1、Unit3 The internet 重点归纳重点归纳&写作技法指导写作技法指导 【重点词汇】【重点词汇】 1particular adj. 特指的；特别的specific (同义词)in particular 尤其；特 别 2make_fun_of 取笑play a trick on sb. 捉弄某人 3familiar adj. 熟悉；通晓be familiar with 对熟悉 4keep (.) in mind 牢记memorize vt. 记忆；记住 5case n. 箱；盒；情况，案件in case 万一，如果 6inspire v. 鼓舞；激励inspire sb. to_do
2、sth. 鼓励某人做某事be inspired by . 受到的鼓舞 7access n. 通道 vt. 进入access to 通向的通道 8function n. 作用；功能 vi. 起作用function as sth./sb. 起作用 9press vt. 按；压pressure n. 压力；要求under pressure 被迫；承受着 压力 10rude adj. 粗鲁的；粗野的rudely adv. 粗鲁地；突然地 11engine n. 引擎；发动机engineer n. 工程师 12identity n. 身份；特征identify v. 确认；鉴定；说明身份 13conve
3、nient adj. 方便的convenience n. 方便 14benefit n. 益处；优势 v. 受益benefit from . 从中受益 15distance n. 距离distant adj. 远处的in_the_distance 在远处 【重点句子】【重点句子】 1So I use a nonsense name for_my_net_identity.(P27) 所以我就用了一个毫无意义的名字作为我的网络身份。 2 She realised that one of the greatest benefits of the Internet was its_ability_t
4、o_remove_the_distance_that_usually_exists_between_people.(P28) 她意识到互联网的最大好处之一就是能够消除人与人之间通常存在的距离 感。 3There are countless articles telling us how_the_Internet_has_made_our_lives_more_convenient.(P28) 有无数的文章告诉我们互联网如何使得我们的生活更便捷。 4Being_online_is_no_excuse for being rude.(P32) 上网不是粗鲁的借口。 5Identity theft
5、is a_common_and_serious_problem.(P32) 身份盗窃是一个常见并且严重的问题。 6 New kinds of crimes are happening on the internet, too, so cyber_security_has_to_be_constantly_updated.(P34) 形形色色的犯罪也在网上发生着，所以网络安全必须不断更新。 【写作指导】【写作指导】 本单元的写作项目是应用文写作，要求写一篇博客文章。在这个网络应用于 我们生活的各个角落的时代，我们每个人都或多或少受到网络的影响。在进行本 单元的写作练习时，可以以自己亲身使用网络的
6、经验为基础，在下笔写作时才会 展示出网络对我们生活的实际影响，才会让读者感同身受。 写作步骤（续写文体） ：写作步骤（续写文体） ： 1仔细审题，明确续写要求 这个环节的主要任务是展开想象，合理的想象。 短文后面的“注意”是对续写的具体要求，如词数限制、十个标有下划线的关 键词语、续写部分所给的两段落的首句。这十个关键词语和两个首句指明了故事 发展的方向，把想象和思路规范在逻辑范围内，无论时间的顺序还是情节的先后 发展。 2品读原文，确定文章线索 通过精读全文，找到网络安全话题类文章写作线索。原文有的是以时间为线 索，有的是以空间为线索，还有的是以事件某一个细节为线索。按照事件发生的 逻辑性，
7、构思好情节，并且使情节合情合理地发展延续，这个发展须符合情节内 在的逻辑，与原文有着必然的联系。搞清楚写作线索有利于续写出符合逻辑的语 段。 3拟写草稿，修改错词病句 思路和内容确定之后，结合提示语和划线提示语拟写草稿。注意句子结构的 多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过连接词使上下文连贯。 4标出关键，优化措辞逻辑 根据原文中划线关键词，标出续写部分关键词。这样可以根据标出的关键词 检查续写内容中关键词的使用情况，并可根据实际调整关键词所在语境，以便使 关键词自然贴切地融入续写语段中。 在写作时要注意以下几点在写作时要注意以下几点（博客文（博客文 体）体） ： 1措词 网络用语也在影响我们的生活，但
8、并不是所有的网络用语都能应用在文章 中。 恰当的使用网络用语可以为文章增加趣味性，所以在使用网络用语时要注意 选择。 2主题 网络的存在是好是坏是一个很主观的问题，需要有明辨是非的能力和洞察 力。在选择写网络为主题的文章时，要尽量选择积极的、正面的方面去写。 经典句式：经典句式： 1开头常用句式 Have you written blog posts? 你写过博文吗？ What would the world be like without the Internet? 如果没有了网络，世界会变成什么样？ Cyber security is becoming a serious problem
9、with the technology developing. 随着科技的发展，网络安全日益成为一大问题。 These days the Internet is an integral part of the way we work, stay informed and have fun. 今时今日，互联网已经成了我们工作、了解时事以及娱乐的不可或缺的一部 分。 Network language has been a new language and as a special way of communication carrier. 网络语言已经成为一种新的语言以及特殊方式的沟通载体。 Wh
10、at we care about is how to achieve digital security in a networked world. 我们所关心的是如何在一个互联的世界中实现数字安全。 Streaming movies and music is enjoyable and relaxing, but do be careful not to let out your privacy. 在线看电影和听音乐是件很享受也很放松的事情， 但是千万别泄露了私人信 息。 Online community, such as chatting on WeChat, is something pl
11、easant but kind of complex. 网上社区，比如微信聊天，是令人愉快但又有点复杂的事情。 2主体段落常用句式 Online shopping is both cheap and convenient. 网上购物既便宜又方便。 The number of Internet users is doubling every six months. 因特网用户数量每六个月就要增加一倍。 You can listen to music, stream videos, or look up information online. 你可以在网上听音乐，在线看视频或者查阅信息。 Reme
12、mber to keep things secret when you go online. 记得上网时有些信息要保密。 Laws are expected to be in place to deal with much of the cyber violence. 人们期望出台一些法律来整治网络暴力。 But we should not be addicted to the Internet, it will affect our life and study. 但我们不要沉湎于网络，这样会影响我们的生活和学习。 Rather than going out to stores weekly
13、, people order things online and have them delivered directly to their homes. 人们不再每周去商店，他们从网上订购东西，然后直接把它们快递回家。 Public Shaming has gotten to the point where the online defenders of justice are actually becoming bullies themselves. 在网上相互攻击已经到了这样一种程度， 即维护正义的人实际上自身也成了 霸凌者。 3结尾常用句式 In the end, whether it
