1、二、文章内容类： 光有个漂亮的开头还远远不够哦，文章的中间部分也就是猪肚环节同样要写得充实 潇洒，不然配在一个光鲜的开头下面，不但不能相得益彰反而显得干瘪无力，让老师的 印象分也骤然下降。那接下来我们就看看如何将这“大头”部分写得出彩。 要在内容部分得高分，用到的技巧大约有这几种：长短句交叉、使用插入语、用词 多样准确生动又形象、关键词灵活换用不重复、句型使用多样表述地道 内容技巧一：华丽丽的长短句 写长短句的宗旨，一张一弛，文武之道，一长一短，长句在前短句后，通篇长句累死读 者，通篇短句不够刺激，长句华丽短句简洁，穿插着用方为王道 这类句子是跟着你行文内容走的，没有什么固定公式可以套，其精髓
2、在于多用从句，顺 带着插入一些短语进一步修饰。但一些优秀的长句你可以刻意去学，去模仿，然后灵活 运用到自己的文章中去,至于短句部分言简意赅地跟在长句后即可。下面就拿某 W 的 Comment 中的漂亮长句为例 1. These delicate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is ones inner beauty that really counts. （非限制性定从， 放在句子中间修饰中心词
3、 sentences, 显然要比直接+aim at 好得多） 2. Backham, who has been a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.（一个非限制性定从+ 一个让步状语从句） 3. However, flows of advertisements will not only impact the producers image, but also make the potenti
4、al customers bored and even spoil the advertising program. （not only but also 也是写长句时的主力 军！ ） 4. Wherever they go or whatever they do, they always bear in mind that they are messengers of peace, representing China.（bearin mind, 一个宾从 I（firmly） hold the view that； In my humble opinion ; Im of the opini
5、on that （In my opinion gain growing popularity; is increasingly appealing to; is catching on a increasing/growing number of people （is more and more popular） 4. 关注，重视 pour attention into ; take into account; take into consideration; be concerned with/about; keep oneself （well）informed of; become awa
6、re of/that ； （pay attention to/put emphasis on） 5. 据我所知， to the best of my knowledge; for all I know/ for what I can tell （as far as I know） 6. 做是有好处的、有帮助的 It pays to ; Its rewarding to ; Its of great benefit to ; One can reap huge fruits from （its good/helpful to） 7. 导致了 give rise to; （greatly）cont
7、ribute to； is a major contributor to ; lead to ; result in （cause） 8. 喜爱,热衷于 take a fancy to/have a fancy for have an affection for have a love affair with be fond of/be keen on/be keen about be obsessed with （like） 9. 凡事都有两面性 No garden has no weeds Everything has its pluses and minuses Everything c
8、uts both ways is a double-edged sword We should not be blind to the other side of （every coin has two sides ） 10. 努力做某事、尽某人之力做某事 do everything in ones power to take pains to do spare no effort/ make an effort to do do ones utmost to go all out to do do ones bit to （try ones best to do） 11. 不尽如人意 has
9、/leaves a lot to be desired fails to meet/satisfy ones need/demand/requirement is far from satisfactory doesnt come up to ones expectations （is undesirable） 12. 就是个极好的例子，恰好能说明我的观点 is such a prime example we can cite as an excellent example of perfectly fits/illustrates my idea/description of perfect
10、ly serve my purpose （for example，） 13. 在某种程度上 at some point to some extent/degree; to a certain extent/degree in a sort of way in part in a sense （partly） 14. 无法与相提并论；与相差甚远 cant not even hold a candle to pales into insignificance when compared with is not in the same class with cant rival in theres no comparison between and can never approach
