高中英语2024届高考记叙文写作指导.doc

1、高考英语记叙文写作指导记叙文在高考英语作文中是一种常见的形式，通常要求考生描述一个事件、讲述一个故事或分享一个经历。一、常用句型【开头部分】1.It was a adjective day when.- Example: It was a beautiful day when we decided to go for a hike.- 翻译：那是一个美丽的日子，我们决定去徒步。2.I remember the time when.- Example: I remember the time when I first learned to ride a bicycle.- 翻译：我记得我第一次学

2、骑自行车的时候。3.It all started when.- Example: It all started when I received a mysterious letter in the mail.- 翻译：一切开始于我收到一封神秘的信。4.One day, I was.- Example: One day, I was walking in the park when I saw a strange bird.- 翻译：有一天，我正在公园里散步，突然看到一只奇怪的鸟。5.I will never forget the day when.- Example: I will never

3、 forget the day when I graduated from high school.- 翻译：我永远不会忘记我高中毕业的那一天。【叙述过程】1.As soon as.- Example: As soon as we arrived at the beach, we started playing in the sand.- 翻译：我们一到海滩，就开始在沙滩上玩。2.While we were.- Example: While we were having dinner, the lights suddenly went out.- 翻译：我们在吃晚饭时，灯突然熄灭了。3.Aft

4、er that, we.- Example: After that, we decided to go for a walk along the river.- 翻译：之后，我们决定沿着河边散步。4.We were about to.when.- Example: We were about to leave when it started raining.- 翻译：我们正要离开时，开始下雨了。5.Suddenly, we.- Example: Suddenly, we heard a loud noise coming from the kitchen.- 翻译：突然，我们听到厨房里传来一声

5、巨响。【结尾部分】1.In the end, we.- Example: In the end, we had a wonderful time and made great memories.- 翻译：最终，我们度过了一段美好的时光，留下了美好的回忆。2.Looking back, I.- Example: Looking back, I realized how much I had grown from the experience.- 翻译：回首过去，我意识到这段经历让我成长了很多。3.It was a day to remember because.- Example: It was

6、 a day to remember because it was my first trip abroad.- 翻译：这是一个值得记住的日子，因为这是我第一次出国旅行。4.From that day on, I.- Example: From that day on, I made a promise to myself to always stay positive.- 翻译：从那天起，我对自己承诺永远保持积极。5.Ever since then, I have.- Example: Ever since then, I have cherished the moments I spend

7、 with my family.- 翻译：从那时起，我珍惜与家人相处的时光。二、写作模版Introduction:- Start with a setting or a specific event that sets the scene.- Use descriptive language to engage the reader.Body:- Describe the events or actions in detail.- Use chronological order to narrate the events.- Include feelings, emotions, and pe

8、rsonal reflections to add depth.- Use transitions to connect different parts of the story.Conclusion:- Wrap up the story by summarizing the key events or lessons learned.- Reflect on the impact of the experience.- Offer a final thought or a lasting impression.引言：- 从一个场景或特定事件开始，为故事定调。- 使用描述性语言吸引读者。主体

9、：- 详细描述事件或行动。- 使用时间顺序来叙述事件。- 包括感情、情感和个人反思以增加深度。- 使用过渡语句连接故事的不同部分。结尾：- 通过总结关键事件或所学到的经验来结束故事。- 反思这段经历的影响。- 提供最终的思考或留下持久的印象。通过以上句型和模版，您可以构建完整且引人入胜的记叙文。开头部分应该引人入胜，中间部分要有连贯的叙述，结尾部分则需要总结和反思。使用这些句型可以让您的作文更加生动、结构更清晰。三、写作实例1.我最难忘的一天Introduction:It was a rainy day when I received a call from my best friend, L

10、isa.She told me that she had won tickets to a concert and invited me to go with her.I was thrilled because it was my favorite band.Body:As soon as I got off the phone, I quickly got ready and headed to Lisas house.We took a taxi to the concert venue.Although it was raining, the atmosphere was electr

11、ic with excitement.When we entered the venue, we could feel the energy of the crowd.The concert started with a bang, and the band played all their hit songs.We sang along and danced to the music.It was an incredible experience.Suddenly, during the last song, the lights went out.Everyone was in shock

12、, but the band continued to play with acoustic instruments.The audience joined in, and it became an unforgettable moment.Conclusion:In the end, the lights came back on, and the concert ended with a huge applause.It was a day I will never forget because it showed me that even in unexpected situations

13、, we can find joy and create lasting memories.引言：那是一个下雨天，我接到我最好的朋友丽萨的电话。她告诉我她赢得了音乐会的门票，并邀请我和她一起去。我非常兴奋，因为那是我最喜欢的乐队。主体：我一挂电话，就马上准备好，前往丽萨的家。我们打车去音乐会场地。虽然在下雨，但现场的气氛令人激动。当我们进入场地时，我们能感受到人群的热情。音乐会以激烈的方式开始，乐队演奏了他们所有的热门歌曲。我们一起唱歌、跳舞，体验了难以置信的感觉。突然，在最后一首歌时，灯熄灭了。每个人都很惊讶，但乐队继续用原声乐器演奏。观众加入进来，这成为了一个难忘的时刻。结论：最终，灯又亮

