2023年中考英语复习 写作指导（ppt课件）.pptx

1、学习目标通过修改学生习作，学生能够了解和把握中文不能直译和不用翻译的情况，提升反思和自我纠察能力。通过观察他人写作中出现的中式英语，学生能够有意识地摆脱母语中文的影响，提升运用地道英语表达的能力。通过情景对话的片段，学生能够注意到不同语境之下，同一单词，意思不同的情况，提升分析观察能力。知识清单1.中文不能直译词例成语、谚语或俗语专业术语带有文化色彩的词语与英语表达语序不符1.中文不能直译词例成语、谚语或俗语专业术语带有文化色彩的词语与英文表达语序不符知识清单2.中文不用翻译的词例宏观概括的词汇含义重复的词汇多余的形容词多余的副词中文不用翻译词例宏观概括的词汇含义重复的词汇多余的形容词多余的副

2、词知识清单3.语境不同词义突变根据上下文正确使用词汇语境不同 词义突变根据上下文正确使用词汇EngageStudyActivateHomework01EngageWatch the video.Look at these signs in our life.What did you find?EngageStudyActivateHomework02StudyLets help.Some students asked us for help!Let us help them revise their drafts!求助箱已经放满啦，让我们来看看！Lets help.Draft:An unfor

3、gettable experience 一次难忘的经历During this National Day Holiday,I joined in a horse pull song match.It was I had never experienced sport.Before I set off,I was a little bit nervous.Because I was afraid that I couldnt finish such a long distance.I recalled that I climbed the Long City last year.It is sai

4、d that yu su ze bu da.So I would try my best.Lets think.哪些中文不能直译？专业术语直译Lets think.哪些中文不能直译？马拉松：marathonDuring this National Day Holiday,I joined in a horse pull song match.与英文表达语序不符Lets think.哪些中文不能直译？It was a sport I had never experienced.It was I had never experienced sport.I recalled that I climb

5、ed the Long City last year.带有文化色彩的词Lets think.哪些中文不能直译？长城：the Great Wall 成语直译Lets think.哪些中文不能直译？欲速则不达：Haste makes waste.I learned that yu su ze bu da.Lets help.Revised:An unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历During this National day Holiday,I joined in a marathon.It was a sport I had never experienced.B

6、efore I set off,I was a little bit nervous.Because I was afraid that I couldnt finish such a long distance.I recalled that I climbed the Great Wall last year and I learned that haste makes waste.So I would try my best.哪些中文不能直译？（敲黑板！）成语术语难忘怀文化色彩我明白中式英语说拜拜Have a try!一起来找茬！There was a big rain yesterda

7、y.The cost of this coat is very cheap.She writes an English diary every day.heavylowkeepsLets think.哪些中文不用翻译？Lets help.Draft:I have learnt persistence from my family 我从家庭生活中学到了坚持的品质I have a happy family and every member knows the importance of persistence character.My father makes active efforts and

8、 he never stops working because he knows persistence means managing to do everything successfully.I bought a set of LEGO puzzles when I was young.At first,I found it difficult and almost gave up.Luckily,my mother told me to keep trying.With her encouragement,I finally made it!In my opinion,I think I

9、 should say thanks to my family for teaching me the value of persistence.宏观概括词汇Lets think.哪些中文不用翻译？坚持的品质：persistence(“品质”不需要翻译）I have a happy family and every member knows the importance of persistence character.多余形容词Lets think.哪些中文不用翻译？积极的努力：efforts(该单词已有“积极的”含义）My father makes active efforts.多余副词L

10、ets think.哪些中文不用翻译？设法成功做成某事：manage to do(该词组已有“成功地”含义）because he knows persistence means managing to do everything successfully.含义重复的词汇Lets think.哪些中文不用翻译？在我看来：In my opinion我认为：I thinkIn my opinion,I think I should say thanks to my family for teaching me the value of persistence.Lets help.Revised:I

11、have learnt persistence from my family 我从家庭生活中学到了坚持的品质哪些中文不用翻译？（又敲黑板！）宏观概括不需要含义重复留一个多余形副惹人恼Have a try!诚实的品质积极客观的态度可怕的灾难honestyoptimisticdisasterLets think.同一个单词，语境不同，意思会改变吗？7:00 P.M.6:00 P.M.Lets have a joke.TomHow about going to the theater?CarolDont waste your time.I never go out with a perfect st

12、ranger.TomIt seems we are both lucky.But I am far from perfect.Whats the meaning of perfect?a perfect stranger 完全陌生的人far from perfect 远远不够完美同一个单词，语境不同，意思会改变吗？（又敲黑板！）语境不同，词义突变。Lets read.She was still there and stood still for a long time.At last,she gave up.Although she didnt realize her ambition of

13、being the winner,she realized the importance of honesty.Read the passage and tell the meaning of the underlined words.adv.仍然adj.静止的v.实现v.意识到EngageStudyActivateHomework03Activate各位同学，你们已获得全部“装备”是否开始游戏？QUITSRTARTRound 1 新手村 Guess.温馨提示：本关可用技能中文不能直译appearance:beautiful and light blonde hair,bright big e

14、yes 漂亮的浅金色头发，灵动的大眼睛hobby:characters:Correct and guess.have few words and talk little,寡言少语,was born with the power to create ice and snow 呼冰唤雪a woman of few words 寡言少语（寡言少语重复）Have a guessing game.Please introduce one of your classmates and ask others to guess who he/she is.Round 2 中关村 Correction.温馨提示

15、：本关可用技能中文不用翻译In the past,the reason why I was so upset was because my mom seemed so angry with me.She told me I shouldnt spend much time on computer games but finish my homework in time.However,in my opinion,I think I have grown up now.I will try to make me better in the future.删除because删除in my opin

16、ionCorrection.Round 3 柳暗花明又一村 Be a little teacher.温馨提示：本关可用技能“混合大招”学生习作1片段After running for several miles,I felt extremely tired and wanted to give up.However,I managed to run the rest distance successfully.From this marathon,I have learnt the importance of persistence quality.And not try,you will n

17、ever know what you can do.删除successfullyrun改为cover删除qualitynot try 改为without tryingBe a little teacher.成为小老师，批改作文！学生习作2片段My best friend is Jason.He is sure of himself and confident.He is keen on studying Chinese history.Unlike me,he more like stay at home and read books.So his ambition is to be a hi

18、storian(历史学家).I hope he could come true his ambition in the future.删除is sure of himself andmore like 改为prefers tocome true改为achieve/realizeBe a little teacher.成为小老师，批改作文！Congratulations!恭喜各位同学今日闯关成功并掌握全部技能！EngageStudyActivateHomework04HomeworkHomework.（难度 )1.复习如何使得文章“词达意”的要点，并背诵相应的地道英文表达。2.选择一个话题，以日

19、记形式写一个段落。introduce a person（牛津7BU3）appearance/hobby/characters/studies share an experience（牛津8AU3）who/when/where/what/why/how Homework.（难度 )1.复习如何使得文章“词达意”的要点，并背诵相应的地道英文表达。2.根据以下话题，以日记形式写一个段落。introduce a friend of mine提示：appearance：height/face hobby：like reading books/playing football characters：helpful/active（because）