1、宜山一中 周小珠,Glad to see you, everybody!,English writing,-The ways to improve your writing,activities,subjects,classmates,teachers,busy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantastic boring/terrible/so-so,Talk about your school life,Pair work:,What do you usually do? What do you think of? What/Who is your fav
2、orite? How are you getting on with? Do you? ,扩写练习：,likes playing sports,healthy,healthy,He is a boy.,He is a _ boy.,He is a _ boy who_.,I like music.,I like_ music.,I like_ music that_.,dance,dance,can make me excited,仿写练习：,目的,原因,She always_ to _ because_.,relax,listens to some music,music is fantas
3、tic,relax study better get some knowledge keep healthy have a rest have fun get good grades ,Miss Cool,Mr. Ball,仿写练习：,It is _for_ to _.,necessary,him,difficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strange dangerous/difficult/wonderful/possible impossible/unbelievable/unexpected,It is _ for children to
4、play in the street.,read books,dangerous,I always_ to _ because_.,It is _ for_ to _.,who/ that 引导的定语从句。,Use these sentence patterns(句型) to describe（描述） your school life.,Group work:,activities,subjects,classmates,teachers,I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend. I will do some stud
5、ies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. It is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.,A,找出用所学句型写的好句。,Choose good words and sentences to improve your writing,strategy,Compare:,B is better than A in,08省考试说明范文,A,How glad I am! I can do many
6、things of my own. I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend. I will also do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. Isnt my plan nice?,B,beginning,key senten
7、ce,linking words连词,ending,I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend. I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. It is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.,fluency流畅 consecution条理,My hobbies ( Beginning )
8、: _. ( Key sentence A):_. I often read in my free time. I read many kinds of books. And I like the stories that have good endings. (Key sentence B ): _. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I cant sing English songs well, I like them a lot. (Key sentence
9、 C ): _.I often play ping-pong after classes. When I am doing sports, I forge all my trouble and worry. Of course it is necessary for students to play sports. (Ending) _.,Can you add a beginning, two other key sentences, some linking words and an ending?,Practice:,I am a lover of reading,Title:_,to,
10、to,general总,specific分,specific分,general总,I have a lot of hobbies and enjoy doing many things in my free time.,I am a lover of reading.,I am also a music lover.,I like sports as well.,In short, I enjoy my life in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health
11、 and my studies.,My hobbies,Beginning:,Key sentence B:,Key sentence A:,Ending:,Main part (正文):,Key sentence C:,(linking words),Make an outline for the following composition: 三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自拟(80词左右)（2007衢州卷),Use outline提纲 to improve your writing,strategy,outline提纲,According to your own ou
12、tline ,use some good words and sentences to finish your composition.,Writing,I alwaysto because,It is for to ,who/ that 引导的定语从句。,评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。 1. fluency流畅 consecution条理: (Yes or No) Beginning ( ) key sentences( ) linking word( ) ending ( ) Choice of words and sentences: The number of spelli
13、ng mistakes ( ) The number of grammar mistakes ( ) Does he write good words or sentence? ( ) 3.Others:_ A ( 13-15 分 ) :包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚 B ( 11-12 分 ) :基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚 C ( 8-10分 ) :内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意 D (6-7分 ) : 要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达E (3-5 ) :只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云F ( 0-2分 ) :白卷或文不对题 作者：_ 得分：_ 评价人:_,Sum up,How to improve your writing,Tips : 1.Make an outline. 2.Choose good words and sentences.,Homework:,我市英语教学网开设了“中学生论坛”，请你结合自己的初中生活和真实感受，以A good teacher in my eyes为题写一篇80词左右的短文。 (You should make an outline first),Goodbye and good luck!,
