（高中英语写作训练）锤炼句式-学会运用高级结构.doc

1、锤炼句式学会运用高级结构高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”就是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。不论是复杂结构的运用，如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句，还是较多的语法结构，如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转换问题。不容置疑，这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次。此句式在写作中属于高级句式，在文章中巧妙地使用此句式能使文章句式复杂多样，对要点的表述更加具体、生动、准确和全面，并能突出重点。从而提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点。美句输入1The reason why I want to apply fo

2、r the position is that I want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture.(2018浙江高考书面表达) 我想申请这个职位的原因是我想提高我的英语口语水平，帮助他们更好地了解中国文化。2The reason why I suggest you apply for Peking University is that it is one of the best universities in China.(2018北京高考书面表达)我建

3、议你申请北京大学的原因是它是中国最好的大学之一。3The reason why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice is that it has many wellknown sightseeing spots.(2017北京高考书面表达)我认为长江之行将是一个更好选择的原因是它有许多著名的观光景点。佳句输出1The_reason_why_he_wasnt_admitted_into_a_key_university_was_that his grades were too low.他没有被重点大学录取的原因是他

4、的分数太低。2I think the_reason_why_you_are_always_angry_is_that you may have high pressure in study.(安徽高考满分作文)我认为你总是生气的原因可能是学习上的巨大压力。3The_reason_why_people_celebrate_the_festival_is_that they believe it is the time when the moon is at its fullest and brightest in the whole year.(辽宁高考满分作文)人们庆祝这个节日的原因是，他们相

5、信这时候是月亮一年中最满、最亮的时候。4The_reason_why_he_failed_the_English_exam_was_that he didnt learn it well.他英语考试不及格的原因是他没学好。5. The_reason_why_Jack_didnt_arrive_on_time_was_that the train was late.杰克没有按时到达的原因是火车晚点了。在写作中，若巧妙利用此句式的倒装结构，就会使得文章句式多样，亮点增多，体现作者的深厚功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，是作文的增分点，从而“加分”多多。美句输入1陈述语序：Some of my classm

6、ates and I are so interested in the competition that we have formed a group to take part in it.倒装语序： So interested in the competition are some of my classmates and I that we have formed a group to take part in it.(2018天津高考书面表达)我和我的一些同学对比赛非常感兴趣，以至于我们组织了一个小组来参加比赛。2陈述语序：Papercutting is so attractive an

7、d alive that I think you could be interested in it.倒装语序：So attractive and alive is papercutting that I think you could be interested in it.(2017全国卷书面表达)剪纸是如此迷人和生动，以至于我想你可能对它感兴趣。3陈述语序：At the beginning，learning English was so difficult that I wanted to give up without even trying.(山东高考)倒装语序：At the beg

8、inning，so difficult was learning English that I wanted to give up without even trying.起初，学英语很难，以至于我还没尝试就想放弃。佳句输出1陈述语序： I was so_excited_that_I_couldnt_wait_to_try wearing them.倒装语序：So_excited_was_I_that_I_couldnt_wait_to try wearing them.我太激动了，迫不及待地想穿上它。(湖南高考书面表达)2陈述语序：The dough figurine he made was

9、_so_beautiful_that_we_couldnt_wait_to have a try ourselves.倒装语序：So_beautiful_was the dough figurine he made that_we_couldnt_wait_to have a try ourselves.他捏的面人如此漂亮，以至于我们都情不自禁地想要自己尝试一下。3陈述语序：He was so_nervous_that_he_could_hear his heart beating wildly.倒装语序：So_nervous_was_he_that_he_could_hear his hea

10、rt beating wildly.他是如此紧张以至于能听到自己的心在狂跳。4陈述语序：The houses in the city are so_expensive_that families with low income cant afford to buy one.倒装语序：So_expensive_are_the_houses_in_the_city_that families with low income cant afford to buy one.城市的房子如此贵，低收入家庭根本买不起。5陈述语序：Time is so_precious_that_we_cant_afford

