初中英语作文标准.pdf

1、1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10 分； 2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8 分； 3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5 分； 4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所 云，给 0-2 分。 从这个评分标准来看，它对考生的作文要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语 句流畅。3、没有语法错误。 4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相 应的高分。所以，在写作文的时候，大家要牢记这些要求。 要做到内容完整，我们首先要认清看好题目的要求，抓住要点，注意文体。 我们可以在写作之前好好

2、构思一下，自己将从几个方面来写。 是否能将所有内容 都包含在内。在写完之后，再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。 要做到语句的流畅， 这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上， 注意 一些语义的表达方法。 要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句 子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上，也指句意上的连贯。 在初中阶段，考生应注意语法点有：动词单三形式，时态（包括：现在进行 时，一般过去时，将来时），定语从句（此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用），语 态，单复数，主谓一致，冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如，我非常喜欢足球。考 生经常会写成 I very like football.这样的错误一定要避

3、免。 书写一定要规范。 要了解英语作文的书写规则。同时，要知道应用文的写作 方法。这个在竞学网中学生英语频道的2006 中考英语作文面面观的第四讲里曾 经讲过。大家可以参考相关内容。 除了以上的四个方面， Helen 还建议考生们要检查：单词的拼写、大小写和 标点符号。 考试的时候， 要尽量留出充足的时间给作文。这样，我们才能有足够的时间 去构思，去打草稿。在评卷的时候，第一印象很重要，所以考生们一定要让自己 的作文看起来舒服，干净，整齐。 好了，到今天为止， 2006中考英语作文面面观就结束了。希望大家能够继 续关注竞学网中学英语频道的其它内容。顺便告诉大家一个好消息： 竞学网中学 英语将于

4、五一期间推出“竞学网友预测2006 中考英语作文”系列内容。敬请关 注。记住：成功只会眷顾那些有准备的人。今天的认真学习，就是明天成功的保 证 1. 整篇写话满分 10 分，其中基本分 9 分，整体印象分 1 分，内容切题、句 子流畅、用语正确，可加整体印象分1 分。 2.偏题扣 23 分。 3.文章不满规定字数，每少5 个词为一个扣分单位，扣0.5 分。 4.语法错，每一错扣0.5 分，同一错不重复扣分。 5.大小写、拼写、标点等错扣0.5 分，标点错累计扣分不超过1 分。 写作可分三步走。 首先，仔细阅读要求中的几个陈述性的要点，判断陈述的事情是什么时态。 然后根据相应时态将这些句子在草稿

5、纸上译成英文。第二步， 将句子用合适的关联词连接成 段落，并将前后表述整理通顺。第三步，根据这些要点，再按题目要求发表相应评论。最后 将两部分连接成完整文章，抄写在试卷上。 （2005 年北京）根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50 词的短文。 假设你叫王明， 昨天收到了笔友David 的 e-mail ，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了 解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail ，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的 建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 英语作文网 Dear David, Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn

6、Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise yo

7、ur listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 请你根据下面的提纲，以“ 我的家乡 ” 为题，写一篇100 120 字的短文。

8、提纲： (1) 家乡的地理位置； (2) 解放前的情况； (3) 解放后的变化； (4) 对家乡的感情。 My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was libera

9、ted. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to ma

10、ke it still richer and more beautiful. 例 2： 健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很 为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。 提示： 1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； 3.饮食要健康； 4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 要求： 1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； 2.80 100 词左右； 3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad(Mum), Youre so busy every day that you

11、 dont pay much attention to your health. Im worried about your health all the time. Id like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isnt far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? Youd better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in th

12、e gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. Whats more, its necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) (2) Dear Dad(Mum), Youre s

13、o busy every day that you dont pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?Id like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a

14、week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep. I m looking f orward to receiving your letter. Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) 例 1： 随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素

15、质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重 视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学 们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园 生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。 注意： 1. 词数 80100 左右。 2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。 参考词汇： build up ones body strength 强健身体 reduce diseases 减少疾病 (1) As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, th

16、e government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY. So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains rela

17、x and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved. Let s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases. (2) Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases. Though we lead a better life, ou

18、r health is becoming worse now. So EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY ，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY has been raised by the government. At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better. The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Lets keep on doing it.