读后续写练习 煎豆腐会让我失去朋友吗？课件-2023届高三英语写作专项.pptx

1、读后续写专项练习读后续写专项练习 煎豆腐会让我失去朋友吗？煎豆腐会让我失去朋友吗？理解材料The familiar smell of garlic and onion filled the air as I opened my lunch bag to see what my mom had packed for me.On any other occasion,I would have been delighted to eat my moms pan-fried tofu:a Chinese dish that I often ate for dinner.But not today,th

2、e day a nice girl had invited me,the new girl at school,to sit with her friends during lunch.“Charis,over here!”My new friend was waving her arms,trying to get my attention.As I prepared to walk over to the table,memories of elementary and middle school lunchtimes resurfaced.I remembered my embarras

3、sment as my friends would hold their noses when I brought homemade Chinese food.I remembered how my embarrassment shifted to anger when I complained about the smell to my mom.I had argued with my mom that I wanted“normal”food for lunch.I remembered the look on my moms face,a mix between disappointme

4、nt and confusion.But I was determined and she gave in.So for the remainder of middle school,my mom packed odorless(没有气味的),non-Chinese food like ham and cheese sandwiches.However,that day,she was in a rush and packed me leftovers from dinner.As soon as I got to my new lunch table,I tried to hide my l

5、unch bag down under my seat.I sat quietly,trying not to be noticed when Katrina,a new acquaintance,asked where my food was.“Im not really hungry,”I replied in aninsecure voice.But Katrina had already seen me carry my lunch so she spoke out,“Then,Ill eat it!”The other girls laughed apparently Katrina

6、 was known to be a big eater.I didnt want to be rude to a potentially new friend,so I reluctantly dragged out my lunch bag.The moment I lifted the lid of my lunch container,I could practically taste the garlic and onion.The girls,piqued(激起好奇心)by the smell in the air,all curiously looked at the oval-

7、shaped container.I expected an“Ew”or a“What is that?”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。I expected them to turn away and turn me away.When I arrived home,my mom asked how my day went.根据你对原材料的理解，判断以下表述是正确（T）还是错误（F）。1.I was delighted to see the pan-fried tofu my mom prepared for me.2.My new friend had i

8、nvited me to sit with her friends during lunch.3.My friends in elementary and middle schools liked the smell of pan-fried tofu.4.I tried to hide my lunch bag down under my seat because I was not hungry.FTFF理解材料理解材料I expected the girls to turn away and turn me away.1.OpeningAt lunch time,when I opene

9、d my lunch bag,the familiar smell of garlic and onion filled the air.Mom packed pan-fried tofu for me.I like pan-fried tofu,but today my new friend had invited me to sit with her friends during lunch.Would they hate the smell like my friends in elementary and middle schools?I tried to hide my lunch

10、bag but a girl found it and said she would eat my lunch.When I arrived home,my mom asked how my day went.2.Build-up3.Climax4.Resolution5.Ending研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Para 1:I expected them to turn away and turn me away.Q1:What might Katrina and the other girls do?Did they act like what I expected?

11、Q2:How might I react to the girls behavior?本段重点：“我”的新朋友们对炒豆腐的反应以及“我”的反应。Para 2:When I arrived home,my mom asked how my day went.Q3:How would I answer about my day?How might“my answer”be connected to the topic:pan-fried tofu?Q4:What would mom say about the food she packed for me that morning?本段重点：“我”

12、放学回家后与妈妈的互动。建议续写结尾设计成宣扬真、善、美的内容，比较容易打动读者。Q5:What is a warm and moving ending like?I expected them to turn away and turn me away._（我没想到Katrina立刻拿了一小块豆腐并且吃掉了。主语从句，grab的使用）And I most certainly did not expect her to encourage the rest of the table to try my lunch.My new friends were going on about how l

13、ucky I was that my mom took the time to prepare a cooked meal for me.They were surprised by the fact that tofu could actually taste good._（尽管我一块儿炒豆腐都没有吃，但我却饱了因为自豪与感激。While，be full of的用法）根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分。阅读以下参考范文，并学习范文的精彩表达。I expected them to turn away and turn me away.What I did not expect was for

14、 Katrina to instantly grab a small piece of tofu and eat it.And I most certainly did not expect her to encourage the rest of the table to try my lunch.My new friends were going on about how lucky I was that my mom took the time to prepare a cooked meal for me.They were surprised by the fact that tof

15、u could actually taste good.When I arrived home,my mom asked how my day went._（我从包里拿出午餐盒，简单回答了句：“不错”。现在分词作状语，pull out的使用）“Im sorry,but I didnt have time to buy bread or ham yesterday.”But when she noticed that the container was empty,she hesitated before asking,“How was the food?”_（回答前我顿了一下，接着说：“非常不

16、错，妈妈。如果不麻烦的话，你可以明天也给我做炒豆腐当午餐吗？”paused a moment的使用，it作形式主语）根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分。阅读以下参考范文，并学习范文的精彩表达。When I arrived home,my mom asked how my day went.Answering with a simple“Good,”I pulled out my lunch container from my bag.“Im sorry,but I didnt have time to buy bread or ham yesterday.”But when she noti

17、ced that the container was empty,she hesitated before asking,“How was the food?”I paused a moment before I replied,“Perfect,mom.If its not too much trouble,can I still have pan-fried tofu for lunch tomorrow?”“我”的心理变化：Opening:Build-up:Climax:Resolution:Ending:angry and disappointednervous and uneasye

