2020中考英语作文：现代生活.doc

1、05 现代生活篇现代生活篇 （一）（一） 根据相关研究预测，如果缺乏有效干预措施，到 2025 年，中国将有 5000 万超重儿童，居世 界首位。假如你是校园网的一名小记者，针对这一问题，请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文。 提示： 1. 我国青少年肥胖问题日益严重； 2. 吃太多的高脂肪食品和不运动”是导致青 少年肥胖的主要原因； 3. 建议青少年健康饮食，多运动，养成良好的 生活习惯。 要求： 写作内容必须包含以上提示的所有内容，可以适当发挥； 80 词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词 数。 A study has predicted that over 50 million chil

2、dren will be overweight in China by 2025 if any thing isnt done._ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isnt done. In China, the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating

3、fatty food and they hardly exercise. How should we solve the problem? Firstly, children must have healthy eating habits. They should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat and junk food. Secondly, they should exercise often. Itll make them healthy and feel good. Finally, keep some good living h

4、abits such as getting up early and going to bed early. In a word, healthy eating, proper exercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter. 【写作指导】 健康是与我们息息相关的话题，同学们可以选择自身作为切入点，详细讲述为自己制定的运动计划。 （二）（二） 假如你是李华,给你在英国朋友 Jack 写一封电子邮件, 告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势, 并 告诉他一些防御措施，请他注意防护。要点如下: 1 我们的城市对于

5、控制疫情已经取得较大的成功。 2 注意防护，如减少外出，带口罩外出，勤洗手等。 3 表达战胜疫情的信心。 注意: 1、可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯; 2、80-100 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：novel coronavirus（新型冠状病毒）口罩：mask. _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 Dear Jack, How is everything going? Novel coronavirus has spread throughout the world .Our city has achieved great success in controllin

6、g it. I have some advice for you on how to prevent it. The most important thing is to stay at home, try not to get together with your family and friends. Second, wash your hands often with soap and water. It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus. Third, when you have to go out, you must we

7、ar a mask to cover your mouth and nose, and learn how to put it on, take it off and throw it away correctly .Remember, if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital , and let a doctor give you further examination. All of these are helpful to keep you safe. We believe winter will fi

8、nally pass, and spring is sure to come. We will go back to school as soon as possible. Hope everything goes well with you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以李华的身份，用第一人称给在英国朋友 Jack 写一封电子邮件，告 知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势，并告诉他一些防御措施，书写时要注意用全题干所给提示要点， 文句通顺，内容完整。 2.例文点评：本例文层次分明，第一层讲述新型冠状病毒已经传遍全球，第二层讲述防范措施，第 三层展望战胜疫情

9、的信心；短文陈述的中心突出，层次之间有机联系。 3.高分亮点：本篇例文运用的短语 spread throughout the world；achieve great success in； have some advice for you on ； keep you away from； 文中用不定式的不同句式 The most important thing is to stay at home；It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus；try not to get together with your family and fri

10、ends； All of these are helpful to keep you safe； 多种复合句条件状语从句 if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital ；宾语从句 We believe winter will finally pass, and spring is sure to come. 【点睛】 本篇是材料作文，书写前要认真阅读题干，了解题干的要求，确定中心话题，依据题干要求，分好 短文的层次，确定层次的内容，使短文看起来逻辑清晰；建议使用表顺序的副词或短语表达有关防 御措施，使短文更有条理

11、。 （三）（三） 假如你是阳光中学的李华，即将要毕业的你，对学习和生活了三年的母校充满了眷恋和感恩， 想在当地报刊上发表一篇英语文章描述自己的母校。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。 学校 优美的学习环境。 现代化的操场。 同学 相互学习，相互帮助。 积极参加课外活动，提高能力。 老师 对我们的一切要求严格。 (自拟一点） 感想 (自拟两点） 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。 2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。“”部分需自拟。 3. 词数 90 个左右。 My Mother School I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I hav

12、e enjoyed a lot during the past three years. _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years. Its a very beautiful school which provides us with a good environment to study. There is a modern playground in our school and we often

13、play basketball there. Besides that, we often learn from each other and help each other in our daily life. We take an active part in after-school activities and it improves our abilities. The teachers are strict with us, but they are patient enough to explain everything to us. When something worries

14、 me, I often ask my teacher for help. Im proud I can study in this school, and Ill remember my mother school forever. 【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇该材料作文，写一写自己对三年来母校的感想。本题所给材料较为详细。写作 中注意从学校，老师和同学们三个方面进行叙述，并表达自己的感想。根据材料内容可知本文时态 人称问题比较复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配，注意主谓一致问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面 性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。 考点：提纲类作文 点评：此

15、类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识， 不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的 背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。 （四）（四） 根据文字提示,请你以“ How to Keep Safe in School”为话题,写一篇 80-100 词的英语短文,谈谈你 的看法 要点:1.描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园的意外事件(经过与结果 2.提出避免这种校园意外的建议(至少两条); 3.呼吁同学们注意校园安全 要求:1.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;2.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数 提示词汇: not

16、 run in the hall ways, stop from doing, pay attention to How to Keep Safe in School Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example_ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 How to Keep Safe in School Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not carefu

17、l enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for several days. So I think students should walk and do not run in the hallways. And the teachers had be

18、tter keep one eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school. 【解析】 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文。主要写三个方面的内容：描述一件发生在校园里的意外事件，要 写明经过和结果，用一般过去时态；提出至少两条避免意外发生的建议，用一般现在时；最后要呼 吁同学们注意校园安全。同时要注意提示词汇的使用。 例文点评：这篇短文内容清晰完整语言简洁正确。首先举例描

