高中英语2024届高考作文文采提升句子（共三组）.doc

1、高考英语作文文采提升句子（一）1.我也笑了，内心激起了更多的自信和决心。独立主格And I also laughed, more confidence and determination stimulated in my heart.2.我从未停止想念它。倒装Never had I stopped thinking about her.3.这是如此的神奇，以至于我哭了并伸出手臂，想着是否能摸一摸这个小鸟。倒装So amazing was it that I burst into tears and stretched my arms, wondering if I could have a t

2、ouch of this tiny friend.4.她内心前所未有地高兴，也有了更多的信心，蹦蹦跳跳走向那雄伟壮丽的教学楼。独立主格Heart echoing with unprecedented delight and growing confidence, she bounced back towards her majestic school building.5.让我欣慰的是 他并没有在此结束行程，因为他毫不犹豫地努力站起来，摇摇晃晃地跑向终点，异常坚定，尽管腿上还很痛。名从To my relief, thats not where he ended his journey, as

3、he struggled to stand up without hesitation and staggered towards the final line, exceedingly determined, despite torturing pain in legs.6.接下来 她试图集中注意力到达老师办公室，那个满是练习卷的办公室，然后是达到健身馆，那里总有许多活力满满的学生在做锻炼。无灵主语+定从+非谓结构Her second attempt was to concentrate on stepping to his English teachers office where exe

4、rcise paper was constantly piled as high as a tiny mountain, followed by her next goal to reach the gym crowded with energetic students doing fitness.7.接过奖牌，内心涌起一阵难言的复杂情感，使得我不自觉地搜寻我的老师，他就在第一排 对着我笑 竖着大拇指。无灵主语+非谓结构+定从When I took over the medal, waves of indescribable complex feelings surged in my hear

5、t, leaving/driving me unconsciously to search for my social studies teacher who was right there in the first row smiling to me with both thumbs up.8. 是你的坚持与鼓励为我打开了品味写作魅力的大门。如果不是因为你，我不可能从写作的挣扎中解脱出来。强调句+虚拟语气It is your insistence and encouragement that opened the door for me to savor the charm of writi

6、ng and finally fell in love with it.If it had not been for you, I couldnt have been relieved of the struggling with writing.（二）1.他从没想过竟然真的能为家里赚钱。倒装Never had he imagined that he could really earn money for his family.2.尽管由于曾经追求其他的个人爱好 这个学位被延误了，但我终于还是得到了它，不为别人，只为自己。倒装Delayed as this degree is, due to

7、my pursuance of other personal passion, I finally achieved it, not for anyone else, but for myself.3.是父亲，他就站在身前，竖着大拇指，脸上绽放着笑容。独立主格结构It was his father, standing in his way, both thumbs up and smile of relief blossoming on his face.4.我为过去所为感到抱歉，也为如今的你感到骄傲。名从I apologize for what I did before and feel p

8、roud of what you are doing now.5.他们开车来到Bernard那儿并向他解释了计划，他看到朋友为他所做的一切，流下了感激的泪水。定从+名从They drove to Bernard and explained their plan to him, who burst into tears of appreciation at the sight of what was done by his friends for him.6.得知这个令人开心的消息，我更加相信 是互相帮助能让大家度过艰难的经济危机。非谓结构+强调句Learning the delightful

9、news, I became more convinced that it was mutual assistance that could help each other weather through the tough and chilling financial trap.7.当他听到这个名字时，眼中闪过一束光，但是很快被一阵深深的叹息熄灭，并转而露出一丝痛楚。无灵主语+定丛The moment he heard the name, some glint flashed through his eyes, which soon was extinguished by a deep si

10、gh and replaced by a wave of pain.8.在露出这复杂的表情之后，是一些更加奇怪的话：“这不可能的。”名从+倒装What followed this complex expression was some even more strange words, “Never would it be possible.”9.还没等我询问，仪式开始了，许多优秀毕业生上台发言。无灵主语+非谓结构But before any words of inquiry slipped out of my mouth, the ceremony was declared to start,