18、mbarrassedworried but finally prouddelightful and happyI expected them to turn away and turn me away.What I did not expect was for Katrina to instantly grab a small piece of tofu and eat it.And I most certainly did not expect her to encourage the rest of the table to try my lunch.My new friends were

19、 going on about how lucky I was that my mom took the time to prepare a cooked meal for me.They were surprised by the fact that tofu.While I didnt get to eat any of my moms pan-fried tofu,I was full of pride and gratitude.具有画面感Tips:进行续写的时候，需始终围绕语篇讨论的主要话题进行，动作描写符合实际情况。范文精彩语言动作描写When I arrived home,my

20、mom asked how my day went.Answering with a simple“Good,”I pulled out my lunch container from my bag.“Im sorry,but I didnt have time to buy bread or ham yesterday.”But when she noticed that the container was empty,she hesitated before asking,“How was the food?”I paused a moment before I replied,“Perf

21、ect,mom.If its not too much trouble,can I still have pan-fried tofu for lunch tomorrow?”具有画面感ask,answer,pull out,notice,ask,reply 动作衔接自然范文精彩语言动作描写范文精彩语言心理描写I expected them to turn away and turn me away.What I did not expect was for Katrina to instantly grab a small piece of tofu and eat it.And I mos

22、t certainly did not expect her to encourage the rest of the table to try my lunch.My new friends were going on about how lucky I was that my mom took the time to prepare a cooked meal for me.They were surprised by the fact that tofu could actually taste good.While I didnt get to eat any of my moms p

23、an-fried tofu,I was full of pride and gratitude.When I arrived home,my mom asked how my day went.Answering with a simple“Good,”I pulled out my lunch container from my bag.“Im sorry,but I didnt have time to buy bread or ham yesterday.”But when she noticed that the container was empty,she hesitated be

24、fore asking,“How was the food?”I paused a moment before I replied,“Perfect,mom.If its not too much trouble,can I still have pan-fried tofu for lunch tomorrow?”生动形象Tips:在诠释人物时，可以从人物的“所思”、“所感”、“所做”等方面增加细节，使得人物形象更丰满。I expected them to turn away and turn me away.What I did not expect was for Katrina to

25、instantly grab a small piece of tofu and eat it.And I most certainly did not expect her to encourage the rest of the table to try my lunch.My new friends were going on about how lucky I was that my mom took the time to prepare a cooked meal for me.They were surprised by the fact that tofu could actu

26、ally taste good.While I didnt get to eat any of my moms pan-fried tofu,I was full of pride and gratitude.When I arrived home,my mom asked how my day went.Answering with a simple“Good,”I pulled out my lunch container from my bag.“Im sorry,but I didnt have time to buy bread or ham yesterday.”But when

27、she noticed that the container was empty,she hesitated before asking,“How was the food?”I paused a moment before I replied,“Perfect,mom.If its not too much trouble,can I still have pan-fried tofu for lunch tomorrow?”expect的重复,加强语气，加深印象范文精彩语言重复I expected them to turn away and turn me away.What I did

28、not expect was for Katrina to instantly grab a small piece of tofu and eat it.And I most certainly did not expect her to encourage the rest of the table to try my lunch.My new friends were going on about how lucky I was that my mom took the time to prepare a cooked meal for me.They were surprised by

29、 the fact that tofu could actually taste good.While I didnt get to eat any of my moms pan-fried tofu,I was full-of pride and gratitude.When I arrived home,my mom asked how my day went.Answering with a simple“Good,”I pulled out my lunch container from my bag.“Im sorry,but I didnt have time to buy bre

30、ad or ham yesterday.”But when she noticed that the container was empty,she hesitated before asking,“How was the food?”I paused a moment before I replied,“Perfect,mom.If its not too much trouble,can I still have pan-fried tofu for lunch tomorrow?”主语从句grab a piece of encourage sb to do同位语从句be full ofI

31、t的用法范文精彩语言高级表达高级语块expect sb.to do sth.full of pride and gratitude满怀骄傲与感激go on about sth.谈论某事期待某人做某事pull outpause a moment拉出迟疑了一下grab a small piece of tofu抓起一小块豆腐take the time to prepare花费时间准备have time to do sth.有时间做某事亮点评述While I didnt get to eat any of my moms pan-fried tofu,I was full of pride and

32、gratitude.(Para.1)破折号的使用不仅在此处起到停顿作用，还使句末的内容成为句子中心。I was full与逗号前面的didnt get to eat any of my moms pan-fried tofu形成对比，读者读到“我虽然没吃到炒豆腐，但却饱了”的内容，本来会觉得很纳闷，没吃到东西怎么会产生饱意？作者这时使用破折号，表示自己并不是物理上的“饱”，而是内心充满了骄傲和对妈妈的感激，由此升华了主题。续写素材积累Para 1 Para 2 1.It took me by surprise that Katrina 2.I opened my mouth wide and

33、almost cried on seeing Katrina 3.With Katrinas cry of“This is delicious”,several forks and spoons reached for the tofu simultaneously.4.Overjoyed at the satisfaction on their face,I invited them to my house this weekend to try my mothers other specialties.5.I said I was doing great and told her Id like pan-fried tofu again the next day.6.“Im sorry,but I was in a hurry this morning”said mom in an apologetic voice.7.“Mom,Im afraid you have to make more pan-fried tofu this weekend as some friends from school will come for dinner and they want nothing but this particular dish.”Thank you!