2021届高考英语备考：读后续写课件（32张ppt）.pptx

1、2021高考备考： 读后续写 续写基本要求续写基本要求 1.故事合理 2. 语言流畅 3. 两段衔接好 4. 结尾有感悟升华 5.书写工整整齐无涂抹 附加要求： 动作，情感描述到位 美词亮句颜值高 学生续写存在问题学生续写存在问题 1. 读不懂文本 2. 肚里无词，下笔无话， 笔尖流不出流畅的英语句 子，只能瞎编胡造 一一 语言积累与输入语言积累与输入 One cant make bricks without straw. 巧妇难为无米之炊 1. 借助教材或考纲词汇积累 2. 借助试卷拓展词汇 3. 利用网上资源 4. 通过小说拓展 5. 通过新概念21世纪报纸 1.借助教材考纲词汇借助教材考

2、纲词汇 动词积累 book 5 unit three The headlights of the car almost blinded my eyes. The ground was blanketed with snow. He flashed me a quick grin but quickly swallowed it when seeing my angry face. 他咧嘴一笑，一看到我愤怒的脸立刻收起笑容 I found the news hard to swallow. 难以置信 He lit a cigarette, trying to mask his anger.掩饰

3、book 5 unit 4 When I saw his rude behavior, anger choked me. The coffee was too hot to swallow and made him choke for a moment. He waved me goodbye,saying “Sleep tight!” When I referred to borrowing some money from him, he immediately became speechless, wearing a tight smile on his face. overcome ：

4、Overcome by fear, he couldnt utter a single word. greet： When I dragged my feet home,much to my great expecxtion, some steaming dishes greeted me on the table. Upon entering our school, you will be greeted by a big stone, just at the gate. grab： The sudden appearance of a red-haired girlimmediately

5、grabbed all of our attention. bottom up: Dont bottom up your anger. Just splash it out. 形容词副词积累形容词副词积累 He was wandering about aimlessly in the street when suddenly a speeding car knocked him down and disappeared into the distance. My newly-bought smart phone was nowhere to be found, which angered me

6、. Feeling ashamed about his rude behavior, he lowered his head awkwardly.（尴尬地，难为情地) After learning about the result of the passing exam, he sat at his desk moodily for two hours straight. (闷闷不乐地) I felt hesitant about whether to accept the job offer. Reluctant to ask for help, he struggled to help h

7、imself to his feet and stumbled to the clinic nearby. 2. 借助试卷拓展词汇积累借助试卷拓展词汇积累 With his tireless efforts, the task was finished as scheduled. Curious about what happened there, Media couldnt resist the urge to find out. Torn magazine paper, scattered sticks and dry leaves littered the floor. Entering

8、 his home, he tiptoed into his bedroom, not wanting to awake his mother. A bolt of lightning crossed the darked sky.一道闪电划过黑暗的天空。 Even though my heart was still pounding (=hammer)wildly in my chest, I snatched my camera and snapped one last shot of the bear, a photo that I had always longed to captur

9、e. Though risking my life, I have got the best picture ever and its all worth it. Confused by the question, the boy raised his hand hesitantly. He was watching the live football match at home alone when unexpectedly the computer was dead. The instant I grabbed hold of his hand，I struggled to throw m

10、yself at him. I inched (my way )through narrow space between the desks. During my third week in the country the temperature dropped and a massive snowstorm set in. （开始到来) The ghost story frightened the pants off me! .The news spread like wildfire. The boy screamed in a trembling voice at the sight o

11、f the snake. =scream at the top of his lungs 3. 利用网上资源利用网上资源 害怕 1. He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 2. Fear slowly creeps （爬，蔓延）upon her. 3. She was struck with horror when. 4. She was choked by fear. 5. Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.说不出话 6. A flood of fear welled up

12、 in him. / Fear flooded over him. 7. Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated sfkeitid （窒息）. 8. She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles（如坐针毡）. 9. He froze in horror. .烦恼 1. She was like a cat on hot bricks before her driving test. 在她驾驶考试时，她像热锅上的蚂蚁。 2. In her n

13、ervousness she stumbled over her words. 她紧张得说不出话来。 3. She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她全身发抖，感觉如坐针毡。 4. I could feel sweat beading on my forehead as I walked around the corner. 当我走过拐角处时，我能感觉到额头上的汗珠。 5.I have butterflies in my stomach every time I speak in public. 我每次在公众场

14、合讲话都会感到紧张。 1. By the time Id managed to fight my way ashore, I was so exhausted that all I could do was throw myself down and sleep. 当我挣扎上岸时，我已经筋疲力尽了，我所能做的就是倒下睡觉。 2. I squintedskwnt down hastilyhestli and saw the last thing I was expecting. 我急忙眯着眼睛向下看，看到了我最不希望看到的东西。 When he squinted his eyes, he cou

15、ld just make out a house in the distance. 他瞇着眼睛，只能隐约看见远处有一所房子。 3. I screamed with shock and struggled to get free. The little man ran off as fast as his legs would carry him, but at once a flight of tiny arrows stabbed into my face with a sting like a hundred needles. I fell back, groaning with pain

16、. 我吓得尖叫起来，拼命挣脱。小个子男人飞快地跑开了，但是马上一束小箭刺进了我的脸上，像一百根针 一样刺痛。我向后倒了下去，痛苦地呻吟着。 1. exclaim v. 大叫；呼喊；大声说出 How beautiful! she exclaimed. “多美啊！”她喊道。 2. .blurt out 脱口而出; 说漏嘴; “I was looking for Sally”, he blurted out, his eyes filled with tears. It was partly nervousness that had made him blurt out the question.