19、述发生在校园里的意外事件，有过程 有结果，接着用 I think 引入自己的建议，最后用 I hope+从句的方式呼吁学生们要注意校园安全。 高分亮点： 短语： ran after each other ； because of； fell down； keep one eye on； stop them from running； pay attention to。 句型：had better do sth 最好做某事；I hope +从句。 （五）（五） 昨天你班召开了一次“告别陋习，走上文明”的主题班会。会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。 请你根据表格里的内容写一篇有关王明同学的文章。

20、过去的表现 现在的表现 经常和同学打架(fight) 和同学相处融洽( be good with) 花很多时间玩电脑游戏(spend time doing) 积极 (active)参加各项活动 (activity) 经常吃垃圾食品( junk food) 健康的生活习惯( living habits) 在课堂上吃东西，睡觉(either.or.) 认真听课，按时完成(finish)作业 考试不及格(fail) 各门学科取得好成绩，尤其 ( especially)数学 注意:1 文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥使短文的意思连贯语句通顺。 2 不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。字数 80 左右，

21、(文章的开头已给出，不计入总字数) Wang Ming is my classmate. He had made great progress this term. In the past, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 Wang Ming is my classmate. He had made great progress this term. In the past, he always fought with others. He used to spend much time playing computer games. And he often ate

22、junk food. In class he either ate or slept. He always failed the exam. But now he changed a lot. He can be good with other students. He take an active part in all kinds of activities, and becomes very outgoing .He has healthy eating habits. Also he listens to the teachers carefully in class and fini

23、shes his homework on time. So he gets good grades in all subjects, especially math. Now we all like him. 【解析】 题干解读：本文属于材料作文，根据你班召的主题班会“告别陋习，走上文明”的主题班会。谈谈你 身边同学的变化。这篇文中涉及到了过去和现在的不同变化。文中需要用到一般过去时和一般现在 时态。 2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务。本文是两段式，第一段介绍了 过去的情况，第二段是现在的变化。语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用 一些亮点词句，增

24、强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：make great progress；in the past；fight with；either or；take an active part in；healthy eating habits。 句型：He used to spend much time playing computer games（used to do 的句型） ；He take an active part in all kinds of activities, and becomes very outgoing （六）（六） 初三学生

25、 Sandy 面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望及每天堆成山的作业感到非常苦恼，昨天 因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据下列 提示以老师 Nancy 的身份用英语给她写一封回信。 提示： 1如何舒缓目前的压力； 2如何安排好每天的学习和休息； 3如何处理与父母的关系。 注意： 1必须包括要点中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥； 2文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 3表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 4词数不少于 90 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 。 Dear Sandy， Im really glad that you can share y

26、our problems and feelings with me Here is my advice_ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours， Nancy 【满分【满分范文范文】 Dear Sandy， Im really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me Here is my advice （点题） First， its a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure 【高分句型 一】Second， you

27、 can make plans for your everyday life After you study for about two hours， you can take a walk outside and try to relax Besides， dont stay up late Its not good for your healthThird， never argue with your parents You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them Discuss

28、 your problems with them and tell them your ideas They will help you find better ways to solve them （建议） In a word， you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents 【高分句型二】 （总结全文） Yours， Nancy （七）（七） 九年级的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦请根据下面提示，以“Our Sch

29、ool Life in Grade Nine 为题写一篇词数为 80 左右的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议 提示： 1 在学校：老师认真负责，充满爱心；学生：（至少发挥两点） 2 周末作业：作业多，舍弃爱好；周末活动：锻炼、电视 愿望：（发挥一到两点） 要求：1 短文须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3 词数 80 个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 参考词汇：patient， carefully， actively， stressed 紧张的 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 Our School Life in Gra

30、de Nine It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student 【高分句型一】 Here is what our school life is like now （点题） At school, all of our teachers work very hardMost of them are kindhearted and patient enough to help us with all kinds of problemsAs for students， in class we listen to the

31、teacher carefully and think actively After class，we are busy doing our homework We all work hard to improve ourselves On weekends, we spend much time doing homework， so we cant spare time for our hobbies any moreI feel a little stressed，so I try to play basketball or watch TV to get relaxedI hope to

32、 work hard to make my dream come true I also wish my classmates healthy and happy every day （介绍学校生活） No pains， no gainsThe more carefully we plan our day， the more colorful our school life will be 【高分句型二】 （总结全文） （八八） 近年来，我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不敢去学 校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果请以“My opinions about scho

33、ol bullying 为题“，写一篇英语短 文，谈谈你的看法 提示： 1What do you think of school bullying？ 2What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied？ 要求： 1所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2.80 词以上 参考词汇：心理问题 mental health problems My opinions about school bullying _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 My opinions about

34、 school bullying School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset Some students are afraid of going to school School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems So how should we stop school bullyin

35、g？（我对校园欺凌 的看法） If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied， I will tell the teachers or my parents at once 【高 分句型一】 It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own 【高分句型二】 （如果被 欺负，我会怎么做） （九）（九） 初中生活即将结束，这三年一定给你留下很多美好的回忆英语俱乐部征文要求写篇 110 词左 右文章描述你难忘的校园生活、 师生情或同学情 以及在临别之际， 对他们说的感

36、激和祝福的话 文 中不得出现真实的人名和校名 【满分【满分范文范文】 How time flies!Our junior high school days are coming to an end ， and Id like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me 【高分句型一】 （点题） Firstly，Id like to thank my great teachersThey teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a manThough they look strict and serious，they are always kind to me （感谢老师