2020中考英语作文：社会经济.doc

1、06 社会经济篇社会经济篇 （一）（一） 微信的优点，如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。 其优点如下： 1可以非常迅速地与朋友进行文字、表情等交流； 2可以与朋友分享图片、音乐、视频等； 3不仅能发送语音讯息，而且可以直接通话； 4使用时不受时间地点限制； 5使用时免费 词数为 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 Nowadays，WeChat has been a part of our life_ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 Nowadays， WeChat has been a part of our life It is becoming m

2、ore and more popular with young people because of the following advantages （点题） First ， we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly Second， we can share pictures， music and videos with them Third， we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to the

3、m directly 【高分句型一】Besides， we can use it in any time Last but not least， we use it for free and can save money （微信的优点） In my view， although WeChat has improved our lives， it should be used properly 【高分句型二】 We shouldnt lose ourselves in it （我的观点） （二）（二） 假定你是李明， 住在苏州， 你的美国朋友 David 在做一个关于中国东部城市人口状况的调查，

4、 他给你发了一封邮件，想了解一下有关情况请你认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和生 活实际用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥 To： liming163com From： davidegmailcom Subject： population Dear Li Ming， Im doing a survey on the population of the cities in eastern China I know you are living in Suzhou Would you mind answering several questions on the topic？ Is the popu

5、lation of the city increasing fast？ Why？ What are the advantages of population change？ What are the problems of population change？ What influence does the change have on the development of the city？ I look forward to hearing from you soon Best wishes， David 注意： （1）词数 90 左右开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数 （2）回复中不得提及

6、真实的人名、校名等相关信息 Dear David， Thanks for your email Im very happy to answer your questions _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope my answers will be of some help to your survey Yours， Li Ming 【满分【满分范文范文】 Dear David， Thanks for your email Im very happy to answer your questions （开篇点明题意） The population of Suzhou is increasing

7、 fast in recent years， mainly because many people have moved to Suzhou from other places and now one family can have two children The increase of the population means that more people can work together to build the city However ， there are some disadvantages The city has to face more pollution and t

8、raffic jams Also ，People have difficulty in finding good education for their children 【高分句型一】 Anyway， though there are some problems， the increase of the population is good for the development of the city【高分句型二】 （针对对方来信逐个 问题进行回答） I hope my answers will be of some help to your survey （结尾给出期望） Yours，

9、Li Ming （三）三） 为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表 格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。 常 识 历史悠久，深受喜爱 世界杯 4 年举行一次 好 处 男生女生皆可参加 利于培养团队精神 考生自拟(至少 1 点) 偶 像 梅西，有足球天赋 梦 想 考生自拟(至少 1 点) 注意：1. 词数 90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇：梅西 Messi Dear classmate

10、s, Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. _ _ _ _ _ _ Thank you for your attention. 【满分【满分范文范文】 Dear classmates， Im very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020 Football has a very long historyIt is liked by people a

11、ll over the worldThe World Cup takes place every four yearsPlaying football has lots of advantagesFirst，both boys and girls can take part in itSecond，it helps develop team spiritWhats more，playing football is good for our health Im a football fanMessi is my heroHe has a gift for playing footballMy d

12、ream is to become a famous football player like MessiI hope China will hold the World Cup some day Thank you for your attention 【解析】 试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄 清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像； 谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的 时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。 写作亮点：本文语言精炼， 像第

13、二自然段的 Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. Whats more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动 名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了 first, second 等使得短文层次清楚。 （四）（四）

14、学校是否有必要设立“无作业日”？对此，你在班中进行了调查。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文在英 语课上交流，并阐述你的观点和理由。 Opinions Reasons most students Yes have free time feel relaxed some students No waste time get bad grades I 注意：短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； 词数：80-100； 短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：无作业日 Homework-free Day 短文首句：Ive done a survey about whether it is nec

15、essary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇材料类作文。着重通过调查对“无作业日“学生的看法：赞成与反对及理由。主要以第三人 称和一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。 【满分【满分范文范文】 Ive done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it neces