17、正是由于紧张，他才脱口而出这个问题。 3. stammer/stutter vi. 口吃；结巴 vt. 结结巴巴地说 n. 结巴；口吃 “Forgive me,” I stammered. 我结结巴巴地说道 .“Ill, Ill only be a m-moment,” he stammered. 他结结巴巴地说：“我会的，我只是暂时的。”。 4. 通过读小说积累通过读小说积累 He lay fast asleep，surrounded by flames and smoke.（Jane Eyre 简爱） My mind was full of confusing pictures and d

18、isturbed emotions. I used to hate coming home when it was almost dark， with ice- cold fingers and toes， feeling miserable because Bessie， the nursemaid， was always scolding me. Lost in the world of imagination， I forgot my sad, lonely existence for a while。 He bullied and punished me， not two or thr

19、ee times a week， not once or twice a day， but all the time. Winter passed and spring returned to the river bank. Then came a fine morning in early summer, when the world seemed full of sunlight and new green leaves. Down by the river bank, the Mole and the Water Rat were hard at work, mending and cl

20、eaning boats, looking for lost oars, and getting ready for a summer on the river.(The Wind in the Willows风雨河岸柳). 5. 通过新概念通过新概念,21世纪报纸世纪报纸 Mendoza rose to fame swiftly after a boxing match when he was only 14 years old. Kidnappers are rarely interested in animals, but they recently took considerable

21、interest in Mrs Ramsays cat. Ashamed of having actced so rashly, Dimitri apologized to Aleko for having accused him. The man let out a cry and jumped back several paces. When Mrs Richard walked towards him, he fled, slamming the door behind him. The officer unscrewed the cap and put the bottle to hi

22、s nostrils. He was greeted by an unpleasant smell which convinced him that I was telling the truth. Hundreds of people have flocked to the quiet street to see Banksys most recent work. Everyone is good at different things, and just because it doesnt come easily doesnt mean it is impossible fo you to

23、 excel.(脱颖而出脱颖而出) 二二. 语篇欣赏语篇欣赏 名篇 完型 记叙文 1. 名篇欣赏名篇欣赏 The darkness was gathering as she wobbled(颤颤巍巍）in high heels along the side of the highway. The car had come to an unexpected stop, and like a teenager she did the only thing she could think of - get out and walk. It was cold and late, and home wa

24、s far away. This could be a long night. If only someone would stop and offer her a ride. She prayed for help and dragged herself forward. The lights of a truck shone from behind as it approached. “Maybe he will stop”, she hoped. The brake lights flashed on as it stopped. Next instant, the cab door o

25、pened. A wordless invitation was extended and she understood. Without hesitation, the girl climbed up into the seat and closed the door. Slowly the truck pulled back onto the road and disappeared into the night, never to be seen again. I woke up in a cold fear, alarmed. Was that a dream or was it a

26、vision? It was unbelievably real, and the girl was my daughter! I jumped from my bed and ran to her room. Her bed was empty. I stood in horror trying to think why she had not come home. As the mental fog began to lift, I remembered she was visiting her friend that evening. Perhaps she stayed there f

27、or the night. It was 1:30 a.m, but I raced to the phone and dialed a number. “Hello?” The voice was heavy with sleep. “Hey. Sorry to wake you. Becki didnt come home tonight and I was wondering if she stayed at your place?” “No. She left here a few hours ago. She should have been home at least by mid

28、night!” the voice on the other end began to relect my own pacnic. Over the next forty-five minutes, I alternated between lying in pray and pacing the floor in anxiety. At 2:15 a.m, lights appeared as a car turned up on our long driveway. I could tell immediately that it was not my daughters car. 第一段

29、：My face pressed against the window and I found it hard to breathe. 第二段：“Mom, she gave me a ride home”, Becki said. 参考短文参考短文 My face pressed against the window and I found it hard to breathe. The car in front of the house, and out of it emerged my precious daughter, making her way up the steps. Tear

30、s stinging(使刺痛使刺痛) my eyes, I threw open the door, pulled her inside and hugged her tightly. The dream was just too real and I could hardly believe I was now having my daughter in my hug. I wondered if it was because my pray was answered. Then through my blurred vision(模糊的视野模糊的视野) I saw a lady stepp

31、ing out of the car. “Mom, she gave me a ride home.” Becki said. “My car broke down on the halfway and without her help, I would have never have made it home in my high heels.” she continued, exposing her blistered(起泡的起泡的) ankles. My heart shuddered(一想起就害怕担心难受）一想起就害怕担心难受）at the thought of how painful

