1、Attitude is Everything 高中英语作文讲评高中英语作文讲评 字体篇字体篇 句型篇句型篇 1. There be . 2. I likevery much 3. I am ./ he is . /we are. 4.It is +adj.+to do 5. I /he/we will +do sth. 6. too. to. 7.not.until . 8.both.and. . 9.I/we /he/ they have . 这些句子还在睡觉这些句子还在睡觉 现成的好句子现成的好句子 1.firstly;secondly, thirdly.finally in the fi
2、rst place; first of all；above all 首先、第一点首先、第一点 2.also=besides=more over 此外、而且；此外、而且；in addition 并且并且 ； apart from 除了除了之外；之外； on the contrary 相反相反 3.in a word 简言之、总之简言之、总之 ；generally speaking 一般说来一般说来 ； in short=in a few words 简言之简言之 ；it is quite clear that 很显然；很显然； 4.As for me对我而言；对我而言；as far as Im
3、concerned在我看来；在我看来； as time went by,随着时间流逝随着时间流逝 in my opinion依我看依我看 5.by the way 顺便说顺便说 ；I am afraid that.我恐怕我恐怕 ；to tell the truth 说实话说实话 ；in fact=as a matter of fact=actually 事实上事实上 6.for example 例如：例如： ；that is to say 也就是说也就是说 ； such as 如如 at the same time于此同时于此同时 7.because +句子句子 therefore 因此因此
4、；as a result (of) 结果结果 ； because of+ 名词或短语；名词或短语； for this reason 由于这个原因由于这个原因 8.in the same way 以相同的方式以相同的方式 ；different from 与与不同不同 ； on (the) one handon the other hand 一方面一方面另一方面另一方面 ； 9.in other words 换句话说换句话说 ；all in all 总之，总之，at last I want to say, 最后我想说最后我想说 at last；finally；in the end 最后最后 as
5、soon as possible 连词篇连词篇 1. and, in addition, first, second, third 2. before, after, when, later, immediately 3. beyond, beside, behind, below, inside 4. but, still, however, even, though 5. because, so, therefore, thus, otherwise 6. so that, indeed, above all, for example 7. finally, in other words,
6、 in brief 简简 版版 纠错篇纠错篇 1.Im is a builder. 2.I m a Lihua, is a builder. 3.At that fime 4.suggest sb to do sth. 5.It is sell it or donated it. 6. I think should donate to china. 7.If I set it I have very much 8.Hope your give me a lot of advise. 9.Because sent relics can get some moneys. 10.But I didn
7、t agree them suggestions. 11.You can let have very impotere 12.I hope to yours could help me solve problems. 13.So I decide will be donate for government 14.I hopy you have deal with thing 15.We should sell some money to the ancient cultural suggest sb do sth. Im a builder. My name is Lihua, Im a bu
8、ilder. time I doubt whether to sell it or not. I think we should donate it to china. If I sell it, I will have much money. I hope you can give me a lot of advice. Because selling relics can make some money But I didnt agree with their I hope you can help me solve the problem. So I decided to donate
9、it to government. I hope you can deal with it. We should sell the ancient relics for some money. 字数篇字数篇 How to Write a Composition ? 英语作文“六步法”教学英语作文“六步法”教学 Step1 仔细审题仔细审题 (题材题材,要求要求) Step2. 理清要点理清要点(几处要点几处要点,思路思路,篇章安排篇章安排) Step3. 译写单句译写单句 Step4. 连句成篇连句成篇 Step5. 检查润色检查润色(每句话写好后，用适当的连词接起来，每句话写好后，用适当的连
10、词接起来， 使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简洁使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简洁 适当地用一些高级词汇适当地用一些高级词汇 短语和句式短语和句式) Step6. 定稿誊写定稿誊写 (检查一下有没有时态，语态，拼检查一下有没有时态，语态，拼 写错误并逐一加以改正写错误并逐一加以改正) Step7. 卷面干净卷面干净整洁整洁 1.请你根据以下要点并结合自己的亲身请你根据以下要点并结合自己的亲身 体会体会,以以” Its important to take regular exercise” 为题为题,写一篇写一篇100字左右的英语字左右的英语 演讲稿演讲稿,说明锻炼的重要性说明锻炼的重要性. 锻炼身体的好
11、处锻炼身体的好处: 1) 伸展身体伸展身体 2) 放松精神放松精神 3)学习合作学习合作 参考词汇参考词汇: stretch伸展伸展 cooperate合作合作 Its important to take regular exercise Its important to take regular exercise, because . 锻炼身体可以使我们的身体伸展锻炼身体可以使我们的身体伸展,也能使我们更也能使我们更 强壮强壮.如果我们健康了如果我们健康了,我们就可以少去医院我们就可以少去医院;学生学生 每天有很多的作业要做每天有很多的作业要做, 每天都感到很累每天都感到很累,甚至有甚至有
12、同学在上课时睡觉同学在上课时睡觉,做锻炼可以让我们放松精神做锻炼可以让我们放松精神,使使 我们感到精力充沛我们感到精力充沛,使我们大脑活跃起来使我们大脑活跃起来,在课堂上在课堂上 做得更好做得更好; 和其他人一起锻炼可以使我们懂得与人和其他人一起锻炼可以使我们懂得与人 合作的重要性合作的重要性,并且可以使我们建立牢固的友谊并且可以使我们建立牢固的友谊. So, Its important to take regular exercise. 操练篇操练篇 1.请你根据以下要点并结合自己的亲身请你根据以下要点并结合自己的亲身 体会体会,以以” Its important to take regul
13、ar exercise” 为题为题,写一篇写一篇100字左右的英语字左右的英语 演讲稿演讲稿,说明锻炼的重要性说明锻炼的重要性. 锻炼身体的好处锻炼身体的好处: 1) 伸展身体伸展身体 2) 放松精神放松精神 3)学习合作学习合作 参考词汇参考词汇: stretch伸展伸展 cooperate合作合作 Step1 仔细审题仔细审题 (题材题材,要求要求) Step2. 理清要点理清要点(几处要点几处要点,思路思路,篇章安排篇章安排) Step3. 译写单句译写单句 Step4. 连句成篇连句成篇 Step5. 检查润色检查润色(每句话写好后，用适当的连词接起来，使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简每句
14、话写好后，用适当的连词接起来，使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简 洁洁 适当地用一些高级词汇短语和句式适当地用一些高级词汇短语和句式) Step6. 定稿誊写定稿誊写 (检查一下有没有时态，语态，拼写错误并逐一加以改正检查一下有没有时态，语态，拼写错误并逐一加以改正) 卷面整洁干净卷面整洁干净 范文范文 Dear fellow students, Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”. I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal. A
15、s high school students, what should we do? First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities. Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people,our parents and
16、 our teachers. Thirdly，We should also care for each other and help those in need. Most important of all, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life. Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. 词数词数:100-120. 请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文,陈述反对拟在你陈述反对拟在你 校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由.短文须包括以下内容短文须包括以下内容: 1.大部分同学都反对兴建大部分同学都反对兴建. 2.尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少, 但弊大于利但弊大于利. 3.可能造成噪声污染和空气污染可能造成噪声污染和空气污染. 4.侵占学校部分操场侵占学校部分操场. HomeworkHomework THANK YOU