11、 to waste it.倒装语序：So_precious_is_time_that_we_cant_afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们浪费不起它。作文中使用非限制性定语从句后，使得文章句式复杂，提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点，从而提升作文档次。美句输入1During holiday seasons，I will live in the countryside，where air is fresh and people are friendly.(全国卷满分作文)在假期，我会住在乡下，那里空气新鲜、人们友好。2Tang Poetry，which wins great

12、popularity with Chinese people as an important literary form，is what were going to learn the next class.(2017全国卷书面表达)唐诗作为一种重要的文学形式深受中国人喜爱，它也是我们下节课将要学的内容。3Papercutting is a traditional Chinese art with a long history，which is popular among many people.(2017全国卷书面表达)剪纸是中国传统艺术，有着悠久的历史，深受许多人的喜爱。佳句输出1I ho

13、pe you can help the students in our class to learn more about English and western culture，which_can_increase_understanding_and_help_build_good_relationships_between_us(天津高考满分作文) 我希望你能帮助我们班的学生更多地了解英国和西方文化，这能增进我们的理解并有助于我们建立良好的关系。2In addition，you should respect your teachers，who_unselfishly_help_you_to

14、_gain_much_knowledge(江西高考满分作文)另外，你应该尊重那些无私帮助你获得很多知识的老师们。 3First of all，the theme of the show is environmental protection，which_is_of_great_importance_in_todays_society(2016全国卷书面表达)首先，节目的主题是环境保护，这在当今社会是非常重要的。4Have you seen the film，whose_leading_actor_is_world_famous?你看过那部电影吗？它的男主演可是世界闻名的。写作中恰当运用what

15、从句不仅显得句式多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。美句输入1What I want to stress is that youd better bring some gifts，such as a book or a Chinese knot.(2018全国卷书面表达)我想强调的是你最好带些礼物，比如一本书或一个中国结。2Compared with the escaped driver，I am proud of what I did.(湖北高考短文写作)与逃跑的司机相比，我为自己所做之事感到非常自豪。3He was not conscious of what an importa

16、nt discovery he had made.他没有意识到自己做出了多么重要的发现。佳句输出1What_attracts_tourists_most is the spectacular view of sunrise on the top of it.(2017北京高考书面表达)最吸引游客的是山顶上壮丽的日出景色。2What_made_Yue_Fei_most_respectable was that he didnt give up fighting for his nation even when he was wronged by some.(2016北京高考书面表达)即使被一些人

17、冤枉，岳飞仍然为自己的国家而战，这是他最值得人们敬佩的地方。3What_I_am_going_to_tell_you is about the book donation from our school to your Chinese class.(天津高考满分作文)我打算告诉你的是关于我们学校向你们中文班赠书之事。4Only those who spare no effort can achieve what_they_long_for.(福建高考满分作文)只有那些不遗余力的人才能取得他们渴望的成就。5Today is what_we_can_hold_and_make_use_of(重庆高

18、考满分作文)今天是我们能够抓住并利用的。with复合结构的使用可成为作文中一道亮丽的风景线，让阅卷老师心旷神怡，想不给高分都难的很啊！美句输入1Moreover, with the stadium set up，all the students are accessible to the facilities.(2018全国卷书面表达)此外，随着体育场的建立，所有的学生都可以使用这些设施。2For one thing，with almost all of us having access to the Internet and other media sources，such news is

19、within our easy reach.(上海高考书面表达)一方面，随着几乎所有的人都能使用互联网和其他媒体资源，这样的消息很容易得到。3With all the work done，we went to the nearby neighbourhood and gave them to the people living there.(2016北京高考书面表达)做完所有的工作后，我们去了附近的社区，把它们给了住在那里的人们。佳句输出1The soldier had him stand with_his_back_to_his_father士兵让他背朝着他的父亲站在那儿。2He stood