32、ly Becki staggered(踉跄踉跄) along the dark highway. She must be an angel for heaven! I approached the lady and invited her inside. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand. 2. 完型完型 One afternoon, I took my daughter to go ice skating. I grew up ice skating, a(n) skill much like

33、 riding a bike. And she was eager to learn. We awkwardly stepped onto ice that was more slippery than I remembered . No sooner had our blades（冰刀）（冰刀） touched the frozen area than both my daughter and I felt ourselves hurtling（猛冲）（猛冲）toward the ground. I feared my daughter falling again and asked her

34、 to stay aside watching but she refused. At that moment, her friend pirouetted（单脚尖旋转）toward us. She said, Falling is part of any new attempt. Ill help her to skate！My daughter looked at me with eager eyes and I agreed. Seconds later, my daughter fell. I gasped as she struggled to get up. Then I watc

35、hed her reach for her friends hand, get back on her feet , and skate off only to fall three paces later. Over time, her falling became less frequent. When they finally came back to the benches, my daughter exclaimed in shock : Mama! I fell 22 times! I spent the next hour watching my daughter circle

36、the rink. After falling, she got up by clinging to (牢牢抓住牢牢抓住)the wall and started to glide until she could make it all the way around without a single fall. Finally my daughter stepped off the rink, with a wide smile, Mama! I did it! I did it! 3. 记叙文记叙文 Finally， one of them couldnt resist her curios

37、ity, so she plucked up her courage to ask him why he was so interested in make-up artistry. What followed the question was a dead silence. It seemed as if a century had passed, and he slowly opened his mouth and here came the most inspiring and beautiful reply. It was a rough afternoon. The price of

38、 oil skyrocketed as the temperature dropped sharply in Maine.We were looking at a high of eight degrees that week, and I had missed three days of work so my paycheck was going to be lower than normal. I was stressed, to say the least, I shopped strategically, looking for every possible way to cut pe

39、nnies so I could buy groceries and keep the house warm. 三三. 训练训练 1. 段落训练 2. 小场景练习 3. 句子翻译 4. 整篇练习 1. 段落训练段落训练 Kangaroos and the Cage One day the staff members of a zoo called a meeting to discussthe problem how to deal with the kangaroos that were found out of the cage. They came to the conclusion t

40、hat the cage was placed too low and decided to raise it from one to two meters high. But the next day the kangaroos were still at large and they again raised the cage to three meters. Quite beyond their expectation the next morning they saw the kangaroos still free to go about. _ 2. 小场景训练小场景训练 场景一 ：

41、 大清早，阿姨Polly表扬了Tom。这是他有生以来第一次被注意到。他走起路来情绪高昂，就像漂在空 中一样。 想想只不过帮了阿姨一个小忙就得到认可，Tom的心都要融化掉了。他满脸带笑，大踏步地走在乡 间小路上，感觉整个世界都在朝他挥手致意。 Early in the morning, Aunt Polly praised Tom. This was the first time in his life that he had been noticed. He walked in high spirits as if floating on the air. Thinking that he g

42、ave aunt just a hand and was recognized, Tom felt that his heart was melting. Smiling from ear to ear, he marched on the path feeling as if the whole world were waving and nodding to him. Yesterday, I was allowed to go home. So happy was I that I rushed to the schoolgate, only to find that_ 场景二 Last

43、 week, I bought a lottery(彩票). _ Last week, I bought a lottery(彩票). This morning, I got a call from the seller. He told me that I got the prize with 5 million yuan! I was too happy to stand faint! However, five minutes later, I was called again and was told that they made a mistake! I didnt get the

44、prize of 5 million yuan but 5 yuan. I fell to the ground, heart broken. 3. 翻译练习翻译练习 1. 他带着受伤害的神情看着她。 2.他们双双患流感卧病在床。 3.他举止庄重威严。 4.她爱开着窗户睡觉。 5.站着的时候别把双手插在口袋里。 6. 她难为情得脸红了。 7. 他的手指冻麻了。 8.Jane走在森林里，又累又绝望 9. .他脑子一片空白，倒在地上，失去知觉。 10.他喜出望外，飞奔出了教室 11.她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。 12.温暖,有趣,热情，这位女士就是是孩子和父母梦想

45、中的老师。 1. He looked at her with a hurt expression. 2. .Theyre both in bed with flu. 3.He behaved with great dignity. 4 .She sleeps with the window open 5.Dont stand with your hands in your pockets. 6. She blushed with embarrassment. 7. His fingers were numb with cold. 8. Jane walked in the forest, ti

46、red and hopeless. 9.His mind going blank, he fell to the ground, unconscious. 10.Overjoyed, he rushed out of the house 11.Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes. 12.Warm,fun and enthusiastic, the woman was what the kids and parents dreamed of.

47、 4. 整篇练习整篇练习 一般选择故事性强的， 情节起伏大的，抛出的问题容易往下接 的。 “ A usual boring day!” This would be the answer from Roman if someday asked him how his day was. These days he found everything boring and nothing excited him. One day he was lying on the bed in his room as usual. Suddenly the light went off. His room was rather hot without an air conditione