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1、最新中考英语书面表达汇编一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如下:（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但要求：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Boys and girls,Im very happy to speak here and Id like to talk about

2、my grandma._Thats all. Thank you!【答案】Boys and girls,Im very happy to speak here and Id like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. Whatsmore, she has a

3、 lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they cant fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings

4、of others and they shouldnt make a lot of noise.Thats all. Thank you!【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。要注意随着文章推进时态的变化，一开始应该选择一般过去时，而后面应该选用一般现在时，最后表达自己观点的时候也应该使用一般现在时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关系，构思文章框架，列举出可能会用到的好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考词汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的连词，使文章更加顺畅，自然。2书面表达假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨

5、论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：1节水节电 2垃圾分类 3少用纸巾，重拾手帕4步行、骑自行车或公交出行、参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it_Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Than

6、k you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about itWe can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, wed better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also

7、 matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, ridin

8、g bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We can do，wed better，we suggest，which contributes to等句式的应用。写作中

9、注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括：1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？

10、要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes

11、 I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of th

12、e people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are，I prefer to，Mobile phones bring，w

13、e can，we should，So lets等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in ones opinion, try one s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候

14、有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?2. 变化是如何发生的?3. 变化后有什么感受?_【答案】The biggest personal change Ive ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didnt enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love

15、 reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：

16、When I was，my mother always read，Gradually I began to，Books are等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不

17、少。5书面表达根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。基本情况张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生兴趣爱好1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。优秀事迹上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程未来梦想1. 希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：.（举1例）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student

18、 in Sunshine Middle School._【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year

19、to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustnt throw rubbish everywhere.

20、【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make so

21、me changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6书面表达每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。要求：1.

22、 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。A（n） _ I have_【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. Its a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was y

23、oung, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My fami

24、ly was poor then and my father didnt promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldie

25、r and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my fathers love forever. Every time I miss him, Ill take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。写作亮

26、点：这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作

27、文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。7书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：1. 你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法；2. 说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。作文要求：1不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2语句连贯，词数80个左右。 作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词

28、数。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying

29、 at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others help

30、. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法、发生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓励大家相互帮助，并让世界充满正能量。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用

31、时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try ones best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in ones opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要

32、求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。8近期某英文报纸就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪

33、机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。“扫雪机式父母”的特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。观点理解不理解父母出于对孩子的爱才这么做。父母控制一切，孩子没有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：1、词数：60-80词。2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。_【答案】例文I really cant understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they con

34、trol everything.They clean all the obstacles in childrens lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldnt do all the things for children.Because they also need the

35、experiences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文

36、是一篇话题作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）” 这一话题展开讨论，并根据表格中所给出的提示内容选择一种观点，结合此观点阐述自己的看法。在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，然后再动笔写作。2.例文点评： 本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称，辅以第一人称。文章首先说明不理解扫雪机式父母的原因，接下来说明自己的观点，并阐述自己观点的原因。3.高分亮点：短语：in ones lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，

37、theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasilyInthiscase在这样的情况下；这句话意为：在这样的情况下，他们认为孩子会更加轻松拥有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻烦，这句话意为：当他们陷入麻烦时他们知道他们需要他们自己尽力去解决问题。9 朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎

38、么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的要求：1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密2. 词数80-1003. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need._【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They alwa

39、ys help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldnt hel