1、 Section 写作指导写作指导 夯基提能作业夯基提能作业 写作方法指导写作方法指导 写作方法指导写作方法指导 正反对比类议论文 写作指导 正反对比类议论文是从正反两方面辩证地说明某个观点。此类议论 文应注意以下几点： 1此类文章的结构一般为：引语正方观点反方观点 结论。 2文章要做到要点完整、条理清晰。各段之间层次清楚，以使文 章显得有条理。从段落内部的层次上讲，每一段一般又分为三部分：主 题句、扩展句和总结句。 3常用一般现在时。 常用表达 1开头用语 We have a discussion about. Recently，we had a heated discussion on.
2、According to a recent survey. When it comes to. 2论证用语 Opinions are divided on the question. Others have different opinions. Some students are for the idea, while others think otherwise. On the one hand.On the other hand. First/Second/Third/Whats more/Besides/In addition. 3表达观点 But on the other hand,
3、 there are also quite a few people who. However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case. However, some others argue that. At present, some people think.while others think. It has more disadvantages than advantages. 4结束用语 To sum up/In a word/In conclusion/In
4、 short/Above all/In general/ Generally speaking. I still hold the view that. Therefore，it is easy to draw the conclusion that. 写作模板 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over _(引出话题或 对象) In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in _(讨论 议题).Generally speaking, it is widely believed that
5、 there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, _(优点一).And secondly, _ (优点二) Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”_(讨论议题) is no exception, and in other words, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, _(缺点一).In addition, _(缺点二) To sum up, we should try to bring the ad
6、vantages of _(讨论议 题) into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of _(总结) 精品展示 互联网已经成为现代人工作和生活中必不可少的通信工具，在人们 的生活中起着重要的作用，但它也有一些负面影响。请就互联网的利与 弊发表你的见解，并阐述你的理由。内容包括： 好处 提供大量的信息，促进人际交流； 网上购物便捷 弊端 损害眼睛； 长时间上网影响工作和休息； 网瘾影响
7、学生的学习 你的观点 注意：词数80左右。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 审题谋篇 第一步明确要求 该写作属于正反观点对比类作文，故要用第_人称来写；文章的 主题内容是谈论网络的利与弊以及你的看法。时态用_。 第二步确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1引出话题； Para.2互联网的好处和弊端； Para.3自己的观点。 三 一般现在时 第三步核心词汇 1_在中起重要作用 2_优点 3_弊端 4_有助于，促成 5_对有害 6_对上瘾 7_充分利用 play an important part in advantage disadvantage contribute to do h
8、arm to be addicted to make full use of 第四步句式升级 1互联网已经成为现代人工作和生活中必不可少的通信工具，在 人们的生活中起着重要的作用，给我们带来很多便利，但也有一些负面 影响不容忽略。 (一般表达)Nowadays, the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people.The Internet plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits, but its
9、 disadvantages should also not be ignored. (高级表达)Nowadays, the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people, _ plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits, but its disadvantages should also not be ignored. 2互联网可以给我们提供大量最新的信息。我们可以给朋友发送 电子邮件从而促进人际交
10、流。 (一般表达)The Internet can provide a great deal of the latest information for us.We can send e-mails to our friends，contributing to promoting social communication. which (高级表达)_ the Internet provide a great deal of the latest information for us _ we can send e-mails to our friends, contributing to pr
11、omoting social communication. 3互联网很容易让身体出问题，损害眼睛。 (一般表达)The Internet can easily lead to physical problems and do harm to our eyesight. (高级表达)The Internet can easily lead to physical problems, _ our eyesight. Not only can but also doing harm to 参考范文 Nowadays, the Internet has become an essential mean
12、s of communication to modern people, which plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits, but its disadvantages should also not be ignored. The Internet brings us many advantages. Firstly, not only can the Internet provide a great deal of the latest information for us but als
13、o we can send e- mails to our friends, contributing to promoting social communication. Secondly, the Internet makes shopping online convenient. However, the Internet has many disadvantages. It can easily lead to physical problems, doing harm to our eyesight.Surfing the Internet for a long time may a
14、ffect our work and rest. In my view, the most important is that we should learn how to make full use of its advantages while avoiding its disadvantages. 亮点点评 该范文结构完整，第一段引出话题；第二段论述互联网的好处和弊 端；第三段发表自己的观点。要点齐全，语言规范地道，环环相扣。文 中nowadays，firstly，secondly，but，however等过渡词衔接，使表达自 然紧凑，环环相扣；在句式上，作者巧妙地使用了定语从句、非谓语
15、动 词等句式，亮点频出，表达形式多样。总之，该范文是一篇朗朗上口的 优秀范文，值得学习。 2不能把注意力集中在学习上； 3过度使用智能手机对健康有害。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文： Nowadays smartphones play an important role in our lives. A number of middle school students have owned them. No matter where we are, we can see students playing with their smartphones. Smartphones are real
16、ly good for students. They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently. And they help students get information more easily.However, everything has two sides. When students spend too much time on smartphones, they dont have time to communicate face to face with their friends or family.Smartphones may take their attention away from their studies. More seriously, using smartphones too much may cause health problems. In my opinion, students should use smartphones wisely.And its necessary for them to take part in more outdoor activities.
