2024届高三英语一轮复习 读后续写语篇训练 旅游与交通 ppt课件-2024年高考语文复习.pptx

1、人教版高中英语读后续写人教版高中英语读后续写个人成长010204050306CONTENTS寓言故事爱心公益语篇训练节日文化体育运动点击此处添加正文文学艺术点击此处添加正文人际交往点击此处添加正文目目 录录旅游与交通点击此处添加正文三、旅游与交通三、旅游与交通四、自然灾害语篇训练1：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Danny and Sarah stepped out of the terminal and into the sunshine.They looked up at the clear blue sky,then at the distan

2、t hills that were looming over the waving palm trees.They were eager to begin their vacation.The cab stopped quickly and quietly.Danny put their bags in the trunk and got into the backseat with Sarah.“Palm Trees Hotel,please,”Danny said in excitement.“Yes,sir,”answered the driver as he turned his he

3、ad and gave them a bright smile.Danny and Sarah exchanged confused glances as the cab slid gently through the traffic.“Excuse me,uh,you look really familiar.Actually,you look like the movie star Rocky Overton.But of course,you cant be.”Danny and Sarah were left in mute(沉默的)disbelief when the driver

4、told them he wasnt a real person,but a robot created to resemble a well-known actor.“Rocky”told them that the cab company had bought the newest robotic drivers because they were programmed to be safer and more reliable than human drivers.“So here I am,”“Rocky”added,“your first robotic cab driver!”Da

5、nny and Sarah tightened their grips(把手).“Rocky”assured them,“You dont have to be concerned.I can guarantee you Im a great driver.My eyesight is impeccable(无可挑剔的),my reflexes(反应)are superb,and I am familiar with all the streets of this town.Im constantly updated with new traffic data,so Ill be able t

6、o avoid congestion(交通堵塞)and arrive at your destination as quickly as possible,without any stress.Have a seat,have a good rest,and have a good time on your way.”Danny and Sarah felt a bit more comfortable,so they leaned back in their seats and shut their eyes.“And another thing,”“Rocky”continued,“my

7、robot series stands for the highest level of computer technology.Im beautifully designed and made of the finest materials,and have undergone the strictest quality control.Thats why youre perfectly safe with me.Nothing could possibly go wrong.could possibly go wrong.go wrong.go wrong.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左

8、右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Danny and Sarah exchanged glances,their eyes wild with fear.“Dont worry,sir,”came the calm reply on the phone,“Your cab is also an unmanned one.”Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络Who When Where What Why How 1.Read for informationDanny,Sarah,a robotic cab driver“Rocky”During the vacationOut of th

9、e terminal,in the cabSarah and Danny thought the driver look like the movie star Rocky Overton.The driver was a robot created to resemble an actor.The robotic cab driver broke down.Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络2.Read for plotsA.Danny and Sarah went out of the terminal and the cab arrived.B.The driver assured Dan

10、ny and Sarah by telling them his advantages.C.Danny and Sarah found the driver was a robot created to resemble an actor.D.The robotic driver broke down.Later Development Beginning Ending？Climax Development DACBStep 1 读懂大意，理清脉络3.Read for emotional changesPlotHow did Danny and Sarah feel?Danny and Sar

11、ah went out of the terminal and the cab arrived.Danny and Sarah found the driver was a robot.The driver assured Danny and Sarah by telling them his advantages.The robotic driver broke down.?expectantworriedcomfortableStep 2 细读首句，构思框架由第一段首句“Danny和Sarah交换了一下眼神，他们的眼里充满了恐惧。”可知，本段可描写机器人司机出故障之后，两人的反应以及解决问

12、题的办法。由第二段首句“别担心，先生，电话里传来平静的回答，而且您的出租车也是一辆无人驾驶汽车。”可知，本段可描写出租车公司对于Danny和Sarah的帮助以及故事的结局。Step 3 增加细节，开始写作续写线索：险情发生两人反应寻求帮助解决办法安全到达。【分析】本文以人物经历为线索展开，讲述了Danny和Sarah在度假期间的一次惊险经历，两人在假期刚开始的路上遇到机器人出租车司机出现了故障，但是在出租车公司的帮助下有惊无险，最终安全到达目的地。Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写Danny and Sarah exchanged glances,their eyes wild with fea

13、r.As the cab sped up,“Rocky”appeared to have broken down.“Slow down!”Danny called out,but there was no response from“Rocky”.The cab moved at an even greater speed,narrowly avoiding a vehicle.Frightened,Danny picked up the phone.With trembling fingers,he made a phone call to the cab company.“Hello?”D

14、anny yelled into the phone,“Our robot driver is having a breakdown and hes completely out of control.We need help quickly!”“Dont worry,sir,”came the calm reply on the phone,“Your cab is also an unmanned one.”The answer went on,“We have the authority to disable the robot driver.Ill change your cab in

15、to the automatic mode so that you can reach your destination safely.”The cab instantly slowed down and continued on its journey,though the driver could still be heard muttering,“Go wrong.go wrong.”When they reached their hotel,Danny and Sarah got out of the cab,relieved and grateful to be alive.As t

