专题23中考复习 书面表达.ppt

1、书面表达专项复习书面表达专项复习历年试题分析历年试题分析年份年份题目题目题型题型题材题材体裁体裁20082008My plans for My plans for the Summer the Summer HolidayHoliday半开放半开放(汉语提示汉语提示)暑假生活安排暑假生活安排记叙文记叙文20092009介绍介绍PhillipsPhillips半开放半开放(汉语提示汉语提示)人物介绍人物介绍记叙文记叙文20102010郊游通知郊游通知半开放半开放(汉语提示汉语提示)说明郊游的时间、说明郊游的时间、地点、活动安排地点、活动安排及注意事项及注意事项应用文应用文20112011发言稿发

2、言稿半开放半开放(汉语提示汉语提示)谈谈你在夏令营谈谈你在夏令营的活动及收获的活动及收获应用文应用文Writing skills书面表达六步法书面表达六步法检查检查誉写誉写修改修改成文成文造句造句 审题审题 书面书面表达表达一、审题一、审题 1.确定体裁和格式确定体裁和格式 2.确定主体时态确定主体时态 3.确定中心人称确定中心人称 4.确定得分点确定得分点 下周五将有考察团对我市进行考察（下周五将有考察团对我市进行考察（do some investigating)。下面是考察的有关事项，请你向考察团的朋友写一份书面的通知。下面是考察的有关事项，请你向考察团的朋友写一份书面的通知。1.乘车前往

3、糖厂（乘车前往糖厂（the sugar factory)，半小时到达；，半小时到达；2.集中时间：上午集中时间：上午8：000；3.集中地点：市政府门前（集中地点：市政府门前（the citys government)；4.在糖厂与工人们一起吃午饭；在糖厂与工人们一起吃午饭；5.午饭后在厂会议室集中，下午午饭后在厂会议室集中，下午2：00 离开。离开。2011年柳州中考作文题年柳州中考作文题 假设上个星期六你们去公园植树，在回家的路上你救了一只假设上个星期六你们去公园植树，在回家的路上你救了一只受伤的小鸟。请根据下表提供的中文提示，用英语写一篇受伤的小鸟。请根据下表提供的中文提示，用英语写一篇

4、70个词个词左右的短文，介绍事情的经过。开头已给出。左右的短文，介绍事情的经过。开头已给出。时间时间上星期六上星期六地点地点 从公园回家的路上从公园回家的路上经过经过 1.我在树下发现了一只受伤的小鸟，它不能飞了我在树下发现了一只受伤的小鸟，它不能飞了2.我把它带回家，细心照顾它我把它带回家，细心照顾它3.现在小鸟好多了，我打算现在小鸟好多了，我打算 感想感想 动物是我们的好朋友，我们应该爱护动物动物是我们的好朋友，我们应该爱护动物 Last Saturday,our class went to plant trees in the park._1.be friendly to.She is

5、friendly to everyone in the factory.My dream came true.2.be bad forEating too much is bad for our health.二、遣词造句步骤二、遣词造句步骤 1.抓主干，定时态；抓主干，定时态；2.套句型，连成句；套句型，连成句；二、遣词造句二、遣词造句6.buyforShe bought some presents for her e true4.take sb.to hospitalWe took him to hospital.He was taken to hospital.5.fly kitesTh

6、ey will fly kites in the park next week.姓名姓名 Phillips 年龄年龄12 国家国家The USA 爱好爱好游泳、画画、照顾动物游泳、画画、照顾动物.周末活动周末活动帮助打扫动物园，为动物制作标志牌帮助打扫动物园，为动物制作标志牌.1.Phillips 12岁了岁了.Phillips is twelve years old.2.他来自他来自The USA.He comes from the USA.He is an American.3.他喜欢游泳他喜欢游泳.He likes going swimming.4.他也喜欢画画他也喜欢画画.He als

7、o likes drawing.5.他还喜欢照顾动物，等等。他还喜欢照顾动物，等等。He likes taking care of the animals,and so on.6.周末的时候他帮助打扫动物园。周末的时候他帮助打扫动物园。He often helps to clean the zoo at the weekend.7.他为动物制作标志牌。他为动物制作标志牌。He usually makes some signal board for the animals at the weekends.姓名姓名Phillips 年龄年龄12 国家国家The USA 爱好爱好游泳、画画、照顾动物