11、 witnessing numerous distinguished graduates stepping onto the stage for a short speech.10.他笑着，笑的背后似乎藏着难以描述的痛苦。无灵主语+定从Smile was shining on his face, under which there still seemed to hide some indescribable pain.11 也是从此刻开始，一位成功物理学家和一位成功商人恢复了他们的交流。强调句+无灵主语+借代修辞It was also since this moment that the c

12、onversation between a successful physician and a successful businessman with a degree has resumed.（三）1.我从未想到她居然是如此平易近人的女孩 有着出色的领导才能，这渐渐消除了我原先的气愤。（建议：倒装+定从）Never had I imagined that she was such an approachable（平易近人的） girl with superior leadership talent, which gradually swept away my previous resent

13、（n讨厌 愤怒）.2.内心对她被选为队长这件事仍有生气，原本我想拒绝她的提议，但是却说了yes。（建议：非谓/独立主格结构+名从）Still depressed and mad at her being elected captain, deep inside, I was about to refuse her proposal, but what slipped out of my mouth was a yes.3.但他们的鼓励并没有使我鼓起勇气和移动。（注意：谓语动词的使用，尽量避免使用“make”）But their words were not rewarded with Chel

14、seas courage and movement.4.过了很久，在众人的欢呼掌声中，她终于登上了塔。（建议：名从+无灵主语）In what seemed to be hours, the tower witnessed her courageous landing among partners cheers and applauds.5.就在看似他要结束挑战之旅的时候，妈妈与病魔的英勇搏斗出现在脑海，使他勇敢一跃。（建议：名从+无灵主语+非谓结构）Just at what seemed to be the end of her journey to conquer challenge, he

15、r mothers heroic battle with the terminal illness flashed into her mind, inspiring her to take that historic heroic leap.6.这些情绪如此强烈，以至于我无法挤出一丝笑容，如同一个陌生人站在原地。（建议：倒装+非谓结构）So intense were those emotions that I couldnt even force a smile to greet her or step forward, standing there like a stranger.7.Sar

16、ah非常惊讶激动，她迅速捡起这些画，睁大眼睛认真地看着，大叫道，“这就是你的天赋所在！” （建议：独立主格+名从）Waves of astonishment and thrill crawling into her heart, Sarah swiftly picked up those paintings, gazed at them with widened eyes and exclaimed, “Emily, they are amazing, this is where your talent lies.”8.若不是你的那句“never give up”，我们不可能拥有如此清凉时刻。

17、（建议：虚拟语气）If it had not been for your never-give-up, we couldnt have enjoyed such cool moment.9.转眼，他们不知疲倦地搜寻了三个街区。（注意：主语的使用 ，建议无灵主语）In a blink of an eye, three blocks had witnessed their tireless searching.10.妈妈追上来了，她瞬间明白了一切，并鼓励道，“只有继续，我们才有可能吃到冰激凌。”（建议：倒装+定从）Catching up was my mom who instantly under

18、stood everything and encouraged, “never give up.Only by keeping going can we embrace the possibility to enjoy the cool ice-cream.”11.是妈妈的“never give up”激励着我们坚持不懈并成功。（建议：强调句）Exactly, it is my moms pet phrase that inspired us to persist and accomplish a lot.12.我内心此时的感受难以言表。（建议：无灵主语+名从）Words failed to

19、express what I felt at this moment.13. 他什么也没回答，只是低下头 不看我眼睛，脸红着 手抖着。（建议：非谓+独立主格结构）Replying nothing, he just lowered his head and avoided any eye contact with me, his face blushing and hands trembling.14.当我意识到是孩子的积蓄以及他的爱将我们拯救于经济危机，我再也抑制不住我的眼泪。（建议：倒装+强调）Meanwhile, no longer could my tears be held as I realized that it was our sons hard-earned savings and his silent but pure love that relieved us of financial difficulties.15.他的沉默和奇怪的反应瞬间令我更加焦虑。（注意：谓语动词的使用，避免使用make）His silent and weird response instantly fueled my inner anxiety.4