高考英语书面表达读后续写辅导（ppt课件）-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项.pptx

1、读后续写训练篇“Yes,”he said.“You may both go,”said he.各种“说”tell告诉 ask问 answer回答add补充 shout喊 reply 回答state陈述 whisper轻声说 exclaim呼喊argue争论 interrupt打断 repeat重复explain解释 claim声称 complain报怨insist坚持 order命令 request请求demand强烈要求suggest建议 recommend推荐announce宣布beg请求 mock嘲讽apologize道歉murmur低语 blurt out 脱口而出 “What is

2、the matter now?”asked his wife.“I just cant remember why I come back and where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day,”replied the professor.However,the real reason was that he forgot where he had left his children.Sensing something wrong,Mrs.Smith didnt believe his words,because wheneve

3、r he told a lie,he would usually blink his eyes quickly.“Tell me the truth,”ordered his wife.“As you told me,I didnt forget where I put the name of that town,but I forget the station where I left our children!”whispered the professor,his voice trembling.“What a bad memory!”shouted his wife.所见At the

4、sight of sth./sb.所闻Upon hearing the news that.,sb.所说“.”said sb.所做sb.did sth,and did sthsb.did sth,doing.所思It was at the moment sb realized that.It suddenly occurred to him that.第一类 起到连接作用的高级句型和语法非谓语作状语一。就。with复合结构/独立主格结构so.that.倒装as引导的让步状语从句形容词短语作状语第二类 描写的固定句型无灵主语（情绪描写；心理描写）强调句（点题）写人说话时的倒装（语言描写）从未。（

5、心理描写）迫不及待。（动作描写）虚拟语气（语言描写，心理描写）心理描写 内心戏 “所思所想”脑海里的画面和想法1.回忆 All those.memories crowded into ones mind.所有那些。的回忆都涌入某人的脑海。Reflecting on.,sb.回想/反思。，某人。Reflecting on what he had done,Thomas lowered his head with guilt.反思自己做过的事情，Thomas 羞愧地低下了头。2.灵感It flashed through ones mind that.It dawned upon sb.that.I

6、t occurred to sb.that.某人突然想到。It flashed through Steves mind that he could spend the weekend studying in the small woods.3.决心 Sb.made up his mind that.Sb.was determined that.某人下定决心要。Seeing my partners all in high spirits,I made up my mind that I would by no means be a coward again.看到伙伴们斗志昂扬，我下定决心不能再做

7、懦夫了。4.后悔 If only I had not done.如果我（没有）。就好了 If only I had listened to her words.如果我听了她的话就好了5.“托物言志”Seeing sth.,sb.felt as if it had been doing.and saying,.看到某物，某人感觉它好像在。，并且说：“。”Seeing the helicopter in the distance,Jane felt as if it had been comforting her with its thunderous noise and saying,“Your

8、 waiting pays off!”情绪描写 刻画人物的喜怒哀乐 1.内层“直抒胸臆”2.表层“眉目传情”3.外层“寄情于景”内层“直抒胸臆”1.形容词句式 Feeling+情绪，sb./(Being)+情绪，sb.（感到）。，某人。Feeling exhausted,he went to bed.Being exhausted,he went to bed.Exhausted,he went to bed.Feeling anxious,he paced up and down.Being anxious,he paced up and down.Anxious,he paced up a

9、nd down.某人如此。以至于。（感觉好像。）Sb.was so+情绪+that he/she felt as if So+情绪+was sb.that he/she felt as if Tom was so happy that he felt as if he had been in heaven.So happy was Tom that he felt as if he had been in heaven.Tom 如此开心，以至于感觉自己好像身在天堂。2.名词句式 句式1：情绪的起因 To ones+情绪（名词），sb.令某人。的是，。To their relief,their

10、son returned safe and sound.句式2：情绪的后果 Out of +情绪，sb.出于某种情绪，某人。Out of curiosity,they went through the tunnel.出于好奇，他们穿过了通道。谓语/非谓语/形容词+with+情绪(名词）某人。地。/某人因为。而。She jumped with joy.He sighed with disappointment.Her face lit up with excitement.Frozen with fear,he couldnt utter a word.句式3：情绪的把持/溢出/外露/变化/升腾

11、Sb.was overwhelmed with+情绪He was overwhelmed with excitement.他激动的不知所措。Sb.couldnt contain sbs+情绪She couldnt contain her joy.她抑制不住内心的喜悦。There was apparent+情绪+in sbs voice/eyes/expression/behavior.There was apparent horror in her eyes.她眼神中有明显的恐惧。Sbs+情绪1+faded away and was replaced with+情绪2His excitemen

12、t faded away,and was replaced with despair and worry.他的兴奋耗尽了，取而代之的是绝望和忧虑。Sb.felt a great sense of+情绪+welling up in sbs heart and surging through sb.某人感到一股强烈的。在内心升腾，奔涌。Lucy felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.Lucy感到一股强烈的嫉妒在她心中升腾，奔涌。Sb.felt a mixture of+情绪1+a

13、nd+情绪2+welling up in sbs heart and surging through sb.某人感到一股混杂着。和。的情绪在内心升腾，奔涌。Seeing the helicopter in the distance,Jane felt a mixture of excitement and grievance welling up in her heart and surging through her.With sth.doing/done,sb.某物。，某人。With the bright moon hanging in the sky,people feasted on

14、grand meals,talking in high spirits.明月高悬天际，人们把酒言欢 As/With+情况恶化，sb.was on the edge of b reaking down,totally at a loss what to do.随着情况的恶化，某人快要崩溃了，完全不知道该怎么办。With the wolf glaring at him fiercely outside the car,Mac was on the edge of breaking down,totally at a loss what to do.表层（“眉目传情”）Those words chi