8、游泳、画画、照顾动物.周末活动周末活动帮助打扫动物园，为动物制作标志牌帮助打扫动物园，为动物制作标志牌.Phillips and Animal Signs Many teenagers love animals.Phillips is one of them.Ethan Phillips is twelve years old.He is a student.He studies in a middle school.He comes from the USA.He is an American.He likes going swimming.He also likes drawing.He

9、likes taking care of the animals,and so on.He often helps to clean the zoo at the weekend.He usually makes some signal board for the animals at the weekends.三、成文三、成文 创设好的开端创设好的开端,适当使用一些关联词，把材料按一定的逻辑顺序串联起来，使适当使用一些关联词，把材料按一定的逻辑顺序串联起来，使之连贯之连贯,首尾要注意呼应首尾要注意呼应,使文章结构完整使文章结构完整.Everyone should learn from Phi

10、llips,we should take care of the animals,the animals are our friends.Lets do it today.四四.修改注意事项修改注意事项1.时态是否正确时态是否正确;2.主谓是否一致主谓是否一致;3.要点是否全面要点是否全面;4.人称是否正确人称是否正确;5.语序问题语序问题;6.是否符合语言习惯是否符合语言习惯;7.固定短语。固定短语。1.Hes hobby is play basketball.3.He often by bike to school.his playing his playing His hobby is

11、playing basketball.Though were were tired,we had a good time.He often goes to school by bike.He often takes a bike to school4.My hometown in summer has many beautiful flowers.There are many beautiful flow ers in my hometown in summer.2.Though we were tired,but we had a good time.实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练

12、实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练 5.I very like making friends with you.I like making friends with you very much.6.I watching TV now.I am watching TV now.7.There will have a big party in the park tomorrow.8.They were had a picnic in the park yesterday.There will be a big party in the park tomorrow.They had a pic

13、nic in the park yesterday.9.He without breakfast goes to work.He goes to work without breakfast.五、誊写五、誊写 书写工整、卷面整洁会为高分奠定基础。书写工整、卷面整洁会为高分奠定基础。六、检查六、检查 誊写以后要检查一遍，看有无单词拼写、誊写以后要检查一遍，看有无单词拼写、标点符号、字母大小写等错误。标点符号、字母大小写等错误。Writing skills书面表达六步法书面表达六步法检查检查誉写誉写修改修改成文成文造句造句 审题审题 书面书面表达表达 2010中考作文中考作文 假设你是李华。中考后

14、假设你是李华。中考后，你们班将到阳光农场郊游。请你通过，你们班将到阳光农场郊游。请你通过e-mail将有关将有关事项通知全班同学，要点如下：事项通知全班同学，要点如下：The trip to the Sunshine Farm When to start 6月月28日早上日早上8:00 Where to meet 学校操场学校操场 how to go 乘坐校车乘坐校车 What to do 野餐、摘西红柿、草莓野餐、摘西红柿、草莓.Safety tips 不要到河里游泳；不要单独行动不要到河里游泳；不要单独行动 参考词汇：参考词汇：get close to the nature（亲近大自然）（

15、亲近大自然）strawberries（草莓）（草莓）词数词数60-80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）,文中不能出现真人真名文中不能出现真人真名所给的要点必须用上，紧扣主题适当发挥所给的要点必须用上，紧扣主题适当发挥Hello,everyone!Would you like to have fun after the exam?Well Welcome to join us!Yours,Li HuaHello,everyone!Would you like to have fun after the exam?Well have an exciting tr

16、ip to the Sunshine Farm on June 28th.On that day,we will meet on the school playground at 8:00 in the morning.The school bus will take us there.We can get relaxed and get close to the nature.On the farm,we will have a picnic.We can also pick vegetables and fruits such as tomatoes and strawberries.Bu

17、t we mustnt swim in the lake.And we cant go off on our own.Im sure we will enjoy ourselves on the Sunshine Farm.Welcome to join us!Yours Li Hua短文欣赏短文欣赏根据提示和要求完成下面短文。根据提示和要求完成下面短文。假如你假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从从英国给你寄来一件礼物英国给你寄来一件礼物一件红色的衬衫，并附有一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些一封信。在信中他向你问

18、好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信什么。请你给他写一封回信(60-80个词个词)表示感谢。回表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容：信要包括以下内容：1向向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。问好并对他表示感谢。2礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。3告诉告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会 很热闹。询问很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。Homework关于提高英语写作的一些建议：关于提高英语写作的一些建议：1.1.记好单词，背好词组及句型记好单词，背好词

