某人安心16be wild with delight 欣喜若狂17be in high spirits 精神高涨18be excited with joy at the success 为成功而欣喜19be on the top of the wor

3、ld 心满意足，非常幸福20a mixture of excitement and happiness 既兴奋又开心.佳句背诵1The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。2Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。3Tears of happiness poured down Susans cheeks.幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。4Her cheerful spirits and hearty laughter infected the whole

4、 class.她那欢乐的情绪和爽朗的笑声感染了全班同学。5She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。.词汇积累1tear n 常用复眼泪，泪珠2sob v.啜泣，抽噎3sorrow n.悲痛；忧伤4desperate adj.绝望的；无望的5sadness n.悲伤，忧愁6pain n.痛苦7release vt.释放8grief n.悲痛9a broken spirit 意志消沉10cry one s heart out 悲痛欲绝11with a heavy heart 怀着沉重的心情12with a sinking heart 心情沉重

5、地13with a sorrowful heart 怀着忧郁的心情14be seized with panic 惊慌失措15put him into a sentimental mood 让他很伤感16fall into despair 陷入绝望17a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感18make ones heart bleed 使某人悲痛19be down in spirits 情绪低落20lose ones spirit 垂头丧气.佳句背诵1He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了

6、下来。2In those days he was in low spirits.那些日子里他情绪低落。3Her hands were shaking and she was on the point of crying.她的手在颤抖，快要哭出来了。4They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。5Hearing the news,so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。.词汇积累1displeasure n不高兴2glare v.对怒目而视3frustrate

7、d adj.失意的；失望的4annoyed adj.恼怒的，气恼的5rage n.愤怒6cross adj.生气的，不高兴的7complain constantly 不断地抱怨8flame with anger 气得满脸通红9be displeased at ones conduct 对某人的行为感到不满10be easily annoyed at trifles 易为琐事而恼火11get mad/cross at sb 对某人勃然大怒12have a worried look 愁眉苦脸13ignore a complaint 对抱怨不予理会14express/voice a complain

8、t about 对表示不满15run out of the room in a burst of anger 怒气冲冲地跑出房间16stamp ones foot in anger 愤怒地跺脚17feel discouraged 感到泄气的18feel puzzled/confused 感到困惑的.佳句背诵1His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。2He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。3They stopped arguing and glared at each other.他们停止

9、了争论，相互怒视着对方。4He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。5This failure leaves the child depressed and frustrated.这次失败使这个小孩灰心丧气。.词汇积累1serious adj.严肃的，庄重的2shame n.羞愧；耻辱3yawn v.打呵欠4forgive vt.原谅5kindly adj.仁慈的；和蔼的；友好的，体贴的6hopeless adj.没有希望的，绝望的7anxiety n.焦虑8find.highly stimulating 觉得非常刺激9a forgiving s

10、pirit 宽容的精神10with a kindly spirit 以和蔼可亲的态度11not in the least is he interested in.他对一点也不感兴趣12mixed with the emotion of anxiety and hope 混合着焦虑与希望的情绪13set off strong feelings 引起强烈的情感14be hopelessly addicted to 对彻底上瘾15under the domination of these emotions 在这些情绪的控制下.佳句背诵1He lowered/bent/bowed his head i

11、n shame.他羞愧地低下了头。2I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。3He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。4She looked at her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。5My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.我走进她的办公室时，紧张得

12、心都到了喉咙口。.基础练习补全句子1Her smile _.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。2The woman _ the recovery of her stolen jewels.那位妇人对找回被盗的珠宝感到非常高兴。lit up the whole roomwas delighted at语言输出层级训练，让续写添彩3Unforgettable were her eyes that _and lips held _.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。4She _ and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。5She sobbed，_.

13、她掩面哭泣。shone like diamondsin a steady smileburst into tearshiding her face in her hands6His attitude _.他的态度使我极为恼火。7Dont _I did it all for your own good.别生我的气，我这样做完全是为了你好。8His face suddenly _ 他的表情突然严肃起来。made me extremely annoyedget mad at megrew serious.综合演练完成读后续写，注意情感描写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇

14、完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Ali and his younger sister,Zahra,lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job,and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months,the landlord was breat

15、hing down their necks.One day,Ali took Zahras shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed,but he lost them on the way home.It wasnt until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed,so he begged his sister to keep it secret.Zahra agreed

16、 and the two decided to share Alis running shoesZahras school hours were in the morning,so she would wear them first.After school,she would rush back and give them to Ali.He could then run to his school,which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could,Ali often arrived late and was w

17、arned by the school.Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city.When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes,he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived.Ali had a str

18、ong start,but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength,and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners,determine

19、d to finish thirdSuddenly,as the finish line drew near,another runner collided(碰撞)with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.【根据提示完成范文】Paragraph 1：Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Refusing to give up at this point,he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.He dashed a

20、cross the finish line and won the fourth prize.Thinking he would _(让她妹妹失望)，Ali _(情不自禁哭了起来)Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.Holding the shoes close to his chest during

21、 the award ceremony,Ali _(感到非常高兴，并如释重负)as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.let her sister downcouldnt help sobbingfelt overjoyed and relievedParagraph 2：Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.He could not wait to see his sister and share the thrilling news.On his arrival,Ali found Zah

22、ra was waiting outside.She _(非常紧张)whether her brother would bring her what she was expecting.“Zahra,see what I have got for you.”he took the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.The instant Zahra saw the shoes,her face _(高兴起来)_(她非常激动)that she threw herself at Ali.“Thank you!Ali.”_(高兴的眼泪流了出来)as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.was really nervouslit upSo thrilled was sheTears of joy welled up their eyes