14、了，音乐会在一阵热烈的掌声中结束。这是我永远不会忘记的一天，因为它让我看到，即使在意外的情况下，我们也可以找到快乐，并创造持久的记忆。【英语语法和短语分析】It was a adjective day when.：结构，表示事件发生的具体日子。As soon as.：时间连接词，表示动作发生的时间。The atmosphere was electric：短语，表示“气氛令人激动”。With a bang：短语，表示“以激烈的方式”。Continued to play：短语，表示“继续演奏”。Create lasting memories：短语，表示“创造持久的记忆”。2.意外的惊喜Introd

15、uction:One day, I was walking home from school when I noticed something shiny on the ground.I picked it up and realized it was a small silver key.I had no idea what it opened, but I decided to keep it.Body:After getting home, I showed the key to my parents, but they didnt recognize it.I put it in my

16、 pocket and didnt think much of it.However, the next day, while I was at school, I found a note in my locker.The note had a strange symbol and a message that said, The key unlocks something valuable. I was curious and decided to investigate.Over the next few days, I searched the school and the surro

17、unding area, looking for anything that might be related to the key.I asked my friends, but no one knew anything about it.Finally, I stumbled upon an old shed behind the school.The door was locked, and there was a small keyhole.I inserted the key, and the door swung open.Inside, I found an old treasu

18、re chest filled with interesting artifacts and photos.Conclusion:In the end, I discovered that the shed belonged to a former teacher who had left behind a collection of historical items.It was an unexpected and fascinating surprise.This experience taught me that sometimes, curiosity can lead to exci

19、ting discoveries.引言：有一天，我从学校回家的路上，看到地上有一件闪亮的东西。我捡起来，发现那是一把小银钥匙。我不知道它能打开什么，但我决定保留它。主体：回到家后，我把钥匙给我的父母看，但他们不认识。我把钥匙放在口袋里，也没多想。然而，第二天，在学校时，我在我的储物柜里发现了一张纸条。纸条上有一个奇怪的符号和一条信息，上面写着，“这把钥匙能解锁某个有价值的东西。”我很好奇，决定去调查一下。在接下来的几天里，我搜索了学校和周边地区，寻找可能与钥匙有关的东西。我问了我的朋友，但没人知道这个钥匙的情况。最后，我在学校后面的一间老棚屋旁发现了。门是锁着的，并且有一个小钥匙孔。我把钥匙插

20、进去，门打开了。里面有一个旧宝箱，里面装满了有趣的文物和照片。结论：最终，我发现这个棚屋属于一位已故的老师，他留下了一些历史物品。这是一个意外又迷人的惊喜。这段经历教会我，有时好奇心会带来激动人心的发现。【英语语法和短语分析】One day, I was.：开头句型，用于描述故事的开始。Realized it was.：短语，表示“意识到是.”。Looking for anything that might be related to.：短语，表示“寻找可能与.相关的东西”。Stumbled upon.：短语，表示“偶然发现”。Taught me that.：短语，表示“教会我.”。3.难忘的

21、旅行Introduction:It was a warm summer day when my family and I decided to take a road trip to the mountains.We were all excited because we had planned this trip for weeks.The car was packed with snacks and supplies, and we set off early in the morning.Body:As we drove through the countryside, the scen

22、ery was breathtaking.We stopped at a small town for lunch and enjoyed some local dishes.After that, we continued our journey into the mountains.The road was winding and narrow, but the views were spectacular.Suddenly, we encountered a herd of sheep blocking the road.It was a funny sight, and we had

23、to wait for them to cross.Everyone in the car was laughing and taking photos.Once the road was clear, we continued on our way.By the time we reached our campsite, the sun was setting, casting a beautiful orange glow over the mountains.We set up our tent and had a delicious barbecue dinner.Conclusion

24、:In the end, the road trip turned out to be one of the best experiences Ive had with my family.We shared lots of laughter and made wonderful memories.This trip taught me the value of spending time with loved ones and enjoying the simple pleasures in life.引言：那是一个温暖的夏日，我和家人决定开车去山里旅行。我们都很兴奋，因为我们已经计划了这个

25、旅行好几个星期了。车里装满了零食和用品，我们一大早就出发了。主体：当我们穿过乡村时，风景非常美丽。我们在一个小镇停下来吃午饭，品尝了一些当地菜。之后，我们继续向山里行驶。道路曲折狭窄，但风景非常壮观。突然，我们遇到了一群羊挡在路上。这是一幅有趣的景象，我们不得不等羊群通过。车里的每个人都在笑，并拍照。一旦道路畅通，我们继续前行。当我们到达营地时，太阳正在下山，山上洒满了美丽的橙色光芒。我们搭好帐篷，享受了一顿美味的烧烤晚餐。结论：最终，这次公路旅行成为了我和家人最美好的经历之一。我们分享了许多笑声，留下了美好的记忆。这次旅行教会我花时间与家人相处，以及享受生活中简单的乐趣。【英语语法和短语分析】Take a road trip：短语，表示“去公路旅行”。Set off early in the morning：短语，表示“早晨早早出发”。Encountered a herd of sheep：短语，表示“遇到了一群羊”。Casting a beautiful orange glow：短语，表示“洒满了美丽的橙色光芒”。Enjoy the simple pleasures in life：短语，表示“享受生活中的简单乐趣”。5