16、hey saw the cab drive off,they decided to go on foot for the remainder of their vacation!【出彩语句】语句1：The cab instantly slowed down and continued on its journey,though the driver could still be heard muttering,“Go wrong.go wrong.”（though引导的让步状语从句）语句2：As they saw the cab drive off,they decided to go on

17、foot for the remainder of their vacation!（as引导的时间状语从句）【高分词汇】出故障：break down/fail to work properly大叫：call out/shout/yell转换，调节：change/switch/adjust剩余部分：remainder/rest高分短语句型语篇训练2：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Edun didnt want to go for a hike.She was particularly reluctant to go on a long hike in

18、the hills,which ended up in a small cabin without power or running water.She would have preferred to sit at home and read a book,wrapped in a warm blanket.“Are you ready?”Mom asked happily after breakfast.Edun glanced out the window and only saw that it was raining hard.“We should go another day,”Ed

19、un suggested,“maybe a hundred years from now.”She worried she would get tired during the hike and get bored in the dark cabin.Mom said it was time to quit being afraid and get into the car.Eduns brother,Will,was waiting in the garage,who wore a camera around his neck.Will was four years older than E

20、dun,and he had climbed many more mountains.He started hiking when he was two and loved it.Due to the rainy weather,Edun had to put on a pair of waterproof trousers,a raincoat,and a pair of water-resistant shoes.Her coat had a rough material on the inside.She did not like the way it felt on her skin.

21、About 30 minutes later,they parked at a trailhead.The rain had already stopped,but the floor was still damp.“Well be there by afternoon!”Mom promised.The afternoon seemed distant.Will recognized a bird sitting on a tree branch“Fox Sparrow!”then he ran off along the path,quickly disappearing from vie

22、w.Edun rested under a pine tree.“You cannot make me go,”Edun said.“You are right,”her mother said with a smile,standing under the tree,too,“but you cant tell what might happen in front of you.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thinking Mom was right,Edun started after her.Twenty minutes later,the

23、y saw the cabin.Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络Who When Where What Why How 1.Read for informationEdun,Mom,Will After breakfast,about 30 minutes later,in the afternoonIn the hills,at a trailheadEdun rested under a tree and didnt want to go.Edun was reluctant to go on a long hike in the hills.Eduns mother was trying

24、 to persuade Edun.Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络2.Read for plotsA.Edun had to put on rain gear because of the rainy weather.B.Edun and his family parked at a trailhead.C.Edun was reluctant to go hiking.But after breakfast,her family and she were ready to go.D.Edun rested under a pine tree and didnt want to go.Beg

25、inning Ending？Climax Development Later Development DACBStep 1 读懂大意，理清脉络3.Read for emotional changesPlotHow did Edun feel?Edun and her family were ready to go hiking.Edun had to put on rain gear and her family and she arrived at a trailhead.Edun rested under a pine tree.Edun started after her mother.

26、?reluctantunhappyboredStep 2 细读首句，构思框架由第一段首句“Edun认为妈妈是对的，就跟在她后面。”可知，本段可描写Edun继续前行，看到了美丽的风景，不知不觉间，已经完成了大部分攀登。由第二段首句“20分钟后，他们看到了小木屋。”可知，第二段可描写Edun一家人来到小木屋后发生的事情。Step 3 增加细节，开始写作续写线索：继续前行沿途风景完成大部分攀登到达小屋看星星感激。【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Edun不想去山里远足，但还是和家人一起出发了，由于下雨而不得不穿上的雨衣使Edun感觉不舒适。半小时后，他们到达了登山口，Edun的哥哥Will沿着小路

27、去追小鸟，Edun想要停下休息，妈妈告诉Edun，如果不继续走，就永远不会知道前方有什么在等待着他们。Thinking Mom was right,Edun started after her.They passed a waterfall,tiny but clear.The running water made Edun feel better.To her surprise,as they went on,she found some things in the damp,green forest:the footprints of beasts,wild flowers,and sma

28、ll streams.Soon they caught up with Will,who was eager to show them the photographs of a Fox Sparrow sitting in a tree.Together they walked on,walking by disorderly shrubs,climbing over gray rocks,and walking among the dwarf trees.Edun towered over the small trees and exclaimed,“See,Mom,I am a giant

29、.”Unknowingly they had completed the greater part of the journey.Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写Twenty minutes later,they saw the cabin.Edun and Will began to run uphill.At last they reached the tiny but comfortable cabin.Through the window,Edun could see distant fields,lakes,and other hills,and an entirely new wo

30、rld opened up before her.That evening,all of them stayed up all night looking at the stars.There were so many stars gathering there.Edun suggested,“I want to take a picture of them.”“Click!”The camera froze the moment.Radiant with a smile,Edun walked up to Mom,embraced her,and said in a low voice,“M

