读后续写微技能之动作描写1 （ppt课件）-2024新外研版（2019）《高中英语》必修第一册.pptx

1、动作描写动作描写读后续写微技能读后续写微技能By CatherineHow to make your continuation writing vivid?动作链：使用一连串的动作构成画面，让画面动起来。动作链：使用一连串的动作构成画面，让画面动起来。Skill 1 构造动作链竖起竖起了大拇指了大拇指满意地满意地点了点头点了点头 21 2句型句型 1：V1 and V2/V1,V2 and V3nodded with satisfactionthumbed up at us 递给递给可怜的乞丐可怜的乞丐123掏出掏出一把零钱一把零钱伸进伸进口袋口袋reached into the pocket

2、pulled out a handful of changegave it to the poor beggar妈妈妈妈冲冲了进来，了进来，静静地站着静静地站着，然后，然后突然大笑突然大笑起来起来。(2021(2021年年 浙江卷浙江卷)My mom ,and then .rushed instood stillburst into laughter他他站站起来，起来，拥抱拥抱着父母，着父母，微笑微笑着着.(2020(2020年年1 1月月 浙江卷浙江卷)He stood up,hugged his parents and smiled.EmotionsDialoguesInner thoug

3、ht4Actions动作面动作面IDEAS=IDEAS=动作动作+心理，对话，情感，环境心理，对话，情感，环境Surroundings DialoguesEmotions“我去给你们拿点咖啡，我去给你们拿点咖啡，”她她笑笑道，道，朝朝厨房走去。厨房走去。He was extremely delighted,singing and dancing in the rain.他他欣喜若狂欣喜若狂，在雨中又，在雨中又唱唱又又跳跳。句型句型 2：主语：主语+谓语谓语(+(+宾语宾语),),doing and doing On a sunny afternoon,Monkey King _(参观参观)th

4、e De Tian scenic zone,_(欣赏欣赏)the magnificent waterfall and _(拍照拍照)countless pictures.visitedtakingappreciating站在站在海边海边，他们，他们仰望仰望天空，天空，享受享受着这份珍贵的平静。着这份珍贵的平静。Standing at the seaside,they looked at the sky,enjoying the precious peace.句型句型 3：doing,主语主语+谓语谓语(+(+宾语宾语),doing the four strong men,the wolf mi

5、ght feel threatened，.Facingstarting to withdraw被被老师的话老师的话鼓舞鼓舞，Lucy举起了手举起了手，小声说小声说(whisper)：“我来试试。我来试试。”Encouraged by the teachers words,Lucy raised her hand,whispering:”I want to have a try.”听完后深受听完后深受鼓励鼓励，David伸出伸出(hold out)双臂双臂抱住抱住了我了我,微笑着回复微笑着回复我说：我说：“我可以做到！我可以做到！”(2022(2022年年 新高考新高考I I 读后续写读后续写)

6、Deeply encouraged after hearing this,David held out his arms and hugged me,replying with a smile:“I can do it！”又累又饿又累又饿，他们终于安全，他们终于安全到达到达了目的地。了目的地。Exhausted and hungry,they eventually arrived at the destination safely.Sad but fearless,he was determined to change the plan immediately.Practice1.这个女孩好奇

7、而兴奋，打开了她的礼物盒。这个女孩好奇而兴奋，打开了她的礼物盒。(adj,主语主语+谓语谓语+宾语）宾语）,the girl opened the gift box.Curious and excited2.老人坐在夕阳下，看报纸，听着广播老人坐在夕阳下，看报纸，听着广播。(主语主语+谓语谓语(+宾语宾语)，doing and doing)The old man sat under the sunset,reading the newspaper and listening to music.3.被这个故事深深地感动，被这个故事深深地感动，孩子们留下了泪水，彼此拥抱着。孩子们留下了泪水，彼此拥

8、抱着。Done,主主+谓谓+宾宾,doing ,the children cried,.Deeply moved by the storyhugging each other4.男孩们兴奋地冲向游泳池边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。男孩们兴奋地冲向游泳池边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。V1+V2+V3The boys excitedly to the swimming pool,their clothes and into the water.rushedtook offjumped5.他把梯子靠在墙边，爬上去，向四周看。他把梯子靠在墙边，爬上去，向四周看。Doing,主主+谓谓+宾宾,doing his ladders against the wall,he climbed,.Puttinglooking around.Thank you!