初中英语外研版七年级下册Module 10写作指导.doc

1、七年级英语下册Module 10写作指导【写作目标】用英语写一篇短文，描述假期。【写作任务】英语课后，老师要求同学们根据图片内容（P63）写一篇英语短文，描述大明和玲玲的假期。【指点迷津】本次写作任务要求看图用英语写一篇短文，描述大明和玲玲的假期，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：首先总述大明和玲玲度过了一个怎样的假期，然后按照时间顺序分述他们在假期里的具体活动。(2) 人称：第三人称。(3) 时态：一般过去时。(4) 文体：记叙文。【谋篇布局】Daming and Linglings holiday总述大明和玲玲度过了一个极好的假期。Daming and Lingling had a fanta

2、stic holiday.分述具体活动(1) 周二，大明和玲玲参观了一个博物馆。他们了解了一些世界著名的艺术品。On Tuesday, Daming and Lingling visited a museum. They learned some _ _ _.(2) 周三，大明和玲玲在乡下观光。他们在那里玩得很开心。On Wednesday, Daming and Lingling _ _ in the country. They had awonderful time there.(3) 周四，大明和玲玲在一家餐馆吃了一顿美味的午餐。他们吃了汉堡包，喝了一些草莓汁。On Thursday,

3、Daming and Lingling had a delicious lunch at a restaurant. They atehamburgers and _ _ _ _.【巧衔接】在描述假期的具体活动时，我们一般按照时间顺序具体介绍每一天所做的事情，如本文可以用 On Tuesday, . On Wednesday, . On Thursday, . 来衔接上下文，使文章脉络清晰、行文自然有序。【连句成文】同学们，根据谋篇布局的练习，赶快动笔完成这篇短文吧！Daming and Linglings holiday【收藏夹】介绍一次旅行经历同学们，当我们用英语介绍自己的一次旅行经历时，

4、可以从以下几个方面展开： Where did you go?To Sanya, Hainan / Litang County, in thewest(西部) of Sichuan . Who did you go with?My parents / friends / classmates . How did you get there?By bus / car /high-speed train(高铁) / plane . What did you do?We visited a museum / atemple(寺庙) / took a boat tour / tookphotos / d

5、id some shopping / tried thelocal(当地的) food . How long did you stay there?For five days / a week / amonth(月) .【小试身手】假如你是郑飞，你的美国朋友Caleb知道你喜欢旅行，他发来一封电子邮件向你了解最近的一次旅行经历。请你写一封电子邮件回复他。Dear Caleb,How is everything? On my last holiday, _ How about your last holiday? Im looking forward to hearingfrom you.You

6、rs,Zheng Fei【答案】谋篇布局(1) world-famous works of art(2) went sightseeing(3) had / drank some strawberry juice连句成文Daming and Linglings holidayDaming and Lingling had a fantastic holiday.OnTuesday, they visited a museum and learned someworld-famous works of art.On Wednesday, theywent sightseeing in the c

7、ountry and had awonderful time there.On Thursday, they had adelicious lunch at a restaurant. They atehamburgers and drank some strawberry juice.小试身手One possible version:Dear Caleb,How is everything? On my last holiday,I went toLitang County. It is in the west of Sichuan. I wentthere with my friends

8、by bus. Litang County isfamousfor its beautiful natural scenery. So wetook a walk in the forest and took photos in thegreen grasslands. We also tried the local food,such as buttered tea and roasted barley flour. Theywere very special. We had a wonderful time there.How about your last holiday? Im lookingforward to hearing from you.Yours,Zheng Fei 2