31、om,thank you for having me come.”【高分词汇】继续前行：walk on/move on/keep on moving不知不觉地：unknowingly/unawares/unwittingly使定格：freeze面带微笑：radiant with a smile/with a smiling face拥抱：embrace/hug/hold in ones arms【出彩语句】语句1：To her surprise,as they went on,she found some things in the damp,green forest:the footprin

32、ts of beasts,wild flowers,and small streams.（as引导的时间状语从句）语句2：Soon they caught up with Will,who was eager to show them the photographs of a Fox Sparrow sitting in a tree.（who引导的定语从句）高分短语句型语篇训练3：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Shirley had two days leave in January this year.She searched online fo

33、r inexpensive travel deals,and discovered that the most impressive was a two-day trip to Dublin.Shirley hadnt been to Ireland before,so she knew it would be her destination.She got to Dublin and went to her hotel.She was thrilled.When she found her hotel,she paid for two nights in advance.The desk c

34、lerk said it was the wisest decision she had made since she decided to take the trip.Shirley left her luggage in her bedroom and headed out at once to check out some of the sights.As Shirley strolled along the streets,it was growing late.Although she was hungry,she preferred to have her supper after

35、 a few drinks.She went to the nearest pub.Shirley noticed a rather strange-looking man staring at her from the other side of the pub.He went to her desk and,as politely as he could,asked her if she wanted a beer.After perhaps ten seconds,Shirley came to the conclusion that she would accept the offer

36、.But she offered to buy him some fruits.The man laughed and accepted.The main topic of their talk was the places they had been to and the places they would like to go to.Shirley quickly learned that he was traveling alone too.As soon as he started mentioning that he was staying in the same hotel as

37、her,Shirley swiftly rose from her seat to get another drink.Searching through her bag,Shirley found that her purse was lost!Immediately she realized she took the wrong bag.She had her purse in another bag.Shirley wasnt flustered at first,but she realized that without it,she didnt have a penny.She wa

38、s hungry.The worst part was that she was generous enough to offer the man a treat.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Without explaining the situation,Shirley hurried towards the hotel.The man was still there.Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络Who When Where What Why How 1.Read for informationShirley,the manIn Januar

39、y this yearIn Dublin,in the nearest pubShirley found that her purse was lost.Shirley took the wrong bag.Shirley hurried towards the hotel.Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络2.Read for plotsA.Shirley got to Dublin and arrived at her hotel.B.Shirley wanted to get another drink but she found that her purse was lost.C.The

40、 man treated Shirley to a beer and they had a conversation.D.Shirley went to the nearest pub and noticed the man.Beginning Ending？Climax Development Later Development DACBStep 1 读懂大意，理清脉络3.Read for emotional changesPlotHow did Shirley feel?Shirley arrived at her hotel in Dublin.The man treated Shirl

41、ey to a b e e r a n d t h e y h a d a conversation.Shirley wanted to get another drink and found her purse was lost.Shirley hurried towards the hotel.?relaxedpleasedworriedStep 2 细读首句，构思框架由第一段首句“Shirley没有解释情况，就匆匆向旅馆走去。”可知，本段可描写Shirley回酒店拿钱包的经过。由第二段首句“那位男士仍然在那里。”可知，本段可描写Shirley赶回来，男士对此很困惑，然后Shirley向他

42、解释情况，两人都笑了，并因此成为朋友。Step 3 增加细节，开始写作续写线索：跑回酒店拿到钱包赶回酒吧解释情况成为朋友。【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。Shirley独自去爱尔兰首都都柏林旅行，进了当地一家酒吧，遇到了一位男士。男士邀请她喝啤酒，Shirley邀请他吃水果。就在他们聊得兴起，Shirley想要再买一杯啤酒时，她发现自己没有带钱包。为了不让那位男士认为自己是一个骗子，她跑回酒店，拿来了钱包。男士很惊讶，随后Shirley告诉他发生了什么事，他们都笑了，最后成了朋友。Without explaining the situation,Shirley hurried towards t

43、he hotel.When Shirley caught sight of the receptionist,she burst into tears.She explained what had happened to her at the pub,which made the receptionist laugh.She said Shirley shouldnt have worried too much since she had already checked into the hotel room.As quickly as she could,Shirley rushed to

44、her room and got her purse.She had to return to the pub,otherwise she would be considered as a liar.Fortunately,the pub was close by,so Shirley reached it in a short time.Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写【高分词汇】被认为是：be considered as/be recognized as【出彩语句】语句1：She said Shirley shouldnt have worried too much since she h

45、ad already checked into the hotel room.（省略that的宾语从句和虚拟语气，since引导的状语从句）【高分词汇】完全地：utterly/totally/completely站起来：rise to ones feet/stand up/get to ones feet【出彩语句】语句2：Shirley laughed and told him the situation which made her laugh.（which引导的定语从句）The man was still there.When he saw Shirley again,he was ut

46、terly confused.He rose to his feet,not sure how to respond.Shirley laughed and told him the situation which made her laugh.But he joked to Shirley,“If I hadnt proposed an offer of beer,you wouldnt have realized that you hadnt brought money with you.So,treat me two beers please!”Both of them smiled.Naturally,they became friends.Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写