20、 before his teacher with_his_head_down他低着头站在老师面前。 3With_so_many_people_to_help_us，we are sure to finish it in time.有这么多人来帮忙，我们一定能及时完成任务。 4I sat in my room for a few minutes with_my_eyes_fixed_on_the_ceiling我在房间坐了一会儿，眼睛盯着天花板。“only状语”放在句首的倒装句穿插于写作中，可令人眼前一亮，好感顿生。美句输入1Only when you come to China can you

21、 experience Chinese food culture.(2018全国卷书面表达)只有当你来到中国时，你才能体验中国的饮食文化。2As far as I am concerned，only by studying hard at ordinary time can you succeed eventually.(四川高考书面表达)就我而言，只有平时努力学习，你才能最终取得成功。3Only if we know what we do in our daily life and live a lowcarbon life can we make a difference.只有我们知道日常

22、生活做什么，过一种低碳生活，我们才能有影响。佳句输出1Only_when_one_loses_freedom_does_one know its value.一个人只有在失去自由后才知道自由的可贵。2The pilot reassured the passengers.Only_then_did_I_realize how dangerous the situation had been.飞机驾驶员要乘客们放心，只有在那时我才明白刚才的情况有多危险。3Only_in_this_way_can_Internet_voting make a real difference.(2016江苏高考书面表

23、达)只有这样，网络投票才真正有意义。4Only_by_shouting_was_he able to make himself heard.他只有叫喊才能让别人听到他。as/though引起的倒装句表转折，常放句首，是英语写作中的常见表达，也是高级表达的结构之一，灵活地运用也会让你的作文与众不同。美句输入1Busy though/as I am with the lessons，I have managed to find time to hang out with my friends.(2017天津高考书面表达)尽管忙着上课，我还是设法挤出时间和朋友们出去玩。2Teacher though

24、/as he is，he cant know everything.他虽然是老师，但也不可能什么都懂。3Hard though/as they tried，they couldnt make her change her mind.尽管他们做了很大努力，却没法让她改变主意。佳句输出1Surrounded_as/though_we_were_by_the_enemy，we managed to march forward.虽然我们被敌人包围着，但我们还是设法前进了。2Tired_as_he_was_last_night，he sat up late studying.昨晚他虽然很疲倦了，但还是学

25、习到很晚才睡。3Unfamiliar_though/as_some_of_the_questions_seem_to_me，they are easy to answer.(四川高考书面表达)虽然有些问题我似乎不熟悉，但很容易回答。4Child_as/though_he_is，he knows to help others.他虽是个孩子，但却知道帮助别人。5Hard_as/though_it_is_raining，Im going out for a walk.虽然正在下着大雨，我还是要出去散步。强调句型是一种修辞，我们恰当运用该句型可以准确表达我们的意愿或情感，使强调部分给阅卷老师留下深刻的

26、印象。美句输入1It is believed that it is an excellent opportunity that you mustnt miss.相信这是一个不容错过的好机会。2It was his continuous efforts that caused China to change gradually.(2016北京高考书面表达)正是他的不懈努力使得中国逐渐发生变化。3It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.(福建高考书面表达)重要的不是故事本身，而是故事中所反映

27、的东西。佳句输出1It_was_not_until_his_father_came_back_home_that he went to bed.直到他父亲回到家里他才睡。2It_was_my_friend_Jim_who/that did the experiment in the lab last night.昨晚是我的朋友吉姆在实验室里做实验。3It_is_because_the_book_is_so_useful_for_my_work_that I bought it.正因为这本书对我的工作很有用，我才买了它。4It_was_playing_computer_games_that co

28、st the boy a lot of money.电脑游戏花掉了这个孩子许多钱。5It_was_what_he_said_that surprised me.是他讲的话让我吃惊。it不仅可以看作简单的代词来用，还可用它引导出十分高大上的句型it作形式主语，后面真正的主语或为不定式，或为动名词或为从句。美句输入1It is obvious that some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.(2018北京高考书面表达)显然