16、sary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games. Some students, however, dont like it. Theyre afraid that they may

17、waste time or even get bad grades. They prefer to do homework as usual. In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework

18、-free Day ，无作业 日；prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事。Ive done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. （介词后接宾语从句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like. （宾语从句；不定式做主语和结果状语从句） ；I can choose to watch some inter

19、esting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定语 从句）。 还运用了or， however 等使上下文衔接的更好。 （五五） 现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看 法。请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。 优点优点 1. 及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难； 2. 在家就能学习，简单，方便； 3. 可以选择自己喜欢的老师，学习兴趣更浓。 缺点缺点 1. 有的学生假装学习，事实上在玩游戏

20、； 2. 有的学生不想独立思考，直接照抄答案，他们根本不关心自己的 学习，只是虚度光阴。 你的建议你的建议 联系实际，给出自己合理的建议。 要求： 1. 80100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内） 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。 参考词汇：convenient方便的，便利的 pretend to do.假装做 think independently独立思考 Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have di

21、fferent ideas about it. Some people think _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。 题目中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优 点、缺点以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正 确的英语将这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己 来补充适当的内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将 题目中

22、要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加 充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不 同，不能逐词翻译表格内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插 并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文 连贯、自然。 【参考范文参考范文】 Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about

23、 it. Some people think its useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. Its easy and convenient for them. They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others dont think so.

24、 They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They dont want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They dont care about their studying at all. Its a waste of time. I think its good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who

25、 dont want to study, its very bad. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 这是一篇优秀是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了 介绍，并在最后发表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所 有信息，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的 主题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完 整，符合英语的表达习惯。除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了and连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从 句、定语从句等复合句，以及动词不定式、动名词等非

26、谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think its good for students who

27、are hard-working等。 （六）（六） 近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自 我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根 据下表提示，写一篇短文参赛吧。 How to Keep Safe Traffic traffic lights, electric bikes（电动车） Swimming rivers, swimming pool Internet ID number, code(密码）, unhealthy websites 要求： 1.短文必须包含提示中所

28、有内容，并适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4. 词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to Keep Safe Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ After all, life is very important. We should learn

29、something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well. 【写作思路写作思路】 近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自 我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，给出的 材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发 挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号 及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻

30、辑关系，语意连贯。 【参考范文参考范文】 How to Keep Safe Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important. First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldnt cross the road. And we shouldnt ride the electric bic

31、ycles. Second, we shouldnt swim in the river because its dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldnt tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldnt surf unhealthy websites. Whats more, we shouldnt go out with friends witho

32、ut our parents permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police. After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 文中用到了非常好的句型：we should obey the traffic rules. When the

33、 lights are red, we shouldnt cross the road.；Third, we shouldnt tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet.这些给文 章增色不少。 （七）（七） 假如你叫李军，你家于 2017 年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象，在政府两年的帮扶下，你家变化 巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动，请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇 70 词左 右的短文，参加本次活动。 内容要点： 过去 1. 家庭贫困，房屋破旧。 2. 母亲生病，为母担忧，成绩下

34、滑。 现在 3. 住进新房，母亲康复，学习进步。 4. 生活日趋改善。 要求: 1. 词数:70 词左右。短文开头语已给出，但不计入总词数。 2. 短文中必须包括所有要点，但不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。 3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government; my family has changed a lot in the last two years. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【参考范文参考范文】 My name is Li Jun Thanks to the government， my family ha

35、s changed a lot in the last two years （点题） My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house 【高分句型一】 I dont have any new clothesMy grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldnt afford to see a doctorSometimes， I even want to leave school to support my family （过去） Now， with the

36、help of the government， great changes took place in our lives 【高分句型二】 We live in a new house My mother is healthy I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my studyOur life is improving day by day （现在） 【名师点评】【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house 我家以前很穷，我们住在一个小和旧房子used to do sth 过去常常做某事 【