人教新课标高二英语必修五-unit-5-First-aid-写作课件.ppt

1、1.从自行车上摔下来从自行车上摔下来2.受伤受伤3.正在流血正在流血4.人工呼吸人工呼吸5.急救中心急救中心6.开始呼吸开始呼吸相关短语相关短语fall off the bicycleget injuredbe bleedingthe mouth-to-mouth wayFirst Aid Centrestart ones breathing7.把手帕压在出血口上把手帕压在出血口上8.喊救命喊救命9.把某人拉上来把某人拉上来10.苏醒，恢复意识苏醒，恢复意识 press a handkerchief onto the bleeding pointcall for helppulled sb.o

2、utcome to oneself11.跳进湖里跳进湖里12.包扎伤口包扎伤口13.急救知识急救知识14.受到高度赞扬受到高度赞扬15.不遗余力地做某事不遗余力地做某事jump into the lakeblind up injuriesknowledge of first aidbe thought highly oftake great pains to do sth16.为我们树立了一个好榜样为我们树立了一个好榜样17.向某人致谢向某人致谢18.表达对某人的感谢表达对某人的感谢 set a good example for usbe grateful/thankful to sb.exp

3、ress ones gratitude to sb.1.On Sunday morning,my classmate Lihua and I _ along the street _ we saw an old man fall off his bike.周日早晨，当我和同学周日早晨，当我和同学李华逛街时，我们突然看见一位老李华逛街时，我们突然看见一位老人从自行车上摔下来。人从自行车上摔下来。2.The old mans leg got injured _.老人的腿受伤了，流血不止。老人的腿受伤了，流血不止。相关句式相关句式were wanderingwhenbleeding3.A numbe

4、r of people crowded around,_.许多人围过来并且试许多人围过来并且试着帮助他。着帮助他。4.Lihua telephone the first aid center _ I put my hands on towels from my bag to blind up the injures over and over again.李华给急救中心打电话，我从包里李华给急救中心打电话，我从包里找到纸巾反复包扎伤口找到纸巾反复包扎伤口 trying to help himwhile5._ some knowledge of first aid because it will

5、 make a difference in saving people.掌握基本的急救知识是非常必要的，因为掌握基本的急救知识是非常必要的，因为在救人方面将产生影响。在救人方面将产生影响。It is necessary to have1.记叙事件的写作一般按照事件发展的顺记叙事件的写作一般按照事件发展的顺序来写作。一般第一个句子为总起序来写作。一般第一个句子为总起,描述谁描述谁(who)何时何时(when)何地何地(where)发生了什么事发生了什么事(what)。由于是记叙事件。由于是记叙事件,接下去可以按照接下去可以按照时间发展顺序进行信息点的划分。事件的时间发展顺序进行信息点的划分。事件

6、的内容比较多内容比较多,可以用两三句话分别表述，通可以用两三句话分别表述，通常使用一般过去时态。接下来是评价，通常使用一般过去时态。接下来是评价，通常使用一般现在时态。最后一两句就是对常使用一般现在时态。最后一两句就是对这件事的感受，通常使用一般现在时态或这件事的感受，通常使用一般现在时态或一般过去时态都可以。一般过去时态都可以。2.可以用一些与时间相关的词如可以用一些与时间相关的词如then,later,next,afterwards,soon after that,finally,the next day,on the third day等或一些时间状语从句等或一些时间状语从句After.

7、,before.等把要点合理连贯等把要点合理连贯地连接在一起。地连接在一起。3.若试题要求写自己的感受若试题要求写自己的感受,不能只是不能只是用用I am very happy等简单句等简单句,而是尽量而是尽量用复合句来充分表达自己的观点。另用复合句来充分表达自己的观点。另外外,记叙文多涉及情感相关的用词记叙文多涉及情感相关的用词,平平时可以多积累这样的单词或短语时可以多积累这样的单词或短语,如如an unforgettable experience,to my joy/delight,be satisfied/content with等等等。等。时间时间上星期六下午上星期六下午地点地点在中山

8、公园的湖边在中山公园的湖边事事件件我和朋友在散步，湖中一个女孩在呼我和朋友在散步，湖中一个女孩在呼救。我们跳进湖中救人，对她做了人救。我们跳进湖中救人，对她做了人工呼吸。孩子恢复知觉后，被送进医工呼吸。孩子恢复知觉后，被送进医院。我们打电话通知孩子的家长。院。我们打电话通知孩子的家长。评评价价家长很感激，医生对我们的急救给予家长很感激，医生对我们的急救给予高度评价。高度评价。感受感受懂得急救知识很重要。懂得急救知识很重要。根据以下信息写一篇短文。例题导例题导写写1.审题：因为是记叙文，所以审题：因为是记叙文，所以用用 _人称，人称，叙述已叙述已发生的事应该用发生的事应该用_，评价用评价用_,感

