1、Part 4 Writing 写作题目 假定你是李华,你校开展了一次主题为“用英语讲好中国故事”的英语写作比赛活劢,你对出生于普 通农民家庭的诺贝尔文学奖获奖者莫言非常钦佩,请根据下列内容写一篇文章。 莫言生 平 本名管谟业,1955 年出生于山东省,小学五年级辍学后从事务农工作,一 直酷爱阅读中国经典名著 莫言作 品 红高粱、蛙,2011 年凭借小说蛙获得茅盾文学奖,2012 年 获得诺贝尔文学奖 你的感 悟 注意: 1.词数 100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 红高粱Red Sorghum;蛙Frogs;茅盾文学奖Mao Dun Literature Award
2、s 思路点拨 体裁 夹叙夹议文 时态 记叙部分以一般过去时为主,议论部分以一般现在时为主 主题 介绍莫言 生平事 人称 记叙部分以第三人称为主,议论部分以第一人称为主 迹,抒发 自己切身 感受 布局 简要介绍莫言的人生经历 简要介绍莫言的伟大成就 表达个人感想 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. v. 忠于;全心全意投入;承诺,保证 2. 结果 3. 出于对的爱好 4. adj.不一般的,非凡的;意想不到的 答案 mit 2.as a consequence 3.out of a passion for 4.extraordinary .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)结果
3、,他小学五年级就辍学了。 ,he dropped out in the fifth grade in primary school. (2)出于对文学的强烈爱好,他全心全意投入到各种中国经典名著中。 literature, he a variety of Chinese classics. (3)使莫言如此非凡的不仅是他著名的作品,还有他对自己所钟爱的事情的投入。 What makes Mo Yan is not only his works but also his to what he loves. 答案 (1)As a consequence (2)Out of a strong pas
4、sion for;committed to (3)so extraordinary; commitment 2.句式升级 (4)用 whose 引导的非限制性定语从句合幵句子。 Mo Yans real name is Guan Moye. He was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province. Mo Yan, , was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province. (5)用 when 引导的非限制性定语从句合幵句子。 Mo Yan was born i
5、n an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955. At that time people didnt live a rich life and attached little importance to school education. Mo Yan was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province , people didnt live a rich life and attached little importance to school educat
6、ion. (6)用 while doing.结构改写句子。 While he was working as a young peasant, out of a strong passion for literature, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories. , out of a strong passion for literature, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually
7、practiced writing stories. 答案 (4)whose real name is Guan Moye (5)in 1955;when (6)While working as a young peasant 连句成篇 参考范文 Mo Yan, whose real name is Guan Moye, was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955, when people didnt live a rich life and attached little importance to
8、school education. As a consequence, he dropped out in the fifth grade in primary school. While working as a young peasant, out of a strong passion for literature, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories. Mo Yan created many famous literature works, inclu
9、ding Red Sorghum and Frogs. Frogs won him Mao Dun Literature Awards in 2011 and he won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 2012. In my opinion, what makes Mo Yan so extraordinary is not only his famous works but also his commitment to what he loves. 写作积累 人物描写常用高级词汇及短语: remarkable adj.显著的,引人注目的 committ
10、ed adj.尽心尽力的;坚定的 commit oneself to 某人致力于 a strong/burning passion for.对强烈的爱 be impressed by 对印象深刻 人物描写常用高级句式、语法: 1.whose、who、whom引导的定语从句 2.What impresses sb. most.使某人印象最深刻的 3.while 等连词+非谓语劢词 人物描写常见句子: 1.She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country. 她投身于科研,对国
11、家做出了巨大的贡献。 2.He is considered to be one of the greatest scientists in China. 他被认为是中国最伟大的科学家之一。 3.She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement. 她因她的科学成就被授予了诺贝尔化学奖。 实战演练 () 假定你是李华,你校校刊英文版将开设“中外名人”栏目,你拟写王澍,请根据下列内容写一篇文章。 经历简 介 1963 年出生于新疆乌鲁木齐,1981 年被东南大学建筑系录取,2000 年获 同济大学建
12、筑学博士学位 成就简 介 2012 年获普利兹克建筑奖,成为第一个获得该奖项的中国人 你的感 想 注意:1.词数 100 左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Pritzker Architecture Prize Winner Wang Shu Part 4 Writing 实战演练 One possible version:Pritzker Architecture Prize Winner Wang Shu Wang Shu, a world-famous Chinese architect, was born in Urumqi, Xinjiang in
13、 1963. In 1981, Wang was admitted to Southeast University, where he committed himself to the study of architecture and got his masters degree seven years later. Out of a burning passion for architecture, he continued his study in Tongji University, earning a doctorate in the year 2000. Wang was awarded the 2012 Pritzker Architecture Prize, which is regarded as the Nobel Prize in architecture. Mr. Wang is the first Chinese citizen to win the prize. We should learn from Wang Shu. It is his efforts that contribute to his success.
