1、Writing,I will miss _ most.I am really thankful to him/her.,He/She is really .When I ., he/she always .He/she is also a teacher who .For me, he/she is just like .,an unforgettable teacher,Coco wrote a passge to the English MagazineSunshine to show her love to Tina.,My unforgettable teacher I have st
2、udied here for three years. Tina is my unforgettable teacher. Tina helped me a lot. Ive grown up. I remember. I was a shy girl. I didnt do well in study. Science was difficult. I couldnt understand it. I was upset during those days. Tina paid attention to me. She told me that knowledge is valuable.
3、She told me to study science hard. She told me to think about my future. I began to study harder. Tina is a great teacher. Ill remember her.,Read Cocos passage on Part Two.,Ive spent three years studying here.,How time flies! Three years has passed since Istudied here.,Time went by quickly! Its thre
4、e years since I studied here.,Tip1: 美化句子。Beautify the sentences with good phrases.,Ive studied here for three years. Tina is the most unforgettable teacher. Tina helped me a lot. Ive grown up.,Tina is the most unforgettable teacher. With her help, Ive grown up so much.,Tina is one of the teachers wh
5、o Ill never forget. The main reason is that without her help, I wouldnot grow up so much.,Beginning 开头,Parts of the article （节选）,I remember that I used to be a shy girl who .,Object Clauses 宾语从句Attributive Clauses 定语从句,I remember.I was a shy girl.,I remember that I . a shy girl who was afraid toansw
6、er teachers questions in class.,I remember that I . a shy girl who never spoke toothers.,Parts of the article （节选）,Science was difficult. I couldnt understand it.I was upset during those days.,I found it difficult for me to understand science. was so difficult that I didnt understand it at all.was t
7、oo difficult to understand.How upset I was at that time! You cant imagine how upset I was at that time!,find it +adj.+for sb to do sth 固定句型 so .that ./ too.to . Exclamatory Sentence 感叹句,Parts of the article （节选）,She told me that knowledge was valuable. I need to look for them. She told me to study s
8、cience hard. She told me to think more about my future.,Tip2: Use different sentence patterns. 使用多样句式，不单一。,She made me know that .She advised me to do.She encouraged me to do .She not only ., but also .One more thing was that I need to.,Parts of Body 正文（节选）,I was a shy girl.I didnt do well in study.
9、,fluent? 流畅的,Tip3: Use proper linking words. 使用连接词（功能词）。,I was a shy girl who never spoke to others.Whats worse, I didnt do well in study.(Besides, I didnt do well in study.)(I didnt do well in study, either.),I was upset during those days .Tina paid attention to me.,I was upset during those days.Lu
10、ckily, Tina paid attention to me.(At that time, Tina paid .)(To my surprise, Tina paid .),写作当中句子和句子之间比较常用的连接词：1.表示并列/递进关系：and，or, besides, whats more, also， at the same time，whats worse . 2.表示转折关系：but, however,3.表示因果关系：because, so, as a result, .4. 其它常用连词：Un(luckily), to ones surprise, at last, fina
11、lly, in my opinion, to begin with, .,I was upset during those days.Luckily，Tina paid attention to me.,How has “Coco” changed with the help of Tina?,Luckily, Tina paid attention to me and soon took the time to communicate with me.The first thing she told me was that knowledge was _valuable like treas
12、ure _ I need to look for them with courage. _, she advised me to put my heart into science. _, she successfully made me know that I should be responsible for my future. _, I became brave enough to speak in front of others. _study, I put in more effort and never gave up. Thanks to her, Ive been bette
13、r and better.,whats more, finally, after that, as for, so .that,*Choose proper linking words and fill in the blanks.,so,that,Whats more,Finally,After that,As for,Luckily, Tina paid attention to me and soon took the time to communicate with me.,Thanks to her, Ive been better,topic sentence 主题句,ending
14、,Tip 4: Framework框架：a topic sentence, supporting sentences, a good ending,and better.,Read and Enjoy,What kind of teachers do you expect to have?,I expect/ hope to have teachers who .In that case, I will .,大临外英语杂志Sunshine针对毕业班开设一个写作专栏，需要向毕业班每个同学征集稿件。内容如下：你初中三年心中最难忘的一个好老师？描述点滴回忆。你希望在高中碰到怎样的好老师 ？请谈谈你自
15、己的想法及理由（2-3点）。请你结合以上要求，用英语为学校的杂志写一篇短文。题目自拟，字数在80-100. 首短文首句仅供选择使用。首句：How time flies. I have spent 3 years studying here.,Read,List,Beautify,Frame,Linhai Foreign Language School Christina,Be thankful!,To cherish!,Be better!,Finish the writing with your effort! Be thankful to your teachers! Cherish the time here! Improve yourselves!,Homework,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
