1、2019 年人教版高一英语必修一 unit2 作文训练 应用文亮点表达 1.旅游计划 My travel plan is as follows.我的旅行计划如下。 Here/Below is my travel plan.这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。 Winter holiday is coming.I have a plan for it. 寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。 2.旅游目的地 This month， I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends， which is supposed to be a sev
2、en-day trip. 这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游。 Im planning to travel to Suzhou，a city called Eastern Venice. 我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯。 The May Day is coming/approaching，and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery. 五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游，看看它美丽的风景。 3.动身及交通工具 Im planning to go there by train an
3、d come back by bus. 我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车回来。 We will set out on 10th June.我们将于 6 月 10 日出发。 【实战演练】 假设你是王明， 寒假即将来临， 你打算和家人去上海玩。 请你给你的好友李华写一封 e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。 要点： 1.元月 21 日下午 2 点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海， 到上海后入住预订酒店， 休息一晚。 2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。 3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。 4.元月 24 日乘坐高铁返回。 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
4、； 2.词数 100 左右。 参考词汇： high speed railway 高铁book 预订Disneyland 迪士尼乐园recreation facilities 游 乐设 施souvenir 纪念品Shanghai Science and Technology Museum 上海科技馆 Oriental Pearl Tower 东方明珠 句型积累句型积累 随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as) _ _ 到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够 的精力去参观上海。(so that) _ _ 下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏
5、到上海的全景。(from which) _ _ 连句成篇连句成篇 假设你是王明， 寒假即将来临， 你打算和家人去上海玩。 请你给你的好友李华写一封 e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。 要点： 1.元月 21 日下午 2 点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海， 到上海后入住预订酒店， 休息一晚。 2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。 3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。 4.元月 24 日乘坐高铁返回。 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数 100 左右。 参考词汇： high speed railway 高铁book 预订Disneyland
6、 迪士尼乐园recreation facilities 游 乐设 施souvenir 纪念品Shanghai Science and Technology Museum 上海科技馆 Oriental Pearl Tower 东方明珠 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【练一练】 假定你是李华，你父母决定春节期间到桂林旅游，请你给你的英国笔友 Jack 写封信，介绍 相关情况。要点如下： 1.旅游时间：春节假期； 2.旅游地点：广西桂林； 3.你的准备：上网了解(桂林景点、其他游客的经历)； 4.邀请 Jack 来一起游玩。 注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2.可以适当增加细
7、节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 第二节读后续写(满分 25 分) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Be kind to others.I realize this is simple and very basic.However, it is necessary and it does make a difference.I often have people who cross my daily path to whom I can show kindness.It is often just a smile.A sm
8、ile often says, “I see you.You arent invisible to me.Youareimportant.” People need someone to care about them. I read a story many years ago about a man who had decided to commitsuicide.Hed lost a fortune, his family and nearly everything he owned.He went to a local pawn shop to buy a gun.He planned
9、 to take the gun back to his apartment in New York City and kill himself. As he was getting on the elevator, a little oldlady was slowly getting on too.She had a small cart she was pulling behind her and was having a little trouble getting it into the elevator.He said that he was actually a bit angr
10、y because he wanted to hurryup,get to his apartment and end his own life.He reachedoutto the old ladys cart and forced it as it had become stuck.He got it free easily and she got on the elevator. After the door closed, she looked up at him with a big smile and said, “If we had more young men like yo
11、u in this world, the world would be a better place.You are so kind to help.Such a sweet young man.” Of course, it changed his thought of going back to kill himself.He wanted to go around New York and find people that he could help and people who were struggling even with something that was as small
12、as the little old ladys cart. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： That day, his life changed. Paragraph 2： Later, he enjoyed great success in his work and life. 【文章大意】 文章通过一个小故事彰显与人为善的重要性。 一位年轻人几乎失去了一切， 所以决定自杀。他在乘电梯时遇到一位老太太，
13、老太太行动迟缓，手推车卡在了电梯口。 年轻人为了能快点到家结束自己的生命，随手帮了老太太一把，受到了老太太的赞扬。谁 料想老太太的赞扬竟然改变了年轻人想要自杀的想法。 【写作指导】Paragraph 1 注意续写段首句关键词“his life changed”，故要围绕变化写，续 写还要考虑文章首段提到的“Be kind to others.”以及文中提到的“commit suicide”这一社会现 象， 并综合他自杀的原因： 失去财富、 工作、 家庭等。 还要提及他的想法变化的原因： kindness。 因此续写第一段应该写做好事给他带来的变化。 Paragraph 2 继续写具体在哪方面发
14、生的变化，写作时注意关键词 Later, enjoyed, success, work and life，即下文应该写将来的事情，要围绕工作和生活两个方面来写。 参考答案 随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as) Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghai withmyfamily. 到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够 的精力去参观上海。(so that) UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodre
15、st first,whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenough energytovisitShanghai. 下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。(from which) WewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwe willenjoythewholeviewofShanghai. 【参考范文】 Dear Li Hua， How is everything going? As the winter holiday is coming ， I
16、 will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.Here is my plan. We are leaving Liling for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2 ： 00 p.m.on Jan.21st.Upon arriving in Shanghai， we will check in the hotel for a good rest first， which will be booked online in advance，so that we can have
17、 enough energy to visit Shanghai.On the second day， we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of recreation facilities， and buy some souvenirs at the same time.On the third day，we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning.Besides，we will climb the Oriental Pearl T
18、ower in the afternoon，from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.On Jan.24th，we will take the high speed railway back to Liling. How about the plan for your winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Wang Ming 【参考范文】 Dear Jack， How is everything going? Im writing to tell you
19、 a piece of good news. Last night，my parents told me that they were going to visit Guilin with me during Spring Festival.I was so happy，because it has been such a long time since our family last went out together.I started to make some preparations.I searched the information about Guilin，such as the
20、 famous tourist sites and the delicious food.And I learned a lot from othersexperiences.I couldnt wait to go there and experience the unique scenery and culture. Would you like to come together? Im sure well have great fun. Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1： That day, h
21、is life changed.He started sharing his story with others and soon, he found himself being a popular spokesperson for the prevention of suicide.His remedy for preventing suicide was simply this.He said, “If you want to end your life, your last few hours should consist of doing five small acts of kind
22、ness for other people.It will change you and youll wake up to the goodness in this world and decide that you want to live.” Paragraph 2： Later, he enjoyed great success in his work and life.He finally landed a job in a company with an income of about $4，000 a month.He also helped a girl who wanted t
23、o commitsuicide and finally got married to her! Now he has a happy family of three all because of the small act of kindness he showed to the little oldlady.He finds himself living with more purposes and living a happier life than before.Whenever possible, he will reachoutto those in trouble in life.