14、 is . 最后，无论它是 So I think on this issue . 所以，我认为在这个问题上 Life has been greatly changed by the Internet. 网络已大大改变了生活。 Post your comments below if you want to share something. 如果您有什么要分享的，可以在下面写评论。 The use of the Internet is up to the individual. 网络的使用在于个人选择。 So we have to be careful . 所以我们需要注意的是 Do you st
15、ill have some other good advice about staying safety online? 关于安全上网你还有什么别的好建议吗？ They take any possible measures to protect the security of the Internet. 他们采取任何可能的措施来保护互联网安全。 典例分析一：典例分析一： 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Jack, a clerk at the local bank, was wandering alone on the street. It was a cold,
16、 silent winter night. His mind was on his wife Linda, who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed, waiting for more money for her operation. Jack had sold everything he had, and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could. But th
17、e real world is cruel. A large amount of money was still needed. To Jack, it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help. “I have only one option left， ” Jack said to himself. Then he went the bank, his workplace, again. For several days, he observed the bank and planne
18、d a theft. The next day, he went to work as usual. Everything seemed normal: he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did. But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work, instead of the small one he always carried. At 5：00 pm, the_bank closed, and the_clerks
19、and the_guards had all gone home. However, at that moment, Jack was in the bathroom. He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase. He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system fo
20、r the past 30 days. Using a special key and some other tools, he then easily opened the doors of the safes, The banks security_system wasnt very good, which allowed Jack to take a lot of money. Several minutes later, Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money. 注意： 1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2至少使
21、用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while, the alarms began to ring. Paragraph 2： But the most unlucky man was the manger of the bank, an old man. 精彩范文 Paragraph 1： After Jack had been gone from the bank for a
22、while, the alarms began to ring. The police arrived at the_bank very quickly, only to find no one there. The next day was a really special day for the town, which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft. The_clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case, of course, i
23、ncluding Jack. The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible, even though no clues had been found yet. Paragraph 2： But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank, an old man. He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position. At last, with eno
24、ugh money for her operation,_Jacks wife was saved. However, Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank. He could not forget what he had done to the old man. His guilt deepened as time went by. Finally, he turned himself in to the police and accepted his punishment. 【总评】 作者对案件后续情节进行了合理的描述，用语流畅，想象
25、丰富，符合故事发 展内在关系，主人公去自首的结局也体现了作者正向的价值观。 【亮点呈现】 (1)作者运用非限制性定语从句 which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft以及让步状语从句even though no clues had been found yet、宾语从句 what he had done to the old man 等高级句式对事件的发生发 展进行了生动形象的描述，内容丰满，符合逻辑。 (2)作者大量运用非谓语动词短语，如 only to find no one ther
26、e, covering the strange theft, discussing the case, including Jack 等体现英语行文特点的语言结构， 不仅仅使得语段丰富多彩，灵活多变，而且用语简练，易于表达真情实感。 (3)作者给出的故事结局 Finally, he turned himself in to the police and accepted his punishment.也具有教育意义，体现了人性自省、向善的特点。 典例分析二：典例分析二： 假如你是高中生李华，你们学校最近开展了英语博客作文比赛，这种新颖的 形式吸引了很多学生来参加。 要求：1.词数 100 左右
27、； 2写作主题为 Cyber Violence。 精彩范文 Li Huas Blog HOME PAGES CATEGORIE S GALLERY Cyber Violence In an era when the Internet dominates our lives, cyber violence has become prevalent as we see it happening either in drama or in reality. Especially for the celebrities they have been attacked by the rude words