9、受则用感受则用_或者或者_。第一第一/三三一般过去时一般过去时一般现在时一般现在时一般过去时一般过去时一般现在时一般现在时2.信信息息重组重组(1)首先为总起，描述谁首先为总起，描述谁(who)何时何时(when)何地何地(where)发生了什么事发生了什么事(what)。_(2)其次是事件发展的过程。其次是事件发展的过程。(3)事件的内容比较多，接下来可以按事件的内容比较多，接下来可以按照时间发展顺序进行各信息点的叙述。照时间发展顺序进行各信息点的叙述。(4)最后就是事件的评价和感受。最后就是事件的评价和感受。上星期六下午，我正和朋友在中上星期六下午，我正和朋友在中山公园的湖边散步，突然听见

10、湖中一个女山公园的湖边散步，突然听见湖中一个女孩在呼救。孩在呼救。3.翻译句子翻译句子1).上星期六下午，我上星期六下午，我正正和朋友在中和朋友在中山公园的湖边散步，山公园的湖边散步，突然突然听见湖中一听见湖中一个女孩在呼救。个女孩在呼救。On the afternoon of last Saturday,my friend and I were walking by the lake in Zhongshan Park when suddenly we heard a girl calling for help in the lake.2).我们我们赶紧赶紧跳进湖中，把她拉上来，跳进湖中，把

11、她拉上来，并对她做了人工呼吸。并对她做了人工呼吸。We hurried to jump into the lake,pulled her out and made her breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way.3).孩子恢复知觉孩子恢复知觉后后，被送进医院。，被送进医院。After the girl came to herself,she was sent to hospital.4).与此同时与此同时，我们打电话通知孩子，我们打电话通知孩子的家长。的家长。Meanwhile,we telephoned the girls parents.4.家长很感激，医

12、生对我们的急救给予高家长很感激，医生对我们的急救给予高度评价。度评价。Her parents were very thankful to us and the doctors thought highly of our first aid.5.这件事使我们意识到这件事使我们意识到，懂得急救知识很，懂得急救知识很重要。重要。The accident made us realize that knowing first aid is very important for everyone.4.连句成篇：连句成篇：.参考范文参考范文 On the afternoon of last Saturday

13、,my friend and I were walking by the lake in Zhongshan Park when suddenly we heard a girl calling for help in the lake.We hurried to jump into the lake without taking off our clothes,swam towards her and pulled her out.We made her breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way before she came to herself.Then

14、she was sent to hospital and we telephoned the girls parents.Her parents were very thankful to us and the doctors thought highly of our first aid,which made us realize that knowing first aid is very important for everyone.课后练习课后练习写信目的：感谢小明在事故后及时救了你的弟弟。写信目的：感谢小明在事故后及时救了你的弟弟。回顾经过：回顾经过：看到小华被小车碰倒，从自行车上摔

15、下来时，看到小华被小车碰倒，从自行车上摔下来时，小明及时打电话报警；小明及时打电话报警；立刻致电立刻致电120急救中心，把小华送入医院；急救中心，把小华送入医院；小明去医院看望小华，让小华振作起来，身心小明去医院看望小华，让小华振作起来，身心得到康复。得到康复。表示感激：没有小明的帮助，我兄弟就不会得以表示感激：没有小明的帮助，我兄弟就不会得以获救并快速康复。获救并快速康复。假如你是李华，你的弟弟小华是在遭遇事故后由假如你是李华，你的弟弟小华是在遭遇事故后由于小明的及时帮助才顺利得救的。于小明的及时帮助才顺利得救的。写作内容写作内容 请给小明写一封感谢信，内容包括：请给小明写一封感谢信，内容包

16、括：Dear Xiaoming,I am writing to thank you for your great kindness to save my brother Xiaohua after the accident.I still remember that it was you who noticed my brother knocked down by a car and fell off his bicycle and called the police without hesitation What is more,you immediately called 120,whic

17、h took my brother to hospital in time.Not only did you go to the hospital to visit him,but also cheered him up,which helped him recover mentally as well as physically.Had it not been for your help,my brother would not have been saved successfully and recovered so quickly.Please accept my warmest tha

18、nks!Yours,Li Hua Dear Xiaoming,I am writing to thank you for your great kindness to save my brother Xiaohua after the accident.I still remember that it was you who noticed my brother knocked down by a car and fell off his bicycle and called the police without hesitation What is more,you immediately

19、called 120,which took my brother to hospital in time.Not only did you go to the hospital to visit him,but also cheered him up,which helped him recover mentally as well as physically Had it not been for your help,my brother would not have been saved successfully and recovered so quickly.Please accept my warmest thanks!Yours,Li Hua