高中英语2024届高考读后续写动作描写方法讲解.doc

1、高考英语读后续写动作描写方法一、构造动作链我们可以将动作拆分成一系列具体的小动作，并增加画面感和句式的丰富性。通过这样拆分和描述具体的小动作，我们可以增加故事的画面感和细节，使读者更加身临其境地感受动作的发生过程。“动作链”结构1:A，Band C用and来连接动作1.When shesawher long-lost daughter walking towards her, her heartskippeda beatandshe quicklyembracedher tightly.当她看到自己失散多年的女儿朝她走来时，她的心跳加速，迅速紧紧地抱住了她。2.Hetooka sip of h

2、is coffee,closedhis eyes,andsavoredthe rich aroma.他轻抿一口咖啡，闭上眼睛，品味着浓郁的香气。3.Every morning,shewokeupto the sound of birds chirping,breweda cup of coffeeand sat downto enjoy the quiet moment before the day began.每天早上，伴随着鸟儿的鸣叫声醒来，她泡了一杯咖啡，坐下来享受一天开始前的宁静时刻。4.Shesteeledherself,leanedheavily on her walking st

3、ick,and hobbledtowards him.她鼓起勇气，倚靠着她的手杖，蹒跚地朝他走去。5.Theyturnedtheir heads,puzzledfor an instant,and burstinto laughter.他们转过头来，一瞬间有些困惑，突然大笑起来。6.Within moments, a young womannearedthe bench,slippedsomething into herbag,and departed.没过一会儿，一个年轻女子走近长凳，把某样东西轻轻放进她的书包里，然后离开了。7.Heroseto his feet,embracedhis t

4、eammates,and beamed, striving to maintain composure amidst the overwhelming emotions.他站起身来，拥抱了他的队友们，面带微笑，努力在这激动人心的时刻保持镇定。“动作链”结构2:用非谓语来衔接动作1.Afterspendingthe entire weekend immersed in his books at home, helookedforward to the upcoming test with a sense of assurance.在家里度过了整个周末，沉浸在书本中，他对即将到来的测试感到一种确定

5、性。2.Afterstrollingleisurely through the streets for several hours, shestartedto feel a pang of hungerand cravedsomething to eat.在街上悠闲地逛了几小时后，她开始感到一阵饥饿，想吃点。3.Having disclosedthe truth, hefelta weight lifted off his shouldersand returnedhome feeling significantly more relieved.在揭示了真相之后，他感到肩上的重担被卸下，回家时

6、心情显著地轻松了许多。二、编织动作“面”“编织动作面”的过程中，我们可以借鉴电影制作中的多角度拍摄和剪辑技巧，来构建一个生动且全面的动作场景。“动作面”使用范例：1.Witheyes fixed on the approaching figure, Lily slowly backed away, her heart pounding in her chest.Lily 双眼紧盯着逼近的身影，缓缓后退，心跳在胸中剧烈跳动。2.Holding his breath, Jack crept through the dark corridor, every muscle tensed, ready

7、to pounce.杰克屏住呼吸，在黑暗的走廊中潜行，每一块肌肉都紧绷着，准备随时扑上去。3.In a state of deep concentration, the pianists fingers danced gracefully over the keyboard, creating a melodies that filled the room.钢琴家全神贯注，手指在琴键上优雅地舞动，创造出充满房间的旋律。4.His gaze fixed on the horizon, the sailor steered the ship through the choppy seas, det

8、ermined to reach the shore.海员凝视着地平线，驾驶着船只穿越汹涌的大海，决心抵达岸边。5.With a nervous giggle, Emily shuffled her feet and twisted her hair, trying to appear calm before the interview.6.艾米丽紧张地咯咯笑着，挪动脚步，捻转头发，试图在面试前保持镇定。7.Havingtaken a deep breath, the speaker cleared his throat and launched into a passionate speec

9、h that resonated with the audience.演讲者深吸了一口气，清了清嗓子，开始发表充满激情的演讲，与听众产生共鸣。8.Asthe ballerina twirled gracefully on the stage, her skirt billowing out, the audience gasped in amazement.芭蕾舞者在舞台上优雅地旋转，裙摆飘动，观众惊叹不已。9.With a leap of joy, the child ran through the park, chasing after the flying kite, laughter

10、ringing in the air.孩子欢快地跳跃着，在公园里奔跑，追逐着飘飞的风筝，笑声在空中回荡。10.In a flash of anger, the general slammed his fist on the table, sending the silverware clattering to the floor.将军愤怒地一拳砸在桌子上，银器叮当作响地落到地板上。11.Witha determined stride, the athlete dashed towards the finish line, the crowd cheering loudly as he neared the winning moment.运动员迈着坚定的步伐冲向终点线，随着胜利时刻的临近，人群大声欢呼。2