2025届高考英语一轮复习写作之信息的有效整合（ppt课件）.rar

1、 高考作文高考作文,特别是基础写作特别是基础写作,提供的信提供的信息点多息点多,但句数有限但句数有限,熟练掌握整合信息的熟练掌握整合信息的方法非常重要。方法非常重要。典型例析（介绍广州）：典型例析（介绍广州）：广州，中国第三大城市，全市面积约广州，中国第三大城市，全市面积约7434平方平方公里。公里。Guangzhou is the third largest city in China.It has an area of 7434 square kilometers.Guangzhou is the third largest city in China with an area of 74

2、34 square kilometers.(介词短语作状语介词短语作状语)用介词短语合并句子有两种情况用介词短语合并句子有两种情况,我们我们常常可以用到：常常可以用到：(1)介词短语作后置定语介词短语作后置定语(2)介词短语作状语。介词短语作状语。挑战自我：运用介词短语合并句子挑战自我：运用介词短语合并句子他给我们讲述了他的学英语的有趣经历。我们都大他给我们讲述了他的学英语的有趣经历。我们都大笑起来。笑起来。He told us about his interesting experiences of learning English.We laughed a lot.On hearing h

3、is interesting experiences of learning English,we laughed a lot.(介词短语作状语介词短语作状语)探究：探究：假如你是你校学生会主席李华，现准备写一个关于讲座的通知假如你是你校学生会主席李华，现准备写一个关于讲座的通知主讲：北京大学的王教授主讲：北京大学的王教授 讲座时间：下周六上午讲座时间：下周六上午讲座题目：如何好好生活讲座题目：如何好好生活 Professor Wang is from Beijing University.He will come to our school to give us a lecture next

4、 Saturday morning.（主题）（主题）how to live wellProfessor Wang from Beijing University will come to our school to give us a lecture about how to live well next Saturday morning.(介词短语作后置定语介词短语作后置定语)观察观察 学招学招:u In1822，King George IV visited Edinburgh,the capital of Scotland.uYesterday I talked to my English

5、 teacher,Mr.James.u Nafion(全氟离子交换树脂全氟离子交换树脂),a useful material was first made by a chemist in Dupont,a company that makes chemicals.同位语主要用于介绍人物、事物、地点、同位语主要用于介绍人物、事物、地点、产品、书名等。产品、书名等。运用一运用一(介绍上海）：介绍上海）：上海，中国最大城市，被誉为上海，中国最大城市，被誉为“东方之珠东方之珠”Shanghai is the largest city in China.It is honored as“the Pear

6、l of the East”.Shanghai,the largest city in China,is honored as“the Pearl of the East”.运用一运用一(介绍上海）：介绍上海）：上海，中国最大城市，被誉为上海，中国最大城市，被誉为“东方之珠东方之珠”Shanghai is the largest city in China.It is honored as“the Pearl of the East”.Shanghai,the largest city in China,is honored as“the Pearl of the East”.运用二：运用二：

7、书名：书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother作者：作者：Amy Chua,美籍华人美籍华人中文版：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售年初开始在中国销售 A book,_,written by_,_ has been sold in China since the beginning of 2011.Battle Hymn of the Tiger MotherAmy Chuaan American-Chinese 在写作中在写作中,我们运用并列连词合并我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有词有and,but,or,

8、so，while,yet,as well as,both.and,not only.but(also),either.or,nor,neither.nor,(and)then,since等。等。实践一（外来农民工子女教育问题）：实践一（外来农民工子女教育问题）：Children from native families can enjoy good education.I hope children from peasant workers families can also enjoy good education.I hope children not only from native f

9、amilies but also from peasant workers families can enjoy good education.实践二：实践二：一半的女生选择电影、电视明星作为偶像。一半的女生选择电影、电视明星作为偶像。48%的男生最喜爱体育明星。的男生最喜爱体育明星。Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols.48%of the boys favour sports stars.Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols while

10、48%of the boys favour sports stars.实践三实践三：（海地特大地震介绍）：（海地特大地震介绍）大量房屋倒塌，电力、交通中断。大量房屋倒塌，电力、交通中断。A lot of houses fell down.Electricity as well as traffic was completely cut off.A lot of houses fell down and electricity as well as traffic was completely cut off.小组探究（饮食健康）：小组探究（饮食健康）：It is absolutely nece

11、ssary to take some exercise every day.It can strengthen our health.It is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day because it can strengthen our health.It is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day,which can strengthen our health.(原因状语从句原因状语从句)(非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句)要使文章漂亮要使文章漂亮,在

12、写作中不可能不在写作中不可能不使用主从复合句使用主从复合句,最常用的从句是状语最常用的从句是状语从句、定语从句、宾语从句、主语从句从句、定语从句、宾语从句、主语从句和表语从句。和表语从句。试一试（低碳生活）：试一试（低碳生活）：房间无人要关灯和电风扇，养成人走灯灭房间无人要关灯和电风扇，养成人走灯灭的习惯。的习惯。There is no one in the room.We should turn off lights and electric fans.when there is no one in the room,we should turn off lights and electri

13、c fans.(时间状语从句时间状语从句)挑战自我挑战自我（城市里是否可以养宠物）：（城市里是否可以养宠物）：反对饲养宠物的同学认为：反对饲养宠物的同学认为：太多人养宠物，造成环境污染太多人养宠物，造成环境污染 Other students are against the idea.Its bad for the environment.Too many people keep pets at home.Other students are against the idea because its bad for the environment if too many people keep

14、pets at home.(because引导原因状语从句，引导原因状语从句，if 引导条件状语从句引导条件状语从句)Other students are against the idea.They think its bad for the environment.Too many people keep pets at home.Other students who are against the idea think that its bad for the environment if too many people keep pets at home.(who引导定语从句引导定语从句

15、,that 引导宾语从句，引导宾语从句，if 引导条件状语从句引导条件状语从句)观察观察 学招：学招：1.(1)He looked up.(2)He saw a bird in the tree.He looked up to see a bird in the tree.2.(1)I dont like the man.(2)The man is wearing a pair of dark glasses.I dont like the man wearing a pair of dark glasses.3.(1)The temple is visited by thousands of

16、 people every year.(2)It was built 1,000 years ago.The temple,built 1,000 years ago,is visited by thousands of people every year.(用不定式合并用不定式合并)(用现在分词合并用现在分词合并)（用过去分词合并）（用过去分词合并）在写作中在写作中,正确使用非谓语动词正确使用非谓语动词,无疑为文无疑为文章增色不少。非谓语动词包括不定式、现章增色不少。非谓语动词包括不定式、现在分词和过去分词。在分词和过去分词。一试身手：一试身手：用非谓语动词合并每一组句子用非谓语动词合并每一

17、组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。的短文。u1.Im writing to you.I want to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.u2.Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car.I was walking on the road at that time.u3.I was seriously injured.I couldnt stand up.u4.A man saw what had happened to me.He stopped

18、 a taxi and sent me to a hospital.u5.I dont know his name.I call him Good Man.u1.Im writing to you.I want to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.u2.Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car.I was walking on the road.u3.I was seriously injured.I couldnt stand up.Im writing to you to express my

19、sincere thanks to Good Man.Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walking on the road.Seriously injured,I couldnt stand up.u4.A man saw what had happened to me.He stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital.u5.I dont know his name.I call him Good Man.When seeing what had happened to me,a man stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital.Not knowing his name,I call him Good Man.u1.运用介词短语运用介词短语u2.使用同位语使用同位语u3.运用并列连词运用并列连词u4.使用主从复合句使用主从复合句u5.非谓语动词的运用非谓语动词的运用