1、Welcome!Welcome!Continuation writing Continuation writing Master general steps and some tips of continuation writing.Appreciate or correct some compositions.Learn to be brave and selfless in face of danger.Continue to polish up.Learning aimsGet the gistTake the hintDevelop the plotExplore the themeS
2、trategies of Continuation Writing Step1.Brief analysis of the material1.Whats the style of the passage?A.Narration(记叙文)B.Exposition(说明文)讲述人物讲述人物经历、事经历、事物变化物变化C.Argumentation(议论文)2.What tense should we use if we continue to write?A.The simple past tense 一般过去时B.The simple future tense 一般将来时C.The simpl
3、e present tense 一般现在时 whowhatwhyhow文,并完成学案中第二文,并完成学案中第二10分分钟阅读短部分短部分Step1-4的的练习whenwhereStep 2.Find the key elements1.David2.the starter 3.audiences4.other windsurfers5.Jessica6.reporters and photographersWho are the main characters?Six characters(who)David注意:注意:续写写时不不要要随意增加人物。随意增加人物。Step 3.Take the
4、 hintHe barely missed a single game or practice whatever the weather.1.What preparations did David do for the race?2.How did David feel at the beginning of the competition?He could hardly stop himself from shouting out in excitement,rushing to the finishing line for the first.3.What did David decide
5、 to do when he first saw smoke behind the speedboat?The smoke could tell him the direction the wind was blowing,so he decided to study it for a moment out of habit.BeginningEndingconflict(problem)?Not just the smoke but a big fire!Not just the smoke but a big fire!Solution?Para.1 give up race or put
6、 the fire out.Para.3 shouted out in excitementPara.4 saw smoke behind saw smoke behind the speedboat,on the the speedboat,on the shoreshoreconfident,excited.habitually decided the wind to his advantagedeterminedconfident.lost the race but was worthy;awarded;.原文部分原文部分续写部分续写部分Story MountainPara.2 Audi
7、ences confused and joined bitter inner struggle in mindStep 4.Develop the plotWhat profound theme can you explore in the text?pWhen judging things,dont be subjectivepBe brave and selfless in face of danger.p Those who do not experience have no say.p Have the courage to do what is right.hard workdete
8、rminationStep 5:Explore the themeStep 6:Appreciate and reviseAfter the fire was put out,relief filled Davids heart.杨溪溪添加导入环节审题不清不清105wordsBut the shore was so far away that nobody.and 朱湘湘朱湘湘添加导入环节曹曹颖添加导入环节承上启下承上启下江小月江小月添加导入环节许乐David knew that there wasnt any hope to.The reporters,audience,and photog
9、raphers recognized David immediatelyarose 118 words添加导入环节advanced words李李智斗智斗添加导入环节As he glided more closer to the shore,he was surprised that many audience called his name,cheering him up,and even other windsurfers were looking at him with respect.陆欣怡欣怡添加导入环节曹颖曹颖让步倒装步倒装What David said in an intervi
10、ew was that it was peoples safety that was more important than his dream.Polish up the writing with your partner.Risk,like an obstacle,stop you to step to the pace of success;danger,just want to test people,to see if you can overcome it.As we grow up,we will face more and more dangers.A memorable test and danger is to learn to make ourselves stronger.Thank you Thank you for for listening!listening!
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