1、Continuation writing 读后续写读后续写 camping 真题回放真题回放 第二节：读后续写（满分第二节：读后续写（满分25分）分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成 一个完整的故事。一个完整的故事。 注意：注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右；左右； 2. 应使用应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。续写完成后
2、，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Requirements for writing One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that
3、 she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake .To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowc
4、apped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom! ”she cried. “Help! ” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had
5、 to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴 落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the so
6、und to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Ja
7、ne heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. Paragraph 1 B
8、ut no helicopter came and it was getting dark again. _ _ _ _ Paragraph 2 It was day break and Jane woke up._ _ _ 注意：注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右左右 2.应使用应使用5个以上短文中标有下划个以上短文中标有下划 线的关键词语；线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开续写部分分为两段，每段的开 头语已为你写好；头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出续写完成后，请用下划线标出 你所使用的关键词语你所使用的关键词语。 who why A
9、story six elements of a story（6要素）要素） when who what where Jane & Tom camp overnight by a lake in the forest one weekend in July Read for basic information Read for plots time What Jane did How Jane felt on the way After she had climbed As night was beginning to fall At the break of the day As she pi
10、cked her way A few minutes later quarreled was lost had to stop for the night found food and water heard a helicopter flag her blouse angry helpless regretful joyful excited upset hopeful Para. 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Para. 2: It was daybreak when she woke up.
11、Q1: Q2: Q3: Q1: Q2: Q3: How did Jane feel? What could she do? /What difficulties did she meet? What would she think about during the night? What would Jane do after waking up? Would she be saved? Who would come to save? How would they feel when meeting again? What would they do? make it logical(合逻辑的
12、）合逻辑的） Predict to write She fell asleep. what would they learn from this experience? Q4: Check the underlined words Para. 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. 1. Jane was upset but determined to go out of the forest. 2. She wanted to climb up a tree to flag her yellow blous
13、e but failed. 3. Jane missed Tom. 4. she fell asleep. 10 underlined key words: Jane, Tom, walked, climbed, lake, stream, helicopter, yellow blouse, to her great joy, at a distance Para. 2: It was daybreak when she woke up. 1. Jane found some berries to eat and drank water. 2. She saw Tom coming. 3.
14、They were excited to see each other again and apologized. 4. They reflected（反思（反思) that understanding is of importance. walked for a while and found down from the helicopter Polish the sentences 1.Jane was upset but determined to go out of the forest. (upset as she was, she.) 2.She wanted to climb u
15、p a tree to flag her yellow blouse but failed.(定语从句定语从句 ) 3.Jane missed Tom.(动词动词ing形式做伴随状语形式做伴随状语) 4.she fell asleep.（with 结构）结构） She wanted to climb up a tree，_ turned out to be a failure. Upset as she was, she determined to go out of the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone,
16、missing Tom at a distance. She fell asleep with shining tears in her eyes. which 1.The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 2.A smile of understanding flashed across her face. 3.He was wild with joy. 4.He stood silently, with tears rolling down his cheeks. 5.I feel like I am floating in an ocean
17、of sadness. 6.Fear flooded over him. Appreciate more sentences 时间先后：later, soon, then, with time going by, eventually 因果或转折关系: so, therefore, instead, however, suddenly 递进关系 whats more ,whats worse, 并列关系 Besides, meanwhile, at the same time Make the paragraph coherent Possible answer for Para.7 But
18、no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. upset as Jane was, she didnt give up. Instead, she wanted to climb up a tree to flag her yellow blouse, which turned out to be a failure.Loneliness flooded over her. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down beside a stone, missing her husband Tom.
19、“If only he could be with me.” Jane murmured. Just at that time, she suddenly realized it was her foolish decision that made herself in trouble. she could not help bursting into tears. Soon Jane fell asleep with shining tears in her eyes. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she strug
20、gled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the hel
21、icopter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determined to live the life to the fullest. writing steps read and understand predict the story write an outline check the underlined words polish the sentences add coherent words Homework 1. Finish writing. 2.Share your writing with your classmates.
