1、,如何写好英语作文,如何描述过去发生的事情书面表达的六步法一.审题.二.抓要点.三.扩展成句.四.连句成文.五.查错改错.六.抄写,审题,确定基本要素(5W1H)何时-When何地-Where何人-Who为何-Why如何-How何事-What,抓要点,确定主要行为What happened？a hard-working student,get up early to read book ()do his homework during the lunch break ()stay up to study（）play computer games（）chat with others on the
2、 internet（）,扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did something连句成文（时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应）查错改错（要尽量剔除错误）抄写（卷面不工整扣分）,writing a picture story,根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。 短文要写得连贯、完整。,Sample 1,1. topic :2. Tense( generally):3. Person:,1. Go over the requirement,A story （a traffic accident),past tense,Tom , he,Tom /ride a bike Alon
3、g the street/roadA few days ago/ the other day/ one day,2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how),A car / run fast to/run into himTom/ fall off his bikeSuddenly,2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how),The driver/ frightened/ run away,2. Go over the pictures（who, wha
4、t, where, when, why, how),A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch,2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how),Key words,sentences,A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.,ride a bike /run f
5、ast to,see the accident/remember the number /call the police /be caught,be frightened /run away,hit him/fall off his bike,When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him.,The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.,The driver was so frightened that he ran away.,Tom was riding along the st
6、reet. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.,Passage 1,3. Writing a passage,The other day, Tom was riding along the stree
7、t when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to s
8、ee it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.,passage 2,The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too
9、 late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told h
10、im what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.,Passage 2,Using connectives,并列 转折 3. 因果 4. 其他,and, bothand,but, however, though, while,so, therefore, because,when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, sothat , finally, as a result, What was worse,
11、Go over the requirement（person, tense, style）,Summary : How to write a picture story?,Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how),Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. ),基本篇章结构 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件） 事件的起因 事件的发展/过程 事件的结果 扣题,Clear idea Correct grammar Com
12、plete passage Beautiful language Beautiful handwriting,What is good writing?,Writing a story,Think about the story you want to tell.Think about the purpose and focus of your story. Why are you telling the story?Make a list of all the things that happen.Add details and specific information. Tell the reader what things look like and what people say.,TIPS,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
