1、1 关于家庭的回忆 本单元的写作项目是关于家庭的回忆，属于家庭叙事类的记叙文。在写作时 可以从人物、时间、过程以及结果或感受等方面，对事件进行叙述。可以采用顺 叙、倒叙或者插叙的方式。 基本框架 1开头交代事件的缘由：引起回忆的事物。 2主体具体描述事件的经过：回忆的时间、地点、人物、事件、特点 等。 3结尾该事物引发的新的思考或愿望。好的结尾不仅仅有完美的结局， 还能留下令人深省、回味的东西。 常用词块 1clean up the old clothes 清理旧衣服 2make up for the lost time 弥补逝去的时光 3instead of making an apolog
2、y to her for my words 而没有因我的话向她道歉 4with time passing by 随着时间的流逝 5be strict with my brother and me in study 在学习上对我和弟弟严格要求 6be proud of the award I got in the speech contest 为我在演讲比赛中获奖而 感到自豪 7communicate with me heart to heart 与我推心置腹地交流了一下 8book the train ticket online in advance 提前在网上预订火车票 9 remind m
3、e of the happy days spent with my close friends 让我想起和好朋友 一起度过的快乐日子 10teach me how to make dumplings 教我如何包水饺 常用语句 精彩开头 1I was doing.when I found an old photo/a card/a diary. 我在做时，发现一张旧照片/一张卡片/一本日记 2 2The lovely memory came flooding back. 美好的回忆涌上心头。 3How time flies！时光飞逝！ 4I couldnt wait to share them
4、with you. 我迫不及待地想和你分享。 丰满主体 1It was a special day.years ago. 那是年前的一个特别的日子。 2I decided to surprise. 我决定给一个惊喜。 3I was about to throw everything back when my mother came in. 我正准备把所有东西都扔掉，这时妈妈进来了。 4When I.，my eyes watered. 当我的时候，我的眼睛湿润了。 余味结尾 1Love is indeed a magical ingredient. 爱确实是一种神奇的因素。 2I hope I
5、will make.for her. 我希望我能为她做 假如你是李华， 你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经为了帮助你摆脱压力而写 给你的一堆卡片。这些卡片让你开始了快乐的学习。请你写封电子邮件，把这段 美好回忆分享给你的好友 Tom。 注意：词数 80 左右。 学生习作 Dear Tom， This weekend I was cleaning up my bookshelf.I found a pile of cards.When I saw the words on each card，I cried.They made me think of something. The pressure
6、was large at the beginning of senior life.I was afraid of failing the tests.Mum was careful.She found my problem.She put a card on my desk every 3 morning to encourage me.Gradually，I became happy again in my studies.Mum told me to work hard little by little and then succeed. Yours， Li Hua 名师点评： 1所使用
7、的句子较简单，复杂句式较少； 2描述事情仅限于过程的罗列，没能充分表达出回忆的内容。 升格作文 Dear Tom， While I was cleaning up my bookshelf，I found a stack of cards.Reading the words on them my eyes watered.It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration. I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and was afraid o
8、f falling behind others.Soon Mum found my problem.From then on，I could find a special card on my desk every morning.Gradually， I became less anxious and found pleasure in my studies.Mum makes me understand that pressure cant be avoided.What counts is how to deal with it. Yours， Li Hua 假定你是李华， 你在整理书架
9、时看到一张全家照， 请写封信并寄出这张照片， 把自己的家庭成员 给你的新朋友 Tom 介绍一下。 注意：词数 80 左右 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 4 Dear Tom， This weeked I was cleaning up m y bookshell，I found a photograph of my family. There are five people in it.The tallest one is my father.He is fortyeight years old.My mother is standing beside him.She is not
10、 tall as my father.She isthree years younger than my father.Sitting in front of them are my grandparents.My grandfather is that fat one with a pair of glasses.My grandmother is as fat as he.This little one is me.Im sitting betweet them. All of us love one another.I have a happy family. Yours， Li Hua
