1、writing Step 1.Lead-in Step 2.Review the two letters of asking for advice. Review the two letters of asking for advice Letter 1 Dear Miss Wang， I am _(have )some trouble _my classmates at the moment.Im getting along _ (good)with a boy in my class.We often do homework together _ we enjoy_ (help ) eac
2、h other .We have become_ (real) good friends._ other students have started gossiping.They say that this boy and I have_ (fall) in love .This has made me _(anger). I dont want to end the _(friend),but I hate others gossiping.What should I do? Yours， Lisa having with well and helping really But fallen
3、 angry friendship Letter 2 Dear Miss Wang, Im a student_Huzhou Senior High School.I have a problem.Im not good at _ with people._ I try to talk to my classmates, I find _ hard to make good friends with them._I feel quite lonely sometimes.I _want to change this situation, _ I dont know how.I _ be gra
4、teful_ you _ give me some advice. Yours, Xiao Dong from communicating Although it So do but would if could He does want to make friends with his classmates, but he doesnt know how. So he wrote you a letter to ask for help. What should he do? Why? a lonely boy, Xiao Dong Can you write a good letter o
5、f advice to help him? Step 3 Revision How to write a letter of advice? Para1 引出话题，表明意图。给与理解 和安慰。 Para2 提出建议或改进措施并给出理由。 Para3 总结，表达希望采纳建议，或期 盼回复。 Expressions about giving advice Why not / Why dont you How about /What about? Its a good idea to I think its important to Youd better You should /can if po
6、ssible I advise/ suggest It would be a good idea if you could Wouldnt it be a good idea if you? A passage can be made well organized with transitional words(过渡词过渡词) First（ly）, second（ly），），third（ly）; at first, next, finally, last but not least (1) 表顺序的表顺序的 (2) 表递进的表递进的 in addition, besides, also, mo
7、reover, whats more , furthermore (3) 表转折的表转折的 but, however, otherwise, though (4)表结果的表结果的 so, as a result, therefore, as,because, since 五步写作规范： 1.审题构思很关键 2.核心词汇想周全 3.由词扩句雏形现 4.句式升级造亮点 5.过渡衔接连成篇 Step 4 实战演练 Compare and the article (make the article better ) two letters to Xiao Dong Dear Xiao Dong, Im
8、 sorry to hear that you are having trouble in making friends. Now, Ill give you some advice. I hope my advice is helpful to you. You should ask your classmates their likes and dislikes, and you can find some friends. You should join in discussion and show interest in others ideas and you can get to
9、know different people . You should help your classmates when they are in trouble and they will think you are kind to everyone. Why not ask your classmates their likes and dislikes? You can find some friends. Youd better join in discussion and show interest in others ideas. You can get to know differ
10、ent people. I suggest you should help your classmates when they are in trouble .They will think you are kind to everyone. Yours, Jack 高考作文评分标准之一：高考作文评分标准之一： 运用较多的句子结构和词汇运用较多的句子结构和词汇 。 Dear Xiao Dong, Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble in making friends. Now, Ill give you some advice. Why n
11、ot ask your classmates their likes and dislikes? You can find some friends with the same interests. Youd better join in discussion and show interest in others ideas . You can get to know different people .I suggest you should help your classmates when they are in trouble .They will think you are kin
12、d to everyone. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Jack 高考作文评分标准之二：高考作文评分标准之二： 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文层次清晰，紧凑有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文层次清晰，紧凑 。 How can we make it better organized? Sample writing Dear Xiao Dong, Im sorry ( that) you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is eas
13、y to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. Firstly, why not begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes? That way you will soon find classmates with the same interests. Secondly, I suggest you should try to join in a discussion. By doing this, you can let
14、your classmates know how friendly you are. Then they will be glad to make friends with you. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you could join them in playing basketball. If you do this, you will find it easy to make new friends. I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours, Tom 高考作文评分标准之三：高考作文评分标
15、准之三： 有效地使用衔接词，内容连贯。有效地使用衔接词，内容连贯。 Step 5 写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2.建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写 给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议 或忠告。 3.建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容， 提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简 明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力 如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成有效地
16、使用了语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯， 条理清楚。条理清楚。 要要 点点 全全 词汇、句型词汇、句型 （高级）和语法（高级）和语法 多样化（较复杂）语言地道多样化（较复杂）语言地道 连连 接接 词词 Step 6 Practice1 高考真题链接 2008年高考全国卷 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你 咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点 写回信。 要点： 参加中文学习班； 看中文书刊、电视； 学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友。 注意： 词数100左右； 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 一.列举出关键词和短语： 参加中文学习班 take a
17、Chinese course 看中文书刊、电视 read Chinese books,newspapers and magazines and also watch TV 学唱中文歌曲 learn and sing Chinese songs 交中国朋友 make more Chinese friends Group work Work in groups of four and finish the composition. 二. 恰当使用建议信的不同表达句型,并运 用连接词使文章结构紧凑，连贯通顺、 条理清晰。 三.漂亮的书写 Handwriting-very important Firs
18、t impression is very important. Practice every day Make progress every day. Everyone can do it ! write the letter after class Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions for you. Firstly, it is important to take a Chinese c
19、ourse, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. I do hope you will find these ideas useful. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
