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1、读后续写专项突破读后续写专项突破读确定确定主角主角0101明确问题明确问题/矛盾矛盾0202解决解决问题问题/矛盾矛盾03035 5W W W W+1+1主旨主旨（who、when、where、what、why）（How）续如何讲好一个故事？如何讲好一个故事？情节情节读后续写描述之前或现在的描述之前或现在的世界，并涉及主要世界，并涉及主要人物和人物关系人物和人物关系主要角色遇到了一主要角色遇到了一些事情（导火索），些事情（导火索），冲突矛盾出现冲突矛盾出现角色直面恐惧，解决问题，过角色直面恐惧，解决问题，过程可能有些不顺利程可能有些不顺利角色最终克服障碍，回到第一角色最终克服障碍，回到第一幕的

2、状态或实现了想要的状态，幕的状态或实现了想要的状态，并有所成长和进步（升华）并有所成长和进步（升华）好故事源于好结好故事源于好结构（续写部分）构（续写部分）冲突/矛盾反应（情感、动作）尝试自身努力 或 借助外界工具危机缓解 或 失败告终转折灵机一动关键人/物的帮助解决！矛盾矛盾-解决解决一、高级句式一、高级句式1.1.定语定语从句（限制性、非限、后定）从句（限制性、非限、后定）2.2.非谓非谓语（语（doingdoing、donedone、todotodo）3.3.被动被动(bedoneby)(bedoneby)4.with4.with的复合结构的复合结构5.5.强调句（强调句（itis/wa

3、s.that.itis/was.that.）6.6.倒装倒装7.7.修辞手法修辞手法(比喻比喻belikebelike、拟人、排比、拟人、排比)二、语言描写二、语言描写1 1、环境描写、环境描写2 2、情感描写、情感描写3 3、动作描写、动作描写1.1.环境描写环境描写The sun shone.Themorningsunshoneonthegroundwarmlyandgently.Thewarmmorningsunlightfellonthegroundmildly.形容词形容词+意象意象+动词动词+副词副词/方位介短方位介短外面刮起了风，地上的灰尘外面刮起了风，地上的灰尘(dust)(d

4、ust)乱飞乱飞(disorder)(disorder)。Outside,there was a strong wind,the dust on the ground flying in disorder.外面刮起了大风，外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛让人睁不开眼睛。Outside,there was a strong wind,_(blow)the branches in all directions.The dust on the ground was flying in disorder,_ made people unable

5、to open their eyes.whichblowing 即即 学学 即即 练练1.昨天下了倾盆大雨。2.西湖的美景是一场视觉盛宴，两岸bank布满绿树红花。（with复合结构）（概述）Itwasrainingcatsanddogs.Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdaywhenschoolwasover.I was _when I got home.The peaceful landscape of the West lake is a true feast for the eyes，with its both banks dotted with green

6、trees and colorful flowersall wet 2.2.情感描写情感描写I walked away sadly.I walked away with tears in my eyes.I walked away with sadness filling my heart.离开的时候，离开的时候，悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落。When walking away,disappointment and sadness came in waves and tears streamed down my cheeks.I burst into tearsEver

7、ything in the world lost its color.Night was deep and there was nothing but dead silence.她回到家里，又累又饿，不想说一句话。她回到家里，又累又饿，不想说一句话。Tired and hungry,he went home,not_(say)a word.adj 1 and adj 2,主句，主句，doing/独立主格结构独立主格结构saying听到这个好消息，他开心地跳起来。听到这个好消息，他开心地跳起来。_(hear)this good news,he jumped for joy,_ his eyes

8、sparkling like shining stars.Hearingwith即即 学学 即即 练练2.一瞬间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动的说不出话。1.Mary很害怕。_ frightened was Mary that she couldnt say a word or move,_(sit)on the ground like a statue.SosittingIn a flash,_ tears_(well)up in my eyes,I was touched/moved beyond words.withwellinga wave of excitement take hold of

9、 Mom(妈妈激动不已).3.又意外又开心，他站起身来去领奖，感到非常自豪。Surprised and delighted,he stood up to accept the prize,_(feel)proud.feeling3.3.动作描写动作描写分解分解-合并合并-美化美化我早上匆忙去上学。我早上匆忙去上学。穿衣服穿衣服-拿书包拿书包-上学上学I put on my coat,grabbed my schoolbag and rushed to the school.我把他的名字忘了。我把他的名字忘了。措辞具体化措辞具体化I forgot his name.His name had co

10、mpletely slipped from my memory.His name had completely escaped me.即即 学学 即即 练练这个天真的被妈妈抱着的女孩心疯狂地跳动着，兴奋地尖叫着，打开她一直期待着的精致的礼盒。With her heart_（beat）wildly,the innocent girl,_was held by her mom and screaming _ excitement,unwrapped/open her delicate gift box(,)_ she had been looking forward to without any_(hesitate).beating who withwhichhesitation