28、 all the time. It is time to combat cyber violence. How to regulate network violence? Not only is it an issue facing regulatory authority, but it is also the responsibility of every netizen. On one hand, it is advised to adopt the real- name system, which can prevent the language violence effectivel
29、y, on the other hand, laws are expected to be in place to deal with online violence. Besides we need to behave ourselves even without the supervision of law. It is urged that a loving, supportive and harmonious environment should be provided on the Enternet. 总评 本篇范文以读者能感同身受的生活中的实例出发， 接着阐述杜绝网络暴力要 靠监管
30、及每位网民的共同努力，最后再次呼吁营造和协网络环境。整体文章结构 清楚，用词准确，文章主题也切合当下热点。 亮点呈现 (1)Not only . but also 的倒装使用，It is urged that 等句型的使用使文章简洁 紧凑，句式显得高级。 (2)either . or . , behave oneself, be expected to 等词组的运用使文章表达准 确、生动。 (3)衔接词 On one hand, on the other hand, besides 等使观点阐述清晰分明。 跟踪演练一：跟踪演练一： 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
31、The Internet is a huge part of many peoples everyday lives. Its fun, useful, and informative, but can also be dangerous, no matter how safe you feel while browsing. By getting into the habit of using good Internet safety practices, you can protect your information and your identity for years to come
32、. When youre creating a password for your account,_make_sure to include a mix of numbers, symbols, and letters, both uppercase and lowercase. Avoid using the same passwords for multiple accounts. Its harder to remember, but it will keep your information much safer.Password managers automatically gen
33、erate and store strong, unique passwords for each of your accounts. Youll simply create one master password for the manager and let it keep all the others safe. Multifactor authentication makes an account even more secure by requiring extra information to let you log in, such as a code sent to your
34、phone. Many large email providers and social media accounts offer this service. Consider very carefully before you make an account on a website, even if it just requires giving your email address. No matter how secure your passwords are, using them on unsafe sites will put your information in danger
35、. Logging into a site creates a cookie in your browser, which identifies you and, if stolen, can compromise your account. This is especially an issue on sites that hold sensitive information, like your bank account or credit card number,_so its always best to log out once youre finished. Keeping you
36、r social media profiles private can make it harder for strangers to contact you online or get hold of your information. Choose an option that makes your profile visible to only you or your_friends. 注意： 1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragr
37、aph 1： Review what information is public on your social media profiles. Paragraph 2： Dont open emails or files from people you dont know. 写前导读：本文是一篇说明文。文章向读者介绍了在互联网中保护自己信息 安全的方法。 精彩范文 Paragraph 1： Review what information is public on your social media profiles. Important information on your account
38、can slip through the cracks and be made public, especially if you recently made or edited your profile. Head to the Privacy section of your account to check whats currently accessible by people who arent your_friends. Do this every few months or so to make_sure that everything you want to be private
39、 stays that way. Paragraph 2： Dont open emails or files from people you dont know. Phishing spammers are people who use fake emails or messages to make you share personal information. If you see an email from an unfamiliar address, or from an address you know but with a suspicious message, move it t
40、o your spam folder. The email could also include links that might look legitimate, but never click on them until you can verify that its a legitimate message. Phishing spammers are often after your bank account or Social Security number,_so be extra cautious if you get an email requesting money, login credentials, or very personal information. 跟踪演练二：跟踪演练二： 假如你是高中生李华，你最近发现你的同学中有很多人崇拜“网红”，模仿网 红化妆、穿衣甚至说话。请你针对此现象发表一篇博文。 精彩范文