29、，网上的一些汉语口语课程有助于你适应汉语环境。2It is reported that there will be a Chinese papercutting show this Sunday in the art gallery.(2017全国卷书面表达)据悉，本星期日在美术馆将有一个中国剪纸展。3Its a great pity that I have to cancel the Sunday bookstore appointment with you.(2016全国卷书面表达)非常遗憾我不得不取消我们周日一块儿逛书店的约定。佳句输出1As far as Im concerned，it

30、_is_everyones_duty_to_protect the earth(2016北京高考书面表达)在我看来，保护地球是每个人的责任。2It_is_likely_that_I_will_work_as_a_volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(山东高考满分作文)有可能我会在学校里作为一名志愿者当教学助手。3Its_no_use_doing_a_lot_of_work without thoughtful planning.没有周到的计划而做一大堆工作是没用的。4It_is_a_surprise_that you should

31、have given such an answer to the question.你对这个问题竟然做了这样的回答，这真是一个意外。5It_is_doubtful_whether this method is more scientific.这个方法是否更科学值得怀疑。it作形式宾语，与it作形式主语所指代内容一样，它能使句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明，从而使文章的语言活起来、亮起来。美句输入1I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.(2017全国卷书面表达)我觉得和你一起

32、学习唐诗是很有趣的。2Parents usually have such high expectations that their children find it hard to live up to them.(2016上海高考书面表达)父母通常有如此高的期望值，以至于孩子觉得很难不辜负父母的期望。3I would appreciate it very much if you could check the contents and format for me.(2016全国卷书面表达)如果你能为我检查一下内容和格式，我将不胜感激。佳句输出1They felt/thought_it_dif

33、ficult_to_finish_the_work_in such a short time.他们认为在这么短的时间内完成这项工作是困难的。2The professor considers_it_no_good_reading without understanding.这位教授认为阅读而不理解没有益处。3I think_it_my_honor_to_be_invited_to_speak_here我觉得应邀在这儿演讲是我的荣耀。4Tom found_it_not_difficult_to_write_letters in Chinese.汤姆发现用汉语写信并不难。5We all though

34、t_it_a_pity_that the conference should have been cancelled.会议取消了我们都感到很遗憾。“主语beadj.不定式”的结构简单、实用，能使文章整齐和谐，抑扬顿挫，有助于增强表达效果。美句输入1All of us think the short film is interesting to watch，which is a documentary on the history of our school. (2018全国卷书面表达)我们都认为这部短片看起来很有趣，这是一部关于我们学校历史的纪录片。2The chair looks rathe

35、r hard，but in fact it is very comfortable to sit on.这把椅子看上去很硬，但事实上坐在上面很舒服。3The problem isnt easy enough for him to work out. 问题太难了，他算不出来。 佳句输出1The main problem in my study is that_words_are_difficult_to_memorize我在学习中的主要问题是很难记住单词。2This_machine_is_very_easy_to_operateAnybody can learn to use it in a f

36、ew minutes.这台机器很容易操作。任何人学习几分钟就会使用。3A man who/that_is_so_difficult_to_please_must be hard_to_work_with一个很难取悦的人一定很难与之共事。4Although the lady looks elegant，actually_she_is_hard_to_get_along_with尽管这位女士看上去很优雅，但实际上却很难与之相处。5I like getting up very early in summer because_the_morning_air_is_so_fresh_to_breathe

37、我喜欢在夏天起得很早因为早晨的空气闻起来很清新。“疑问词不定式”结构紧凑，言简意明，它的合理运用能给文章增色添彩，从而“加分”多多。美句输入1With the Teachers Day approaching，weve decided which classrooms to decorate.随着教师节的临近，我们已经决定要装饰哪些教室了。2Seeing such a crowd of audience below the stage，he was too nervous to know what to say.看到舞台下有那么多的观众，他紧张得不知道说什么。3When and where t