15、lled my heart.那些话让我心寒 The scene warmed my heart.这一幕让我心暖 The song softened my heart.歌声柔软了我的心 What he said pierced my heart.他说的话刺痛了我的心环境描写 外层（寄情于景）方位+lie/stand+景，介词+which is+物/人 （在。有一个。，在它的。有。）In the center of the forest stands a giant tree,beside which is a small cottage.A lit up B,which,as if by mag

16、ic,had turned into C.A 点亮了B，好似魔法般，B 变成了C The setting sun lit up the river,which,as if by magic,had turned into a golden ribbon.夕阳照亮了这条河，仿佛变魔术似的，这条河变成了一条金色的丝带。With sth.doing/done,sb.某物。，某人。With the bright moon hanging in the sky,people feasted on grand meals,talking in high spirits.明月高悬天际，人们把酒言欢 As/W

17、ith+情况恶化，sb.was on the edge of b reaking down,totally at a loss what to do.随着情况的恶化，某人快要崩溃了，完全不知道该怎么办。With the wolf glaring at him fiercely outside the car,Mac was on the edge of breaking down,totally at a loss what to do.Bathed in+天气，others were.,while sb.did.,doing.沐浴在。中，其他人在。，而某人却在动作1，动作2 Bathed i

18、n wonderful sunshine,other students were busy chatting and taking photos with their teachers,while he was sitting quietly on his chair,drawing something.在美妙的阳光下，其他同学都在忙着聊天，和老师拍照，而他却安静地坐在椅子上，画着什么东西。情绪描写语料 名词 喜悦：delight joy happiness amusement excitement 悲伤：sadness sorrow misery痛苦 regret depression沮丧

19、disappointment desperation绝望 frustration挫折 愤怒：anger rage暴怒 madness疯狂 fury狂怒 恐惧：fright terror horror panic 满意：content satisfaction 惊讶：surprise shock amazement astonishment震惊 焦虑：concern anxiety 尴尬：embarrassment 愧疚：shame guilt 嫉妒：jealousy 好奇：curiosity形容词喜悦：delighted joyful happy amused excited cheerful

20、悲伤：sad heartbroken regretful depressed disappointed desperate frustrated 愤怒：angry mad annoyed furious 恐惧：frightened terrified horrified scared 满意：content satisfied pleased 惊讶：surprised shocked amazed astonished 焦虑：concerned anxious restless nervous 尴尬：embarrassed 愧疚：shamed guilty 嫉妒：jealous 好奇：curio

21、us 动词喜悦：smile laugh giggle咯咯笑 grin露齿笑悲伤：cry weep哭泣 sob抽泣 choke哽咽 sigh叹气 感动：touch move焦虑：shake tremble颤抖读后续写常用句法1.sb.was doing.when.某人正在。突然。Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.2.What touched me most was that.最让我感动的是。3.No sooner.than./Hardly.when.一。就。No sooner had he stepped on the

22、stage than the audience burst into thunderous applause.4.It was.that.强调句 It was a piece of broken glass that cut into his left wing.5.So.that.如此。以至于。So delighted was I that I wanted to yell out and share my feelings with my dad.6.Only+状语+倒装句 只有。才。Only then did I realize that the snake was real,not a

23、 toy.7.形容+as+I was,主句 尽管。，但是。Exhausted as I was,I felt extremely happy.动作描写 动作链 A,B and C She took a deep breath,leaned on her cane and limped to him.她深吸一口气，倚靠着她的拐杖，一瘸一拐地走向他。动作描写语料头：raise ones head 抬头 lower ones head 低头 scratch ones head 挠头 rest ones head on 把头倚靠在 脸：Her cheeks were shining with tear

24、s.,his face beaming with happiness.Her face burned with embarrassment.眼睛：Tears blurred my eyes.泪水模糊我的双眼 her eyes lit up with excitement 眼睛因为兴奋亮了起来 手：reach out ones hand 伸出手 clap ones hands 鼓掌 grasp sth.in ones hand 把。握在手上 clench ones fists 紧握双拳 动词spot 目睹 catch sight of 看见 get a glimpse of 瞥见grab 抓住

25、pat 轻拍 tap轻敲 rush 冲 dash 疾奔 storm冲/闯读后续写三大主题人与自我人与自然人与社会1.The _(forgettable)experience has made me realize that helping others is the source of happiness.2.The unforgettable experience has totally changed me,_(give)me an new life and hope.3._the saying goes,“Honesty is the best policy.”4.If you work

26、 hard,your efforts will pay off sooner _later.5.As long as you have a dream,just go for it,_never give it up easily.Your dream will come true sooner or later.6.Its never too late _(go)for your dream.As long as you take every opportunity and make full use of it,you will be able to realize your dream.

27、主题升华句7.There is no doubt that it has become the most unforgettable experience,_I will cherish forever in my life!8.From my fathers words,I have realized that family matters the most _the world.9.From then on,I would try my best to help others.Only _this way,could more and more people help each other

28、 in the future.10.Even small act of kindness can make a big difference.Kindness is one thing that really _(deserve)to be passed on from one to another.11.Its the _(responsible)of every one of us to take good care of animals,for they are our loyal friends.12.Humans and nature depend _each other.Lets live in harmony with the natural world and protect nature,for it is our home and future.13._(protect)nature is not only a responsibility,but also a way to make sure a bright future for all living beings.