19、组及句型2.2.巩固语法知识，掌握各类词的应用。巩固语法知识，掌握各类词的应用。3.3.早晚读多读佳作范文，积累好词好句。早晚读多读佳作范文，积累好词好句。4.4.坚持每天口头造句，每周练习至少一篇。坚持每天口头造句，每周练习至少一篇。5.5.注意练字，提高书写。注意练字，提高书写。要灵活变通，避免硬译式表达 1.汉语式英语汉语式英语我们发现学好英语是很困难的。我们发现学好英语是很困难的。汉语式英语：汉语式英语：We find that learn English well is diffi-cult.地道表达：地道表达：We find it difficult to learn Englis

20、h well.呆在家里不能亲身了解外界。呆在家里不能亲身了解外界。汉语式英语：汉语式英语：Staying at home lonely can not know the outside of the world.地道表达：地道表达：They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world when staying at home.2.直译类直译类 1.21世纪报世纪报图文并茂，广为人知，深受青睐。图文并茂，广为人知，深受青睐。直译类：直译类：2lst Century has interesting articles and c

21、olorful pictures.It is widely known and deeply loved by people 转换表达：转换表达：The 21st Century has interesting articles with colorful pictures.It is a Well-known newspaper.which is very popular with students and English learners.校园环境幽静，绿树成阴。校园环境幽静，绿树成阴。转换表达：转换表达：A.It is quiet in our school and there are

22、a lot of trees in and around it.B.Our school is quiet with a lot of trees in and around it .20112011年中考作文年中考作文 假设你是李华，正在参加英语夏令营。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，假设你是李华，正在参加英语夏令营。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你在夏令营的活动及收获。开头已给出。谈谈你在夏令营的活动及收获。开头已给出。写作要点：写作要点：1.擅长运动，参加篮球队及比赛，学会与队友合作擅长运动，参加篮球队及比赛，学会与队友合作 2.喜欢英语，参加英语角，结交新朋友；喜欢英语，参加英语角，结交新朋友；

23、3.用英语交流，提高英语水平。用英语交流，提高英语水平。参考词汇：与队友合作参考词汇：与队友合作 work with the teammates；英语角英语角 the English corner写作要求：写作要求：1.词数词数60-80个个 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名文中不能出现真实的校名和人名 3.所给的要点必须用上，紧扣主题适当发挥所给的要点必须用上，紧扣主题适当发挥 Hello,everyone!Im Li Hua.I have learnt a lot on the English summer camp.I think I have done a good job.Thank

24、 you.3.简单罗列类简单罗列类：业余爱好：游泳、溜冰、集邮、流行音乐。业余爱好：游泳、溜冰、集邮、流行音乐。罗列表达：罗列表达：Hobbits：swimming,skating,collecting stamps，pop music 机械表达：机械表达：My hobbies are swimming,skating,collecting stamps，pop music.灵活变通表达：灵活变通表达：In my spare time I enjoy listing to pop mu-sic and collecting stamps.My favorite sports are swimm

25、ing in summer and skating in winter 内容：白天，上课、做作业；晚上，做作业。内容：白天，上课、做作业；晚上，做作业。罗列重复式表达：罗列重复式表达：In the daytime.We took lessons and had to do our homework.In the evening.we had to do our homework.灵活变通表达：灵活变通表达：We have to go to school even at week-ends and do much homework both in the day time and in the

26、evening.It is fine last Sunday.I and my classmate by bike went to visit an old peoples home.We got to there is at 10:00.We used ours pocket money buy some fruit and flowers to the old people.They were look very happy when they seeing us.We some helped they cleaned the rooms.Some helped them wash clo

27、thes.Some singing and dancing for them.Everyone were having a good time.When we left in the afternoon,they thanks to us and say we are good children.Thought we very tired,but we fell very happy.短文改错It is fine last Sunday.I went to visit an old peoples home by bike with my classmates.We got to there

28、at 10:00.We used our pocket money to buy some fruit and flowers for the old people.They looked very happy when they see us.Some of us helped them clean the rooms.Some helped them wash clothes.Some sang and danced for them.Everyone had a good time.When we left in the afternoon,they thanked us and said that we were good children.Thought we very tired,we feld very happy.