1、写作指导写作指导 【写作任务】【写作任务】 假如李凯是你的同班同学，请写一篇题为 My classmates hobby 的短文。 【思路点拨】【思路点拨】 1. 定基调定基调 体裁：体裁：记叙文 时态：时态：以一般过去时为主 人称：人称：第三人称 2. 列提纲、写句子列提纲、写句子 列提纲列提纲 写句子写句子 点明爱好 Li Kai has many hobbies, (1)_(比如阅读和游泳). Li Kai (2)_(对足球最感兴趣). 爱好的形 成 Li Kais father is a football coach. Li Kais father often (3)_(带李凯去看足球
2、比赛) when Li Kai was a kid. Little by little (渐渐地) Li Kai became interested in football. At six, Li Kais father taught Li Kai to play football. Li Kai (4)_(训练很刻苦). Li Kai was good at playing football soon. 爱好带来 的好处 In 2015 Li Kai and his friends started a boys football team. That year Li Kai and his
3、friends beat many other teams in our city. Li Kais hobby has brought him health. Li Kais hobby (5)_(给他带来了成功). 3. 巧衔接巧衔接 在列举爱好时， 可用 such as 来连接； 当前后句有因果关系时， 可用 as a result 来连接(如：训练刻苦的结果是他很快就擅长踢足球了)；在说明爱好带来的多项 好处时，可用 as well as 来连接。 4. 成篇章成篇章 My classmates hobby Li Kai is my classmate._ _ _ 答案答案 2. 列提
4、纲、写句子列提纲、写句子 (1) such as reading and swimming (2) is most interested in football (3) took Li Kai to watch football matches (4) trained very hard (5) has brought him success 4. 成篇章成篇章 My classmates hobby Li Kai is my classmate. He has many hobbies, such as reading and swimming. But he is most interes
5、ted in football. Li Kais father is a football coach. He often took Li Kai to watch football matches when Li Kai was a kid. Little by little Li Kai became interested in football. At six, Li Kais father taught him to play football. Li Kai trained very hard. As a result, Li Kai was good at playing football soon. In 2015 Li Kai and his friends started a boys football team. That year they beat many other teams in our city. Li Kais hobby has brought him success as well as health.