38、o hold the meeting remains to be discussed further.何时何地举行会议有待于进一步讨论。佳句输出1Would you please advise me which_one_to_buy?你能否告诉我该买哪一个才好？2Please explain (to me)where_to_begin_and_how_to_do_it请 (给我)解释该从哪里开始及该怎么做。3They exchanged views on the_question_of_whom_to_elect他们就该选谁的问题交换了意见。4It is my honor to be here

39、 to share with you my opinions on_what_to_learn_in_senior_high_school(江西高考书面表达)我很荣幸在这里和大家交流在高中要学习什么的看法。5With its focus divided，the lion becomes confused and is unsure about_what_to_do_next由于注意力分散，狮子变得迷惑起来，不能确定下一步做什么。高中英语书面表达中，“越越”之类的表达颇为实用。若能合理利用，“好处”多多，不容小觑。美句输入1The more you know about our traditio

40、n culture，the more you are interested in it.你对我们的传统文化了解越多，你对它就越感兴趣。2The harder you work，the greater progress you will make.你工作越努力，进步就越大。3The more careful you are，the fewer mistakes you will make.你越小心，你犯的错就会越少。佳句输出1The_more_he_thought_like_this，the_more_unhappy_he_became.他越是这样想，就越是不开心。2The_more_a_per

41、son_reads，the_wiser_he_will_become.一个人书读得越多就会变得越明智。3The_more_you_talk_to_the_children，the_less_they_will_listen.你对孩子说得越多，他们听进去的就越少。4The_higher_you_stand，the_farther_you_will_see.你站得越高就看得越远。5The_more_you_know，the_more_you_will_realize_how little you_know.知道得越多，你越会体会到自己知道得有限。在写作中应巧妙利用并列连词not only.but

42、(also).，以使句子整齐对称，从而使自己的作文增加得高分的亮点。美句输入1Not only Jack but also his sister was taken to watch the 2016 Rio Olympics last summer.去年夏天不仅杰克还有他妹妹都被带去观看2016年里约奥运会。2Practising Chinese kung fu can not only build up ones strength，but also develop ones character.练中国功夫不但能增强体质，还能培养一个人的性格。3Not only will I earn mu

43、ch money but I will also gain some social experience through the job.(倒装语序)通过做这份工作，我不仅可以赚许多钱，而且还能获得一些社会经验。佳句输出1Not_only_does_the_sun_give_us_light_but_also_it_gives_us_heat.(倒装语序)太阳不仅给了我们阳光， 也给了我们热量。2Not_only_does_he_speak_English_correctly，but_also_he_speaks it fluently.(倒装语序)他不仅英语说得正确， 还说得流利。 3. T

44、his_young_man_is_not_only_clever_but_also_hardworking.(陈述语序)这个小伙子不仅聪明， 也很勤奋。4Yet through his painstaking efforts，he_changed_not_only_his_own fate_but also the_history_of_America然而通过这些艰苦的努力，他不但改变了自己的命运也改变了美国的历史。5Not_only_do_I_like_this_movie，but_(also)_my_mother_likes_it.(倒装语序)不但我喜欢这部电影，我的妈妈也很爱看它。“介词

45、关系代词(which/whom)”引导的定语从句属于高级句式，它的使用使得文章句式复杂，亮点增多，体现作者的深厚功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，是作文的增分点。美句输入1Not only will all kinds of papercutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day，but a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held as well，from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture. (2017全国卷书面表达)不仅由这一领域的著名艺术家们创作的各种剪纸作品会在那天展出，而且还有许多有益、有趣的活动，从中你可以更清楚地了解中国文化。2He referred me to some reference books with which I am not very familiar.他叫我去查阅一些我并不熟悉的参考书。3The documents for which they wer