（概要写作）（讲评）（15）（放慢生活节奏）课件.pptx

1、Reading passageThese days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rushIt appears that people have got used to being in a hurryHowever，its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done The main reason that convinces us to oppose d

2、oing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushWhen people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they cant make a sound decision and probably regret laterAs the saying goes，Haste makes waste We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quicklyWe should

3、not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane However，taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends Besides，it

4、allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the wayOn the contrary，being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us As is known to all，taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stressPeople

5、think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys themBut being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentallyAccording to some studies，people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases，tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if

6、the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advancedYet，much stress cant bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantagesTherefore，take your time

7、and live your life at a slower pace Steps of writing1明确主旨结构2寻找主题句3提取主次信息4独立表达5语篇衔接keywordsfor topicThese days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rushIt appears that people have got used to being in a hurryHowever，its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower

8、 pace than to hurry to get things done The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushWhen people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they cant make a sound decision and probably regret laterAs the saying goes，Haste makes waste We sh

9、ould think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quicklyWe should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane However，taking a

10、 train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends Besides，it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the wayOn the contrary，being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us As is

11、 known to all，taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stressPeople think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys themBut being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentallyAccording to some studies，people who have a slower pace suffer fewer dise

12、ases，tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advancedYet，much stress cant bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are m

13、uch more important than money and other material advantagesTherefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace live a slower lifeargumentationStructureThese days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rushIt appears that people have got used to being in a hurryHowever，its better

14、for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushWhen people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they cant make a sound decision and pr

15、obably regret laterAs the saying goes，Haste makes waste We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quicklyWe should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better For example，taking a train to some place certa

16、inly will take more time than taking a plane However，taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends Besides，it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the wayOn the contrary，being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives Finally，sl

17、ower life pace provides better health conditions for us As is known to all，taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stressPeople think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys themBut being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentallyAccording to

18、 some studies，people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases，tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advancedYet，mu

19、ch stress cant bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantagesTherefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace arguments reason1reason2 reason3conclusion thesisthesisIdentify the textual pattern.structure of argumentation Para.1Th

20、ese days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rushIt appears that people have got used to being in a hurryHowever，Sentence Function KeywordsS1S2S3引出要点引出要点提出论点rushget used to,in a hurrylive their life at a slower paceFigure out the relationship between sentences.Para.2 The main reason th

21、at convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushWhen people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they cant make a sound decision and probably regret laterAs the saying goes，Haste makes waste We should think carefully before making a decision and do our

22、work less quicklyWe should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedlySentence Function Keywords S1S2S3S4,S5 提出要点举例论证引用论证提出建议reason,possibilty,do wrongsHast makes wastethink carefully,do work less quicklycant make a sound decision Figure out the relationship between sentences.Para.3Slowing down the pa

23、ce of life helps people enjoy their life better For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane However，taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends Besides，it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the

24、wayOn the contrary，being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives Sentence Function keywordsS1S2,S3,S4S5提出要点举例论证补充要点help enjoy life betterFor example hurry,lose chances,enjoyingFigure out the relationship between sentences.Para.4Finally，slower life pace provides better health condi

25、tions for us As is known to all，taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stressPeople think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys themBut being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentallyAccording to some studies，people who have a slower pace

26、 suffer fewer diseases，tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter Sentence Function keywordsS1S2,S3,S4S5提出要点指出危害研究论证hurt,physically and mentallyfewer diseases,happier,live longerFigure out the relationship between

27、 sentences.better health conditionsPara.5In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advancedYet，much stress cant bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantagesTherefore，take your time and live y

28、our life at a slower pace Sentence Function keywordsS1S2S3提及好外对比论证提出要点enjoymet,friends,health,importanttake your time,a slower paceFigure out the relationship between sentences.material benefitsDraft of the versionIts better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to

29、hurry to get things done(要点1)The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush(要点2)Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better(要点3)Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us(要点4)Therefore，take

30、your time and live your life at a slower pace(要点5)点评：【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)l despitel in spite ofl whilel although/though Summary for Para.1However，recommendl suggestl advise live a slower lifeDespite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society，people

31、are recommended to lead a slower life【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)Summary for Para.2The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushSlowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors by comprehensive

32、 thinking slower down the life make mistakescommit errors【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)Summary for Para.3Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life betterMore opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作

33、】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)Summary for Para.4Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us Lastly，better health condition physically and mentally is also what a slower life brings physical and mental health【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)Summary for P

34、ara.5Therefore，take your time and live your life at a slower paceTherefore，lets take a slower life from now on【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)CoherenceThesisReason 1Reason 2Reason 3Link2:also,likewise,besides,furthermore,in addition,etc.Link3:so,thus,therefore,hence,acc

35、ordingly,consequently,etc.Use link words if necessary.ConclusionLink2:Link1:first,firstly,primarily,initally,at begining,etc.【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)One possible versionDespite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society，people are recommended to lead a

36、slower life.(要点1)Primarily，slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors by comprehensive thinking(要点2)Besides，more opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace(要点3)Moreover，better health condition physically and mentally is also what a slower life brings(要点4)Therefore，lets take a slower life from now on(要点5)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)The endThe end【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)