life-in-the-future-写作教学讲解课件.ppt

1、 如何写想象类作文如何写想象类作文写法指导：写法指导：1.确定中心思想。虽然是想象，但中心要集中，不能太散。2.合理布局，巧妙构思，围绕中心展开写作。既要想象合理，又要独具匠心，引人入胜，启发人的思维，发人深思。3.选用合理的写作顺序。时间顺序，空间顺序，逻辑顺序。4.确定时态、人称和写作手法。通常用将来时，多采用描述性句子，还可用may,might,could,would,possible,probable,likely,maybe等*开篇常用开篇常用 1.Sometimes I dream about life in the future.2.I imagine life in the f

2、uture from time to time.3.It is fascinating to imagine life in the future.4.I am curious about future life.*表达顺序表达顺序常用词：常用词：1.There is a possibility that human beings will 2.It is likely that 3.Maybe in the future,we can*文章结尾文章结尾常用句式：常用句式：1.I believe the dream will come true one day.2.As far as I am

3、 concerned,we will realize the dream sooner or later.3.In my opinion,the dream will be turned into reality(现实）现实）one day.*写作练习写作练习写作内容：写作内容：根据以下内容，通过合理想象，用英语写根据以下内容，通过合理想象，用英语写一篇短文来展望未来的科技新生活。一篇短文来展望未来的科技新生活。1.某些人可以到月球上度假。某些人可以到月球上度假。2.某些科学家可以到海地生活。某些科学家可以到海地生活。3.每家都有可视电话，通过可视电话可以体检或购物。每家都有可视电话，通过可视

4、电话可以体检或购物。4.孩子在家可以通过电视或者广播接收教育。孩子在家可以通过电视或者广播接收教育。5.机器人为你做家务。机器人为你做家务。写作要求：写作要求：5句话表达去全部内容；句话表达去全部内容；句子结构准确，信句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。息内容完整，篇章连贯。Life In The Future Sometimes I dream about life in the future.What will it be like?.*Life In The Future Sometimes I dream about life in the future.What will it b

5、e like?Perhaps,some people will go to the moon for a holiday,and some scientists will live under the sea.Maybe we will have videophones in every home,through which we can have a medical examination or do some shopping without leaving our home.Whats more,there is no need for children to go to school

6、everyday and they will stay at home,learning and studying because there will be more educational programmes on the radio or TV.Besides,in the future,each family will have a robot,and everyday all we need to do is tell them what to do-shopping,housework,and so on.I believe the dream will come true so

7、me day.*My dream house*写作练习：根据提示信息，介绍一下你设计的写作练习：根据提示信息，介绍一下你设计的未来的房子：未来的房子：1.可以变成宇宙飞船，也可以变成潜水艇。可以变成宇宙飞船，也可以变成潜水艇。2.里面装置各种声控服务器，听从你的指令。里面装置各种声控服务器，听从你的指令。3.墙壁随时可以变成你喜欢的颜色和背景。墙壁随时可以变成你喜欢的颜色和背景。4.通过电脑刷新后，房间立刻会干净。通过电脑刷新后，房间立刻会干净。潜水艇潜水艇 submarine;声控服务器：声控服务器：voice control server;配备：配备：equip with*写作练习：根据提

8、示信息，介绍一下你设计的写作练习：根据提示信息，介绍一下你设计的未来的房子：未来的房子：1.可以变成宇宙飞船，也可以变成潜水艇。可以变成宇宙飞船，也可以变成潜水艇。2.里面装置各种声控服务器，听从你的指令。里面装置各种声控服务器，听从你的指令。3.墙壁随时可以变成你喜欢的颜色和背景。墙壁随时可以变成你喜欢的颜色和背景。4.通过电脑刷新后，房间立刻会干净。通过电脑刷新后，房间立刻会干净。潜水艇潜水艇 submarine;声控服务器：声控服务器：voice control server;配备：配备：equip with*The house I designed for the future is

9、a wonderful one.It can be turned into a spaceship when you want to travel into space,and into a submarine when you want to explore the mystery of the ocean.It is equipped with all kinds of voice control servers which can follow your instructions.What is more interesting is that the wall can be turne

10、d into any color and background you like at any time.You dont have to clean house yourself and just by pressing the button for cleaning,it will become clean and tidy immediately.I am sure my dream will come true sooner or later.*The house I designed for the future is a wonderful one.It can be turned

11、 into whatever you like,a spaceship when you want to travel into space or a submarine when you want to explore the mystery of the ocean.Equipped with all kinds of voice control servers,the house can change its color and background by following your instructions.What more,you dont have to clean the h

12、ouse yourself but it will become clean and tidy immediately just with a click of the mouse.I am sure my dream will come true sooner or later.*我有一座大房子我有一座大房子 有很大的落地窗有很大的落地窗 阳光撒在地板上阳光撒在地板上 也温暖了我的被子也温暖了我的被子 孙燕姿孙燕姿 完美的一天完美的一天 My Dream house*flat*castle 城堡城堡*French window 落地窗落地窗*cooker 炉灶炉灶*Study*bedroom

13、*My dream house房子类型：房子类型：公寓公寓 flat 别墅别墅 villa 城堡城堡 castle 村舍小屋村舍小屋 cottage 房子地址房子地址 The house is located 在市区在市区 located in the city center 在海边在海边 by the sea,on the coast 在森林里在森林里 in the forest 在山里在山里 in the mountain*房子内部装饰房子内部装饰 家具 furniture (sofa,lamp,wardrobe衣柜）地板 floor 天花板 ceiling 家用电器 household

14、appliances房子内部结构房子内部结构：卧室 bedroom 客厅 sitting room 厨房 kitchen 洗手间 restroom 书房 study 阳台阳台 balcony 落地窗落地窗 French window*可能用到的词汇可能用到的词汇 舒适的 comfortable 温馨的 cozy 浪漫的 romantic 干净整齐的 clean and tidy 极好的 fantastic 方便的 convenient 现代的 modern 人工智能 artificial intelligence 机器人 robot 佣人 servant*My dream house I wa

15、nt to live in a house which is made of glass.It looks like a bottle.Whats more,it can float on the ocean.The reason why I want to live in glass house is that I can see beautiful scenery as well as all kinds of fish.In addition,I can travel around the world.I hope that my dream house has two floors.On the first floor,there is a telescope that is used to look at the sky;on the second floor,which is under the water,I can watch all kinds of fish.In a nutshell,I love my dream house,which is full of love and colorful life.*