2020中考英语作文： 旅游交通.doc

1、10 旅游交通篇旅游交通篇 （一）（一） 你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人，请你写一篇发言稿， 在你校英语时光广播中号召更多的同学参加。 要求： 1. 80100 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： 1. 活动缘由（孤独、帮扶、游学） 2. 活动构想（时间、地点、内容） 3. Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called Be a Kid in the Mountain. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Thank you! 【写作思路写作思路】

2、 这是一篇发言稿，也就是材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下在暑假期间到山区为期一 周的游学和帮扶活动的情况。 目的是： 号召更多的同学参加。 主要从活动缘由 （孤独、 帮扶、 游学） ； 活动构想（时间、地点、内容）和其他方面来介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注 意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我 们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致 问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【满分满分范文范文】 Hello, everybody. I am p

3、lanning a summer trip called “Be a kid in the Mountains“. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains. As many of their parents leave for the city to work, those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them

4、 some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire. Isnt that exciting? Come and join us. Lets be “a

5、kid in the mountains“.I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us. Thank you! 【名师点评】【名师点评】 （1）高分句型一 As many of their parents leave for the city to work，those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying.由于很多父母都去城市工

6、作，这些学生可能会 感到孤独，有些人甚至觉得很难继续学习。it hard to go on studying.中的it是形式宾语。 （2）高分句型二 I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.我相信它会给山里的孩子们带来阳光，也会给我们带来更多的信心。句子it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.是宾语从句

7、。作believe的宾语。 （二）（二） 丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语 写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。 活动内容： 1上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念； 2下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡 70 年巨变。 你的感想： 1师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助； 2倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国； 3. （考生自己发挥） 要求： 1词数 100 左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。 2所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。 3不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 参考词汇：市民广场 Civ

8、ic Square In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。 所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、

9、拍照留念；2下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感 谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介 绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。 写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语 习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密， 符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【满分满分范文范文】 In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school li

10、fe, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the Peoples Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmat

11、es for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizens Square. In Peoples Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my

12、country. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮 助。该句话用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。 【高分句型二】 In Peoples Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们

13、看了70年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家 乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人 读起来朗朗上口。 （三）（三） 假如你是李华， 你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以美丽的黄河风情线 (The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。 1. 风情线总览(the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yel

14、low River)； 2. 聚焦景观(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车), many parks)； 3. 休闲娱乐(fly kites, play chess)； 4. 特色游览(go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus)。 要求：1. 80 词左右； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；内容上可适度发挥。 注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思写作思路路】 这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下美丽的黄河风情线。主要从风情线总览、 聚焦景观、休闲娱

15、乐和特色游览四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上 的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语 法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连 词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【满分满分范文范文】 The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow R

16、iver has? Let me tell you! The Yellow River flows through Lanzhou. There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheel and so on. There are many places for leisu

17、re and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus. The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you! 【名师点评】【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow Riv

18、er. 有一条著名的公 路叫做滨河路，它沿着黄河行驶。句子which runs along the Yellow River.是由which引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】 There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. 有 很多休闲娱乐的地方，如放风筝、下棋等。该句话用there be结构来写。 （四）（四） 我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃。假设你所在的学校正在组织一个让世界了解甘肃、让走向世界的 活动，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“ The In

19、troduction of Gansu Province“为题，写一篇介绍甘肃的英 语短文。 要求：1. 文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容； 2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范； 3. 可做适量拓展； 4. 词数：80词左右。(标题需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域，不计入总词数) The Introduction of Gansu Province _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 本文属于材料作文，介绍甘肃省。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合 逻辑，可适当增加内容。 【满分满分范文范文】 The Introduction of Gansu Provinc

20、e Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425,900 square kilometers. There are 26 million people living there. Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu Province. The weather in Gansu is different from place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to n

21、ight. If you want to go travelling in Gansu，May to October is the best time. Mogao Grotto which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan Pass，the western end of the Great Wall，are two of the must-see places of interest in Gansu. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主 谓一致，特别使用一些

22、亮点词句，如lie in, there be, the capital city of, be different from, end of, places of interest以及which引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文 连贯。 （五）（五） 如你参加了学校组织的走近乡村寒假社会实践活动。请根据要求，向某英语网站投稿，分享 活动经历。 要求：1.80120 词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Have you ever got close to the countryside a

23、nd had a special experience? Let me share mine! _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 本文属于一篇图表作文，根据表格提供的信息来介绍走近乡村寒假社会实践活动的经历。人 称为第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包 括要点中所给的信息，既要写活动的过程，又要总结活动感受与收获。并补充两条个人的观点。表 达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下 文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型： 1.We exper

24、ienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldnt get from books before. 我 们经历了农村的生活，学到了一些我们以前从书中得不到的东西。that we couldnt get from books before.是定语从句，修饰不定代词something。2. We really hope well have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我们真的希望今年寒假还能有这样的活动！hope后面是省略that的宾语从句。

25、【满分满分范文范文】 Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine. During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the school activity Get close to the countryside. We live in the famers homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know

26、 where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting! We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldnt get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes of the coun

27、tryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers life was getting better and better. We really hope well have another activity like that this winter vacation! (六六) 每年十月份，越来越多的游客来本溪赏枫叶请你根据以下提示，说说如何给游客可留下“景美 人更美“的好印象，从自身做起，做文明本溪人！ 提示词：beautifu

28、l views 美丽的景色 要求： 1语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范 2文中不得出现真实姓名与校名 3 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数 How to be a polite citizen Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October_ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【参考范文参考范文】 How to be a polite citizen Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in OctoberLets leave the visitors a good impres

29、sion not only for the beautiful views ， but also as a Benxi citizen How to be a polite citizen？ （开 篇点明题意） First， We must be friendlyUse“please，OK，welcome“ with smile when you talk with visitors Besides， we should be ready to help others（高分句型一）Try to be a helpful person If visitors need us， we should

30、 help them Whats more， we should follow the rules For example， we mustnt step on the grass or pick flowers We mustnt drop litter carelesslyAt last ，we also need to behave well in publicWe stand for our city Benxi in publicSo it needs our good manners（从四个方面展开对成 为文明市民的论述） Why not do as above points？Le

31、ts try our best to be a polite citizen（高分句型二）（结尾倡议大 家成为文明市民） （七）（七） 假如你叫 Tom，和 Jack 是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上 7 点来你家参加 你的生日聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图） 。 提示：1. 聚会内容：唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏； 2. 内容要涵盖提示中的信息，字数 30-50 词。 Dear Jack, _ _ _ _ _ _ I think we will have a good time Tom 【写作思路写作思路】 假如你叫Tom，和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周

32、五晚上7点来你家参加你 的生日聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。虽然主要内容已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我 们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累 的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Jack, Ill have a birthday party at 7:00 p. m. this Friday. Id like to invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along Green Stre

33、et and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games. I think we will have a good time. Tom 【名师点评】【名师点评】 这是一篇比较不错的作文。 文中需要发挥的内容写的不错， 一些比较好的句型， 如 Id like to invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home

34、. Walk along green Street and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing 等。 （八）（八） 介绍首都北京。请你阅读你的加拿大网友 Tommy 的 e-mail，根据 e-mail 的内容，给他写一封回信. Dear Li Lei, I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad to tell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said tha

35、t Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Tommy 【满分满分范文范文】 Dear

36、 Tommy, Im glad to know you will come to Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we suc