读后续写：人与自然 救助并照顾走失的小松鼠--高考英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

1、读后续写：人与自然 救助并照顾走失的小松鼠读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. Its amazing to watch as they discover their world.While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the

2、steps was a baby red squirrel.We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait-and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother-we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to f

3、ind an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and suppl

4、ies was in order.More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean(断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt. Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat

5、 from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter(吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasnt long before he was weaned onto soli

6、d food and reintroduced to the wild. His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150个左右。2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:One da

7、y in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of graysquirrels._Paragraph 2:One night, Squirt didnt come back to our house and it rained hard._主旨大意文章围绕一家人救助并照顾走失小松鼠的经历展开，体现了人与动物间的温暖情谊以及对生命的关爱。伏笔例如 “Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fish

8、eries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area.” 为后文自行照顾小松鼠做铺垫。故事情节发现小松鼠 - 尝试找专家 - 自行照顾 - 小松鼠成长 - 放归野外 - 续写部分的后续情况。情绪变化担心谨慎 - 认真负责 - 欣慰 - 牵挂不舍。主题句1. Love and care for animals can bridge the gap between humans and the animal kingdom.对动物的关爱能够弥合人类与动物世界之间的鸿沟。2. Taking

9、responsibility for a helpless creature enriches our lives with warmth and meaning.为一个无助的生灵担起责任，让我们的生活充满温暖与意义。3. When we extend a helping hand to wildlife, we create beautiful bonds of friendship.当我们向野生动物伸出援手时，我们就创造了美好的友谊纽带。4. Nurturing a lost animal shows the power of kindness in the cycle of life.养

10、育一只走失的动物展现了生命轮回中善良的力量。5. Our acts of compassion towards animals can bring harmony to nature.我们对动物的同情之举能够为大自然带来和谐。范文一Paragraph 1:One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.He seemed a bit hesitant at first, standing still on a branch and looking at them nervously. But the fri

11、endly chattering of the gray squirrels soon put him at ease. They welcomed him into their group, showing him where to find the best nuts and how to build a more comfortable nest. Squirt quickly adapted and started playing with them. Watching from a distance, Kaytlin felt a sense of relief and happin

12、ess, knowing that Squirt had found his own kind and would no longer is alone in the wild.New words: hesitant : adj. 犹豫的；迟疑的 at ease : 舒适；自在；不拘束 adapt : v. 适应；改编Paragraph 2:One night, Squirt didnt come back to our house and it rained hard.Kaytlin was worried sick, pacing back and forth in the room, f

13、earing that something bad had happened to him. However, the next morning, when the sun peeked through the clouds, Squirt showed up at the edge of our yard, looking energetic as ever. He had just found a cozy shelter during the rain and came back to say hello. Kaytlin ran to him and gave him a gentle

14、 hug, realizing that even though Squirt now belonged to the wild, their bond would always remain.New words: worried sick : 非常担心；极度忧虑 pace : v. 踱步；缓慢而行 peek : v. 窥视；偷看 cozy : adj. 舒适的；惬意的范文二Paragraph1 One day in the trees,Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.He watched them from afar for a w

15、hile, his body tensed as if unsure whether to approach. But then, one of the little gray squirrels came over to him with a friendly gesture, wagging its bushy tail. Squirt plucked up his courage and slowly moved towards them. They began sharing food with him and teaching him how to jump from branch

16、to branch more nimbly. Squirt was having a great time with them, and it was clear that he was gradually becoming part of this new family.New words: afar : adv. 在远处；从远处 tense : adj. 紧张的；绷紧的 pluck up : 鼓起（勇气等） nimbly : adv. 敏捷地；灵活地Paragraph 2:One night, Squirt didnt come back to our house and it raine

17、d hard.The wind was howling, and the rain was lashing against the windows. Kaytlin couldnt fall asleep, her mind filled with thoughts of Squirt out there in the storm. When dawn broke, the rain finally stopped. Kaytlin rushed outside to look for Squirt. To her delight, she found him on a nearby tree

18、, drying his fur in the sunlight. Squirt chirped happily when he saw her, as if telling her that he was okay after the rough night. Kaytlin smiled, knowing that Squirt was growing up and could handle the challenges of the wild now.New words: howl : v. （风等）呼啸；怒吼 lash : v. 猛烈拍打；冲击 dawn : n. 黎明；拂晓 rough : adj. 艰难的；恶劣的