2020新新人教 Book 1 Unit 3 Writing 读后续写 Going Positive.pptx

1、2019新教材 Book 1 Unit 3 Writing 读后续写 Going Positive 目录 01 原文分析 02 续写扩展 03 续写翻译 04 续写赏析 01 原文分析 Going Going PositivePositive I always wanted to look like the slim girls on TV even though I knew that it was impossible. I worried about my weight and tried every new diet I read about online. I tried no-fa

2、t, low-fat, only bananas, no bananas-I almost went bananas, too. 原文分析原文分析 我过去面临的问题。我过去面临的问题。 我的担忧以及采取的措施。我的担忧以及采取的措施。 Then I read an article that said instead of asking Am I fat? I should be asking Am I fit? I had no idea a letter could make such a difference! Once I started thinking about fitness r

3、ather than weight, things began to change. Instead of saying I want to lose three kilos, I would say I want to run two kilometers in eight minutes or I want to do 30 push-ups. Rather than cutting the foods I enjoyed, I added healthy foods to my meals. I could still have a burger now and then, but I

4、would add a salad or an apple. 原文分析原文分析 写作中表示对比的高级用法。写作中表示对比的高级用法。 强调我的转变。强调我的转变。 Finally, I stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body. Instead, I made a list of the things I liked about myself. By being positive about myself and m

5、y body, I became both happier and healthier. 原文分析原文分析 点名主题，要求我们用积极的点名主题，要求我们用积极的 心态面对自己。心态面对自己。 Paragraph 1 ： I never felt so relaxed, and I had a detailed routine that was designed to strengthen both my mind and my body. _ Paragraph 2 ： Gradually, my great difference drew the attention of the frien

6、ds around. _ 原文分析原文分析 我详细的日常规划：后面续写我详细的日常规划：后面续写 可以对此进行展开。可以对此进行展开。 表明上一段落我应该是通过一表明上一段落我应该是通过一 系列的锻炼有了很大的变化。系列的锻炼有了很大的变化。 我的成功对身边朋友产生了影响：续写我的成功对身边朋友产生了影响：续写 可以对朋友受我的影响而成功可以对朋友受我的影响而成功展开。展开。 02 续写扩展 表达积累 Body building keep fit 保持身体健康 get in shape 保持体型 workout 锻炼，健身 sit-up 仰卧起坐 push-up 俯卧撑 hit the gym

7、 去健身房 表达积累 Healthy diet go on a diet 节食 keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食 junk food 垃圾食品 lead a fast-paced life 过着快节奏的生活 frozen food 冷冻食品 high-fat food 高脂肪的食物 表达积累 Mental health physical and mental health 身心健康 maintain good health 保持身体健康 feel energetic 感到精力充沛的 build self-confidence 树立自信 reduce stress and

8、anxiety 减轻压力和焦虑 improve their health and well-being 增进健康和幸福感 Paragraph 1 Paragraph 1 ： I never felt so relaxed, and I had a detailed routine that was designed to strengthen both my mind and my body. exercise regularly walking , running , hiking, riding try something relaxing become slim , healthy an

9、d confident Paragraph 2 Paragraph 2 ： Gradually, my great difference drew the attention of the friends around. tell them my experience they were surprised and followed me they even changed life should be positive 03 续写翻译 句子润色 我每周去健身房锻炼两次。 I would go to the gym twice a week to practice. go to the gym

10、的高级的高级 使用：使用：hit the gym I would hit the gym twice a week to practice. 句子润色 我甚至坚持每天骑车来锻炼我的肌肉。 I even kept on practicing riding to practice my muscles every day. I even kept on practicing riding to strengthen my muscles every day. Practice 重复，替换重复，替换: strengthen 句子润色 很明显，每天锻炼对我的健康非常有益。 It was obvious

11、 that daily exercise was very good for my health. It was obvious that daily exercise was very beneficial to my health. 高级用法：高级用法： be beneficial to It is obvious that Obviously, 句子润色 与其把注意力集中在让我焦虑的体重上，我会做让我放松的事情。 Instead of focusing on my weight that made me anxious, I would do something relaxing. In

12、stead of focusing on my weight that made me anxious, I would do what made me relaxed. 从句替换：从句替换： what made me relaxed Instead of doing Rather than doing 句子润色 结果，我不仅变得苗条健康，而且更加自信。 Consequently, I not only became slim and healthy, but I was also more confident. Consequently, not only did I become slim

13、 and healthy, but I was also more confident. 句式替换：句式替换： not only放句首，所在分句要半倒装（be/助/ 情放到主语前面），but后面不用倒装。 Therefore, As a result, Consequently, 句子润色 我告诉他们我的经验以及如何保持健康。 I told them my experience and how to be fit. maintain good health be fit 句子润色 他们很吃惊，和我一起健身，并且和我分享均衡的饮食。 They were so surprised that the

14、y worked out with me together, and shared balanced diet with me. 句式替换：句式替换： so 提到句首后面要半倒装（be/助/情 放到主语前面）。 So surprised were they that they worked out with me together, and shared balanced diet with me. 高考满分作文赏析高考满分作文赏析 【2019全国卷全国卷】 So excited am I that I cant wait to join in it. 句子润色 我从没想过会有这么大的变化，我

15、和我的朋友都变了。 Ive never dreamed of making such a big difference that my friends and I have all changed. 高级表达替换：高级表达替换： as well as Ive never dreamed of making such a big difference that my friends as well as I have all changed. 句子润色 生活应该是快乐的，充满阳光，充满积极的能量，所以你需要一些 时间给自己，做你喜欢做的事情。 Life should be happy, full

16、 of sunshine, filled with positive energy, so youll need to have some time for yourself, do what you love to do. 摘抄积累： 积极正能量的表达 句子润色 只有这样你才能过上健康的生活。 Only in this way can you lead a healthy lifestyle. only 放句首的倒装句的用法，后面 要半倒装（be/助/情放到主语前面） 增添写作特色。 lead a life 04 续写赏析 续写赏析 I never felt so relaxed, and

17、I had a detailed routine that was designed to strengthen both my mind and my body. For example, I would hit the gym twice a week to practice. I even kept on practicing riding to strengthen my muscles every day. It was obvious that daily exercise was very beneficial to my health. Besides, instead of

18、focusing on my weight that made me anxious, I would do what made me relaxed. Consequently, not only did I become slim and healthy, but I was also more confident. 注意衔接词的使用。 续写赏析 Gradually, my great difference drew the attention of the friends around. I told them my experience and how to be fit. So su

19、rprised were they that they worked out with me together, and shared balanced diet with me. Ive never dreamed of making such a big difference that my friends as well as I have all changed. Life should be happy, full of sunshine, filled with positive energy, so youll need to have some time for yourself, do what you love to do. Only in this way can you lead a healthy lifestyle. 注意时态的变化。 作业 1. 积累表示健康话题的词汇和短语。 2. 摘抄默写本节课所有倒装句的句型。 2019新教材 Book 1 Unit 3 Writing Thank You !