Unit8Once upon a time写作指导实战演练加例文-2024新人教版七年级下册《英语》.docx

1、【写作】主题分析指明方向主题：本单元写作情境属于“ 人与自我”主题范畴中的“做人与做事”，涉及子主题“自我管理，自我提升”。内容：讲述故事以及谈论感悟。要求：1.能正确使用一般过去时态讲述故事。 2.能谈论通过故事学到了什么，有什么启发或感想。典例研磨示范引领你读过童话故事吗?请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你看过且印象最深刻的一篇童话故事。要求: 1. 句子通顺, 语意连贯, 可适当发挥, 条理及段落清晰, 字迹工整, 大方; 2. 请适当使用一般过去时。3. 不少于70 词.Step 1:审题研要求1.人称:第一人称 2.时态:一般过去时3.核心:童话故事Step 2:列纲研结构开篇点题故事细节

2、介绍总结感受介绍你看过的印象深刻的故事名字故事情节介绍，根据时间线索，适当使用时间连接词总结自己的感悟体会Step 3 遣词造句推敲词汇1.很久以前 _2.有. _3.嘲笑 _4.逃跑 _5.死于饥寒交迫 _6.坚持 _1.Once upon a time 2.There be 3.laugh at 4.run away from 5.die of hunger and cold 6.hold on to基础句式：1.我读过很多童话故事。I have read _ _ _.2.丑小鸭是个童话故事。The Ugly Duckling is a _ _.3.丑小鸭的故事让我印象最深刻。The Ug

3、ly Duckling_ _ _.4.他弯下头。He _ _ _.5.他看到一只漂亮的天鹅在水中。He _ a pretty swan_ _ _.6.我应该通过勇敢的面对困难坚守自己的理想。I should hold on my dream_ _ the difficulties bravely.升级句式：1.将基础句式2&3用that升级。But the fairy tale that impresses me most is the Ugly Duckling.2.将基础句式5&6用when升级。When he bent his head, he saw a pretty swan in

4、the water.It was himself. 答案：1.many fairy stories 2.fairy story 3.impresses me most 4.bent his head 5.saw, in the water 6.by,facingStep 4 润色成篇The Ugly DucklingI have read many fairy tales.But the fairy tale that impresses me most is the Ugly Duckling.Once upon a time, there was an ugly duckling.He w

5、as very ugly.Other ducks often laughed at him and pecked him.Chickens often hit him.The hostess kicked him with her foot.Even his mother didnt like him.The poor duckling had to run away from home.He nearly died of hunger and cold.Soon spring came.One day, he swam on a lake. When he bent his head, he

6、 saw a pretty swan in the water.It was himself. After reading the story, I learn that we should never laugh at others.And I should hold on my dream by facing the difficulties bravely.开篇点题，使用that引导的定语从句引出主题。使用once upon a time,soon, one day,when等表示时间的单词短语以时间为线索介绍故事情节。使用时间状语从句，升级句型。使用定语从句总结故事感悟。实战写作迁移创

7、新假如你是李华,在网上看见一位美国网友迈克(Mike)发帖,说很想了解中国的卡通片喜羊羊与灰太狼(Pleasant Sheep and Big Big Wolf)。请你根据下列提示给他回帖。提示:喜羊羊与灰太狼是著名卡通编剧黄健的作品。该片以羊和狼两大族群间妙趣横生的争斗为主线,剧情轻松该谐,情节爆笑,对白幽默,深受小朋友、大朋友甚至老朋友的喜爱。写作要求：1. 写作内容必须包含卡通故事基本信息，可适当发挥；2. 内容连贯，书写正确规范；3. 写作词数80词左右。Dear Mike,Id be happy to tell you something about the cartoon Plea

8、sant Sheep and Big Big Wolf.It is Huang Jians latest cartoon. Huang is a very famous cartoon maker in China. The cartoon tells us stories about how some young and brave sheep fight against the wolves. The stories are very interesting.The sheep and the wolves are very funny. We children, our parents and even our grandparents like to watch it. Th e sheep have a lot of fans both in China and overseas.If you are looking for entertainment, stay at home and watch it. Dont miss it.Yours, Li Hua